||Destiny's game||- Taarey SS

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SHORT-STORY

Hello to my dear readers. So, as I mentioned in my pm, I am giving you all an os on my first achievement on IF. but, now i am up with an ss.

This ss is mostly non-realistic. It's going to be mysterious and romantic.

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Chapter-1

"Where is she?" said an over-angered Rey. It's been 3 hours since she had went for shopping. He was not at all in a mood to go for shopping. After all, when the things can be bought within few seconds, without even wasting a single penny, that too her favorite, what is the need to go out in such a hot weather and burn her beautiful whitish skin?



Suddenly, he heard the door bell ring. While sitting in his bed room, he could guess it was his lovely wife. He played his hands in air for a second and released a wave. The waved travelled automatically towards the main door, and it clicked open. There, his lovely wife was standing all draped in a lemon coloured saree. He can see that! How much he wanted to get her in his arms the very moment. Her smooth white skin, inviting him. His love for her always grew more and more.







On the other hand, his lovely wife, Taani, was not at all surprised by this. She let go off the heavy shopping bags, which she had carried. They, by some invisible energy started floating in air, and came to halt on their correct place, bedroom. She followed the hand bags, which showed her the way to her husband, though it was not needed. She already knew where her husband would be.



As soon as she entered her, oops, their room, she could feels someone wrap his arms around her waist. She knew, only one person can do this dare, when she is all exhausted by her shopping. Turning on her heels, she faced her husband, who was busy nuzzling his nose in the crook of her neck. "So, now are you done with your shopping?" asked Rey, completely lost in her fragrance. "Yeahh.." a little moan escaped her mouth, as he bit her on her exposed shoulder. Urgh! This should not have happened. She mentally cursed herself. Her husband was completely charged up now. Within a second, she was on their bed. This was not some human speed, this was something else.




"Rey, stop. Its paining." She said, as he came over her, forcefully. His senses were far away from him. He slowly looked up to face her. She was in pain. He was guilty! His eyes brimmed with tears. Again a wrong move! Taani, scolded herself in her mind. She cupped his face and softly said," Rey, don't be guilty. It's not your fault. Even you cannot help it. You are like us, it's just you have some other natural powers. Its okay!" "No! It's not! I always end up hurting you. Remember our first night? I hurt you badly. I cannot take this anymore. Why did you agreed to marry a monster like me? Why don't you leave me?" Rey said, all in tears. That was enough for the girl, who laid under him. How on this Earth can he say anything like this? "Mr. Reyaansh Singhania, you have no frigging right to say anything like that. I am your wife. I accepted to marry you, because, I love you, not to leave you. Get that? Why can't you just shut up? Always have to speak something like this! Darn! You have spoiled my complete mood. How are you going to make up for it?" completed Taani, all the more exhausted, angry on our poor Rey.



"I want to make you mine" said Rey, with complete love dripping from his each and every word. "I am all yours." Taani said with same passion. But, they both knew that destiny was not on their side. They were craving for each other's love. But, none could do anything.


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So peeps, here I end the first part of my SS. If you guys liked it, like it and comment please. If not, you can read it. If wanna criticize, go ahead man. If do not want to comment, then it's cool. I am okay with everything.

Enjoy reading.

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...Rhythsy... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dearoo !!
Lovely TS!!

Bt lil confusing!!

Pls update soon!!

Thanks a lot 4 pm!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start but bit confusing too

continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pm me gal
Kaise super natural powers??
Poor taarey
Awesome concept
U can turn thisbinto a ff if u wajt
Would be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww awesome concept...
Nice start...
Rey vampire hai kya?? 😆
If yes am really very excited for next chapter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow its vry lovely yaar
First congo for becoming groupbie 🥳
Mei groupbie baan gayi par patana nahi kab mene aajh dekha 🤣 😎
Confusing wat natural power ??
Bt loved every bit of it ❤️
N update fast fast 😃
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Edited by ..AmRit.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Luvly but I find
Not proper end I mean
Thr are many question wht
Is rey problem end is not proper
N all anyways thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mast cncpt👏 bt'll agree wid others a bit cnfsng😕
mast chptr 😊
cnt soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsmmm strtng
der craving s swn vry wl
soo nice
lvd it
thnks 4 pm
plz mak it a ss
sry
cnt lik
mera netaaj totol se v slow hai

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