Arshi Drabble series: Navarasa (Completed) - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was scary.
Was expecting it given the title, but still had me going What_the...
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Posted: 11 years ago
scary part
loved it
thanks for the mail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loving all the drabbles. Last one was scary!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was curious to see how you would incorporate Arnav and khushi into the bhayanaka rasa, kudos to you, your imagination just blew me away.

Can I add two more sentences to the story. I know you are supposed to finish it within 100 words, this is just to add spice to it.

She saw something trickling down from the corner of his eyes, it was not tear drops, but it was drops of blood. Then he gave her a big smile making his vampire teeth visible to her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh you do know how to send shivers down thru me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please please don't be so bhayanak
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Posted: 11 years ago
One word to describe this ras 'SACRY'
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was scary... Especially something like this happening to Arnav.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay what was that. Arnav ki bhatakti huyi aatma or Arnav ka bhatakta huya head. That was quite scary.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Vibhatsa


Khushi knew Shyam hated her for having chosen Arnav over him. "You shall regret it", he had said, but she did not expect him to do this.


Now she gradually slipped into the mass of insects which began to crawl all over her.


Fear, however was overpowered by disgust and she fought hard to escape from the vermin.


"Take that!" she plucked away a handful from her face and in a wave of revulsion swatted them against the nearest wall.


Her hand was now filled with a sticky yellowish green liquid which she believed was the insects' internals.


She gagged.



Explanation:

Meaning- Disgust

Colour- Blue


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