The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148

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johngalt

@johngalt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Awesome!! Wow!!

God Bless!! Thank u for writing such a beautiful story!!

Can't wait for the story to unfold...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Late ... as usual ...

Disha ... firstly here's a 🤗 ... thankyou for a fabulously written chapter ...

I see all the hidden talent coming out slowly ...

You have nailed the dynamics of their relationship so well ...

The attraction between them is still so palpable ... yet the memories of the

past they shared was enough for the hostility to resurface towards each

other ... 😆

He realises that they had broken up in not very cordial circustances and all

because of him ! wonder what his efforts are going to be in making up with

the lady he has not been able to forget about in the past so many years ... 😆

"The very first time he had seen Khushi he had felt this incredible pull towards her, something which he himself did not want to acknowledge

at the time but she had become a lasting fixture in his memory and spirit. And today she was right here and the silence between them was distressing his senses..."

Thank you Disha ... ⭐️

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Nice SS

Plz add me to ur PM list

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Disha, You write like a pro!

Really wonderful to see such a good one that too on debut!

Loved it.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Nice update. Arnav broke Khushi's heart, and I guess he still has feelings for her. He loves her? I don't think so; there is still time for that.

That was extremely stupid of Khushi. First, she got out of the jeep in the dark and lost her way. Second, she tried to scream when she saw the smugglers.

You have written a very nice chapter. I enjoyed reading it.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Great beginning Disha..u should write more as writer..

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#437

thosa sa editing on page 62 😊

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Awesome update

Extra-ordinary chemistry btw Arnav and Khushi

Glad that both still have feeling for the other

Waiting for the next one

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Could feel the chemistry between them! Congrats on your debut, hats off to you for taking this effort! It was such a wonderful chapter, that had such a build up to the story!