SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue - Page 41

It was simply awesome. The sense of need, belonging and love all combined so perfectly. A meeting after 15 years does not have an impact on the relationship which us the most beautiful part. Keep writing. Update soon. Lots of love xxx

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

What should I ask for more...? It was like I was dreaming...!

It was magical... He reached the place unwantedly but when he heard her voice, he realized it was SHE... Even without seeing her she realized it was his sanyukta!! His happiness was no bounds & here mine! 🤣

The way she placed her head on his chest to hear his heart-beat it was like serene for every heart who believes in 'true love' 😳

They realized their feeling without uttering any lovey dovey words it was bliss! They understood each other so aptly that word doesn't need to explain their feelings!! ❤️

Their kissing... You described it an amazing way that it's hard to elaborate! They made love that night, not because of physical intimacy but they were pouring their pain... Their togetherness after ages made them realized they need each other... Only in each other's company they will find their SOLACE!!☺️

Loved it from the core of my heart!! It was just like the way i always want to see them!! What should I say more, I think I should stop here!! Too much talking is not good!!😆

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

It was simply awesome. The sense of need, belonging and love all combined so perfectly. A meeting after 15 years does not have an impact on the relationship which us the most beautiful part. Keep writing. Update soon. Lots of love xxx

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Lots and lotsa love,

Aru :*

edited on pg.54

RES*** Dare you update before 25th! I will review all the chapters that day and you will update only after that!!

I don't think I can loathe myself enough for getting to ur updates this late everytime! 😭
I commented on the prologue and then I was emasculated enough by my laziness that's becoming lethal these days! 😭 🤣
GS had me hooked to it after the 23rd chapter n then 24th marked the end ofthe story.. i hope the chapter numbers are right!
Im so insanely ecstatic that I aren't as late as I was on GS! 🤣
Cutting my bakhwass here's what I hafta say about the story till date...

Gawd Arushi! Firstly I think I gotta address u as Arushi di!
So dear,
The way you penned ur prologue definitely had me anticipating for chapter 1 but then I already told u about my lethargic self so... 🤣
Four chapters n I must say u have everybody pulling up there socks for res-mess game as I call it every time u update!
The story... Ah! I agree that The fault in our stars by John Green, is definitely a read girl!
Talking about the story line, I suppose it is new to this forum but I relate it to one of my fav ffs in another forum n I must say that ur concept is definitely intriguing
Starting from the title till the precap ur story emanates a genius in every single word..
Do I really hafta talk about ur way with words dear?
Okay.. you are mind blowingly amazing at it!
Both of them need answers and they find solace in each other's embrace...
He left his escort job n she emancipated herself from her usual acquaint, drinks...
That was awesome.
Ur choice in quotes is also real good!
I had a real good time reading it!
Finally read all the chapters! *phew!*
I love how u dig into a situation or emotion n let us feel it but then u dont drag it too much cuz thats boring again!
Girl I have so much to say but blame my exams!
I promise with a comment longer than ur update after i finish my exams n take me measuring the length n then commenting! 🤣
To end my bakhwass n insane comment I'd like to say three words--> Hooked to heights!
N three more words,--> waiting for more
N four more words--> ASAP (these are four letters but I abbreviated it... lazinees u see! 🤣 )
N an oath to myself..
-->Dont let laziness take over u atleast at Aru Di's adda! I mean stories! 🤣
Hope u didn't doze off reading this 😳

Love,
Nikitha :)

arushi yet u not fail to weave the beauty ...eh i awaited fr this but my o my this was much more thn one could ask for...oh dear...
d way u described their mee
hus anxiety... her need...his answers...thn their embrace to d final end wid a hug...

i felt dreamy...couldn't have been better...
awww it was so perfect...
m sad this wud end sooner

unresed my comment on page 55

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--

Oh my gosh! What is this????
Already 4 chapters have been completed and here I was waiting for the updates?!!!!
Curse my lady luck for being unjust with me.
Uh! Well as you already know that I was busy with my exams so I wasn't able to read and review any of your works. Please accept my heartfelt apology and I promise to be punctual next time...
Now I proceed to read the story..

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So here is my chapterwise review..

CHAPTER 1

Now this certainly is what I was waiting for. A chapter so praiseworthy...
Personification of both Sanyukta's and Randhir's character was the best! They both might belong to different socio-economic status but their similarities were very well depicted.
Tch! Sanyukta has an orthodox family here as well. Poor soul...
Now Sanyukta certainly had a past that haunted her and made her so conservative. I loved this part...!!!(although I'm not a sadist)
Oh My Gosh!! Randhir had such a dreadful past... Where are you Arushi??? I wanna kill ya for being such a sadist!!!!
God! This girl definitely won't let Randhir live in peace... Me or Sanyu? xD
Uh! Well, I certainly am in love with this chapter. Both Sanyukta and Randhir had their fair share to a miserable childhood and had a tormented past...
Moi love ya for this chapter... :*

CHAPTER 2

Eeekkksss... SanDhir! SanDhir all the way!!!
Ahem! Ahem! Sanyukta and that too tequila- bottle- philic... Quite hard to digest, I guess..
Sanyukta's bond with tequila has been so awesomely penned down, that it seems as if they are soulmates. (I know that's impossible) Ahahahaa! xD They were until she met Randhir! :")
OMGeee... SanDhir!!! The two strangers merely had an eyelock and they had shared their deepest scars and remorseful secrets of life...
Baby I wanna give you a tight hug now.. You are definitely a genius with words. Thank you SO much :*
Jack Sparrow, eh?? Randhir baba ko tune sparrow kyun bana dia??? Ainvayi xD
Damnit! I'm dead!! SanDhir convo was so intriguing and escatic.
The aftermath of party, in the morning was genuinely splendid.
Moi loved this chapter more... Thenkoo, thenkoo! :*

CHAPTER 3

That's it!!!! Girl, I'm highly addicted to this story. I seriously am and I ain't joking...
I really wanna be a writer like ya, pweezz.. Be my teacher and guide me through... Aye! No! You are in a different league altogether! :D
Your description of the scenic beauty of the night, though an eerie one, was certainly marvelous.
Oh! So now once tequila-bottle-philic has become tequila-bottle-phobic. No wonder Randhir effect..
Love for machines here also... Ah! That's definitely like Sanyukta..
Woah! Both need jolts of electricity from the other... Moi love the track where it is leading to...

God! I'm operating from phone so couldn't write a longer review. Will review the chapter 4 shortly...

In hopes of loads and loads of update...
--With love
Kajal