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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome update
flashback part was superb
both taarey fall for each other at first meet
taani was blushing on rey's intense gaze awww
rey save taani
n the they ask each other their name was really cute
n then in present taarey romance love it
waiting to read is mai aage kya hoga
update next part soon


Thanks, dear.
hahaha. update is going to be up in sometime.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: jallwa_taarey

Wow this ss seems interesting

Chapter one : what is rey
Ohh thy are married
Chapter two : I think maybe rey is werewolf because he smelt taani scent so am just guessing
Ohhh there romance was cute

Loved it

And please do give character sketch
Thank you from the PM
Do update soon whenever your free but do update soon


Thanks, di.
hahaha. you will see that soon. Keep on guessing.
Done. Update is on its way.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: piki_happiness9

wow amazing update
Really want to know what rey is ?
u beautifully portrayed their love
Good job dear
Waiting for another update
n thanx for the pm


Thanks, dearo.
You are welcome.
Thanks for the appreciation.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.

awesome update...loved it too the core...their first meet was so lovely.

and then bathroom romance was nice...

I am glad to see your comments on my works.
Thanks so very much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: nishu98

Awsm update
Loved fb part
How rey saved taanin d love at first sight loved it
Wow bathroom romance
Update soon n rey kya banaigi google mei search karde
Update soon


Thank you!
Update is on its way.
And, finally I decided Rey ko kya banana hai. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: premlata

Love and cute update

Love it
Flashbacks was awesome
Update soon and yes plz update Character sketch

thanks, di.


Originally posted by: chand91

sooo awsmmm prt dr

lvd it
thnks 4 pm

thanks, di.

unres soon, sun.

Originally posted by: raddhi

Flash back was superb I luv
How taarey was thinking abt
Each other n how thr were looking
At each other n present bathroom
Romance was nice thanks for PM

I really love your comments, di.
thank you!


Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju

intresting stry, i accidly got hold of dis stry bt m glad i did.. Unpredictable cnspt is wht makes it beautiful, taarey meet was really gud. Want to no furtur, plz pm me too when u update d next part

you know what? I loved your comment. Thanks so much.


Originally posted by: taashareyam

Awesome update
loved the flashback part
it was lovely
update soon

yeah want a character sketch
don't u dare say sorry to me

Thanks, kannnu.
oops, I wont.


Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha

intersting story...

just read both parts...
love this concept...
taarey truely love each other...
love taani's dresses...
flashback's are superb and love taarey's POV...
updt soon and plzz pm me...

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: deepkriti

nice update dear

but abhi bhi confused ho
update soon😊

hojayenge sarey confusions door. you gotta wait a little while.

Originally posted by: cuppypie121

superub update

taarey in love at first sight
continue soon

Thanks, race track.

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

Mindblowing...

Cutest n sweetest
Love @ first sight...
M loving it...
Their romance was Blushing
Update soon

Hima di, thank you so much to comment on my story.
Thanks again.
yeah. doing it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: skfirdous

awesome update...loved it too the core...their first meet was so lovely.

and then bathroom romance was nice...
update soon


Thanks so much, dear.
Yeah, doing it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48



Chapter-3

Walking down the streets of Forks, I could not help, but, think of my prince charming. Yes, I am back to my place. I am back to the place where I belonged, forks. It's been one week since I met him. His mere thought gave me Goosebumps. My cheeks would automatically turn into deep shade of red. Sometimes, it was hard to understand that my cheeks tuned red because of cold breeze of forks or him.

I stepped inside my house. Oh! I forgot to introduce myself, right? I am Taani, Taani Shekhawat. From my name you can guess that I am from India. Yes, I belong to India. But, Forks is the place where I belong. How? Well, it's because, after I was born, my dad got a transfer here. Automatically, mom and I had to accompany him. Here, we got this house. This house is not such lavish. It has wooden flooring with faint brown walls. Sofas were set in left side. Before them was a small, rectangular structure, in which, bonfire was lit. Above it, a huge 90s clock hung. It was a gift given to my father, by his father.

As I stepped in, I realized, I had forgotten my mobile at Vague's cafe. Oh! I forgot to tell you. I work in Vague's caf. It is owned by Mr. Vague. Well, don't go on name. the person is good at heart. That is what we need, right? Grabbing my coat and bag, I rushed out. Again, the cold wind gushed towards me. Sometimes, it becomes hard walking the streets of forks, that too, at such a time. My wrist watch gave me a clear view of it striking 9:57. I could care least. Right now, I had to reach the caf.

*Ting!*

I exited the caf, after thanking Reid. She was still there. Today, it was her duty to stay up late. And above all, her brother had a car. So, why should she bother? Never the less, I paced towards my house as fast as I could. It was not at all safe to stay out at such time. I looked at my watch. It was showing 10:27. I still had to travel for another 15 minutes. Above all, I had to pass his area. With his, I mean, Abraham. The leader of the group, "Sigel" he was the gunda of that area. All the smuggling, scams were related to him. He is a womanizer.

I took a deep breath, as I entered the devil's den. The street was same as he was. Deadly. I had to move out as soon as possible. My movements automatically got faster.

"HEY YOU!"

My heart stopped working. I could not feel my breath anymore. My mind went blank. My body refused to walk. My feet went numb. Suddenly, someone held my wrist. I closed my eyes in anticipation. I slowly opened my eyes, only to find myself being circled by those dicks. The person, correction, prick, who held my wrist, was Abraham. My neck refused to turn around. My sense were not working. I cursed them. I shouted at myself, mentally. I tried to gain my senses, but, all in vain.

"Ouch!" I was jerked back. My back collided with a monster. I could feel his lustful breath on my shoulders. I doomed myself for wearing an off shoulder top. My eyes, undoubtedly, brimmed with crystal clear liquid. I could feel my vision getting blurry. Mom, dad, no one, no one was there with me. I just longed for my prince charming.

"Leave her!"

I can easily identify that voice. It was the voice, that, I can give my heart for. The voice, which has the power to calm my unsteady nerves. But, is it real? If it was just my illusion, then what? I feared to look in the direction, from where the growling sound came.

"And, who are you? Her boyfriend?" Abraham enquired.

"YES!"

WHAT THE f**k? This was limit. I am not committed. I only belong to my prince charming. If not him, than, no one. I tried concentrating on the male figure standing in dark. But, my tears became a huge wall of china. They were eager to not to let me see the face of the very person, who claimed me as his GIRL FIREND. I felt Abraham's grip loosen on my wrist. Without wasting a minute, I ran towards the male figure. I know, one side, I am hating him, but, somewhere in my heart, I could feel he was him. As I reached near him, he held my palm, and carefully, moved me behind his back. My senses started working. I could smell the same cologne. My hands, naturally, went on his shoulders. i cling on him. My head rested on his back. That was really stupid of me to do that. but, hey, come and be in my situation.

"LEAVE!" He roared. My grip tightened on his shoulder. As is he felt the jerk in my body, obviously, I had plastered my body to his, he brought his left arm up, and, took my left palm in it. Next what happened, blocked my senses. A sweet feathery kiss was planted on my knuckles. I could not help, but, lean more closer to him. He must have smiled, I mentally thought. He then placed it on his waist. Oh no! this should not happen. I could feel his toned under my palms. The fabric, which was merely able to hide his perfect adorable body, gave me complete access to his six packs. Umm, maybe, eight? Who cares?

"Move all. FAST!" I heard Abrahams shriek. He ran back.

"Are you okay, Taani?" He turned. I saw his face, finally. Love, the only emotion evident in his eyes. I belonged to him, I learned that very moment. His hands encircled around my waist. My arms went to his shoulders, and, held his neck from back.

"I love you," the only lines that escaped my mouth. Before I could hear his reply, I cared least about it, as I knew my answer; I slammed my lips on his. They were not rough; they were soft, gentle and pleasurable. I just wanted more and more. I felt his lips curve into a smile. He responded. I know, my move must have shocked him. But, I do what I want. That's all! Our lips moved in sync. I bit his lower lip as he continued teasing me, I groaned. My super mind clicked with an idea. My hands travelled down to his butt. I dug my nails in his ass. He opened his mouth in anticipation. I entered his mouth. My hands still remained on his butt, caressing them. Our tongues intertwined. As I felt short of breath, I clutched his butt again. He left my lips, but, as thought, moved towards my chin. Planting a chain of wet kisses, he moved towards my cleavage.

"Rey," I moaned.

|Rey's POV|

I could feel my love in danger. As thought, she was in danger. i growled at them. Taani, without wasting a single second ran from them. she clinged to me. My eyes turned red, as I told them to leave. They left. I could sense taani's fear. I bought her palm near my lips, and kissed it. I could feel her shiver. She leaned more into me. I turned towards her, while asking, is she okay? But, her answer completely shocked me. I was just digesting the first shock, when, I got another to add the spice, obviously, a sweet spice. I smiled at her attempts to my lips parted, but, failed miserably. Um, I was busy tasting her. She felt so tasty. Nothing can be better than this. While I was busy in thinking about her lips, my angel turned into a wild tigress. She bought her hands down to my butt, and next, clutched it hard. Owe! It hurt. But, it did not matter. She won, that matters. As she felt out of breath, she again did the same thing. Oh my! My angel is quite a girl. But, leaving her was nowhere in my intentions. I placed open mouth kisses till her cleavage. She, as prolepsis, moaned. It was then when I realized our surrounding. Without wasting a nano-second, I lifted her in bridal style. She just snuggled more into me. I walked towards my Veyron, Bugatti.


I placed her on the passenger seat, and quickly gave a peck on her nose. She, just blushed. "Don't blush baby. Else, the consequences can be pleasurable for us, but, entertaining for others. And, I am in no mood to entertain anyone, except you," I finished. She just kept her legs inside in a seductive way. It was getting too hard for me. I walked to my side, and settled myself on driving seat. "So, long drive or your place?" I questioned my lady love. "I will go for first option, above that, your place at the end," she said, while keeping her arms around my neck. How much I love this trick of hers. "As you say, miss," I replied, giving a peck on her cheek. I started the engine, and we flee away as fast as possible. Forks can be the place for long drives. The wind, the greenery, the non-existence of sun, I just loved it. Though, I am not a vampire. While I was busy in my thoughts, I felt a weight on my thighs. I got startled to find my lady love sitting just before me. "Baby, what are you trying to do?" I questioned her. She frowned. "Rey, darn it! You are so un romantic. f**k you." After her scolding session, she started moving towards her seat again, but, only if I allow. I placed my left hand on her belly, and, bought her back close to the side mirror. She smiled evilly. I, on other hand, caressed her thighs. Her smirk was replaced by shock. Now, my face adorned that evil smirk. Oh! How much I love to see that expression of hers. " You sure you want to f**k me?" I asked grinning evilly at her. Her shorts, merely reached her mid thighs. It was a profit for me. Bingo! She just kept on blushing, her hands reached my hands. She stopped me from doing so. I looked dejected. But, to my surprise, she moved them in her off shoulder, royal blue color top. While my hands were busy exploring her soft skin, she dug her face in the crook of neck, and said, "Yes, are you?" I was on ninth cloud.

*~*~*

"So, here I welcome my lady love to her boyfriend's bungalow," completed Rey, in a reporter like tone. on the other hand, Taani was completely mesmerized by the view in front of her. There stood a huge palace in front of her. Fountains, gardens, everything was there. Cars were lined up. Bugatti, Lamborghini, Rolls-royal, Porsche, and many more. A huge mansion, with a huge, beautiful gate. This was just like a dream come true for her.

"Lets get going," Rey said. Taani's nod was merely visible. She was awestruck by the current beauty in front of her. "Baby. I know it's beautiful, but not more then you," complimented Rey, in his own way, though.

*~*~*

"Mr. Reyaansh Singhania, do you even remember you have got a wife? I have been calling you since long, but you, you are too busy in your football," growled Taani. She had been calling Rey in kitchen for some help, but, he was too busy in his football cum their first meet.

"Arey jaan, you know I cant miss FIFA," I said in a you-know-it tone. She just shook her head.

"What is so good in it? Tell me? All these idiots run behind a ball, and kick each other. Slangs are used like a penny used for toffees. And, look at that guy! Can't he see that guy is having the ball? Ah! See, he got hurt," Taani kept on going. Rey on other hand, just sat beside her and said," let me explain you this game. Okay?"

*~*~*

So, here I end my update. I am going to reveal everything, but, let me first show how they met. Btw, don't think ki Rey ne I love you boldiya. Wo bhi baaki hai abhi. Thoda wait karo. Anyways, I added this FIFA part, cause,

1. I had to show something in present.

2. I love football.

3. I added the car part because, I am crazy behind cars. I am a complete tomboy. So, you guys can expect that from me. But also expect mystery and romance.

Ps. Anyway, that is all for today. Also, I have kept res on many updates. Even, I did not commented on many stories. Guys, I am sorry for that. But, I have my own reason to it.

Also, character sketch will be given my the characters themselves. You will get to know more and more in the updates. Okay?

also, the banner is not so good. Do ignore it! If anyone can help, let me know. please.

ENJOY!

*~*~*

Edited by amrit2000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awsm dear
Aww taani waiting for prince charming
N rey saved taani n phele claim kardiya ss gf wah n kiss was really not expected bt loved dere hot romace
Me too a tomboy 😉
Update soon n loved fb part 😊
Edited by nishu98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Gosh...
Hot hot hot
Kya naughty update tha
I loved it so much...
Please update another such update soon

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