Arshi Drabble series: Navarasa (Completed) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
nice one
we call it as alputam -
wonderful one indeed
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Loved your concept!! 😊

Loved all three Rasas!!
Have you learnt any claasical dance? Bharatanatyam?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hasya Rasa... With Khushi's unleash imagination anything is possible. Where diversification for her mean "Raizada Mishthan Bhandaar" what would she imagine if Arnav would have told her about expanding his expertise??? Arnavji Khansam (chef) 😉
Adbhuta rasa... Wonder... Yeah I wonder Khushi --- mermaid???
Know you let my imagination go zooo...

Can't wait to read what on you list next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Arnav is missing his lovely n dear wife so much that he is dreaming of her with open eyes in broad day light as a bewitching ethereal mermaid in deep sea. His imagination is very creative n he is totally head n heal in love with Khushi Raizada. That's sweet n romantic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely, he sees his wondrous love everywhere
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one's for V3Od for making me update sooner😛

Shanta


Arnav cut the engine of his yacht and propped himself on the deck. Waves splashed around.


"Aarav wishes to fish in the evening", Khushi said, leaning across his shoulder.


He did not respond.


"He hasn't had a nightmare since a week."


Again, no reply.


"School has been a regular topic in his talks nowadays, isn't it? I'm glad that he is ready to return."


This time he looked at her. "My son will never have to go through it again."


She nodded. "Jijaji called. The verdict is out. The criminals will forever remain behind bars."


The ocean was finally calm.



Explanation:

Meaning- Peace

Colour- White


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Edited by Eccentrica - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Beautiful the calmness was for two oceans one visible and one came for Arnav with the verdict news.

How can you doubt your creativity to state something meaningful in fewer words. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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perfect, i love both ur oceans, one of water and one who is always stoic and determined and finally at peace ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

The Rasa itself contains Roudra rasa within it.

The ocean may seem calm and quite at the surface but no one knows which kind of hurricane it carries underneath. Similarly Arnav may seem calm here but there must be a tornado running inside him even remembering that someone tried to harm his son
Edited by praj.shrish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful... Everything is calm finally... Loved it...

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