Arshi Drabble series: Navarasa (Completed) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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He really loves her, doesn't he? You have been so successful in capturing the depth of his adulation for her in four simple lines. Kudos to you for your amazing work on our favourite couple. Looking forward for more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dint knew wat a drabble was!
And would know all d navarasa by d end of d story!
Will also b completely entertained and will b completely in splits when I get to know about things like Raizada Mishtan Bhandar!
What more do i need when i get everything in ur stories ;)
awsumm writings :)
dunno how u r portraying everything in such a short update .
Gud luck wid d next one :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Really cute! Thanks for the email.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
very very cute, lovely drabble 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Adbhuta


It was a need to escape the past, more so than his adventurous streak that brought Arnav to the deep waters of the Pacific Ocean. He knew the waters held mystical elements yet to be discovered by mankind.


Mermaids- there were rumors of the mythical species' existence and he was about to witness one.


She twirled her tail to turn towards him, and he forgot to breathe.


A vision in alabaster greeted him. Everything was exactly the same; the russet eyes, the pert nose, the long, cascading black hair.


Arnav saw himself staring at Khushi Raizada.


How was it possible?



Explanation:

Meaning- Wonder

Colour- Yellow


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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
amazing one
loved it
thanks for the mail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
nice :)
a mermaid in d sea , Dats actually a wonder ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Read Hasya and Adbutha...well written...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
That was adbhut!
He loves her so much, he sees her everywhere?
Very sweet one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Hasyarasa 😆 Seriously, raizada misthan bhandar?😆 Cute one!
Adbhuta rasa - I knew its meaning before even browsing but never had imagined it to be about mermaid 😃 Nice one!

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