Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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swetha

@swetha25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Wow...amazing. These short stories are beautiful

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LIONHEART

@LIONHEART

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#812

OMG!! Do you know how amazing a writer you are!

If i were to die today i would do so happily knowing i have read your wonderful stories written in an amazingly unique style. You have managed to weave your stories from sad and agonizing to funny moments of the serial and helped us make new beautiful memories.

I salute you and your story writing skills and wonderful imagination. Looking forward to the next one from you!

More power to your pen!!

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#813

That's such a deserving ending for this One BIGG Shot! 👏

I loved the second section this time, Anjali nervous and tensed if Arnav will be able to stop Khushi or not. And NK was as ever hilarious. I just love him. Cute Hindi breaker 😛

The play was really too well. Heer and Ranjha, modified Ranjha part by Arnav in the middle was perfectly awesome. That's was so lovely reading him quoting his heart words into the act and doing it all out of the act things, startling Khushi as well as Heer she was enacting 😉

And then the confession. Can his confession get any sweeter? I just loved it. So true and so unwelcoming though! He's just so sweet. 😃

And NK, the perfect moment popper. Ruined such a cute romantic moment. But anyways loved seeing ASR restless to make his family marry him and Khushi in the week rather than next year. 😳

I was really shocked when I noticed that Akash wasn't startled seeing Arnav and Khushi intimate. I very well remember the Haldi scene of the show 😉

This really is a wonderful shot. Enjoyed reading it. Will be waiting or the next one! 🤗

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#814

I loved the confession from both the sides.. Both were in love with each other for so long..😳 Im glad alls well and now their marriage..

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

What a fitting ending to one of the most wonderfully written Os's in this section!

Who doesn't love a scenario where our Arnavji tries to woo his angelic lady love Khushi in the most romantic way possible. And we got this through out most of this OS so thank you Smita for indulging us and gifting us with this super awesome OS.🤗

Arnav's own way of modifying Ranjha's dialogues and baring his heart and soul to Khushi was just so endearing and magical. In turn, Khushi's baffled state and her own way of inventing creative dialogues was just the most adorable sight ever and I say sight because I imagined every single frame ofcourse. What followed got better and better with their heartfelt confessions and Arnav trying to get them married at the earliest convenience possible deciding to set their families straight right away. What more can I say I think the following sums up my feelings about this OS quiet well!

PS. Thank you for the notifications and posting the sections Rashmi! ❤️

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: LIONHEART
OMG!! Do you know how amazing a writer you are!
If i were to die today i would do so happily knowing i have read your wonderful stories written in an amazingly unique style. You have managed to weave your stories from sad and agonizing to funny moments of the serial and helped us make new beautiful memories.
I salute you and your story writing skills and wonderful imagination. Looking forward to the next one from you!
More power to your pen!!

Stay with me, my darling Lionheart! If you are with me, then my pen will definitely be more powerful.🤗

A toast to four years of writing & reading together, my Lionheart! May we have many more years together!🤗

Smita

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#817

Read all parts. Beautifully written. The best part is the flow is so beautiful, that I can actually picturize what I am reading. Super. Waiting for the next one 😊

Hope it is coming soon Smita!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#818

This is simply superb...thanks for the PM

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: hydsri
Read all parts. Beautifully written. The best part is the flow is so beautiful, that I can actually picturize what I am reading. Super. Waiting for the next one 😊

Hope it is coming soon Smita!

Next week, my dear.😃 It is called An Unwanted Wife.😉

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#820

Originally posted by: smitar

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="5" color="#ff0000">Next week, my dear.😃 It is called An Unwanted Wife.😉</font>

Can't wait