SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue

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Hello everyone! I hope you are all in fabulous health! Thank you SO much for loving and accepting my previous work! Yeah, I know I am supposed be preparing for my entrance exams and stuff, but I just couldn't resist myself from writing about this idea! I've always had it in the back of my head for a very long period of time, but couldn't find two people about whom it should be written. Now that we all have the perfect muse to write about, SanDhir, the words came flowing incessantly to me and there was no way I could stop them. Sorry for this very long author's note! I present to you, with utmost excitement and humility,

WhenTheStarsGoBlue

Prologue

He, with an underprivileged boyhood leading to an atypical adulthood and she, with a sincerely frivolous girlhood, far astray from a serious, corporate adulthood first met when they are at the rink of adulthood and meet again when each is having a mid-life crisis. How did they meet the first time? Will they be the same when they meet again? Will their sensibilities for the other be the same when they meet again? Will they be the people that majorly change each other's lives?

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They lay next to each other on the satin sheets, facing the mirror on the ceiling, in one of the most costly hotels in the world, Intercontinental, The Grand. The hotel was her choice since he had no say in it. He was only bound to do what he had come to do. His job. But he was compelled to just lie still on the bed, let alone start his work. Since he wasn't getting started on any bit of it, he thought he might as well start a conversation, as they had been lying on the bed long enough for an awkward silence to develop. Only, no silence was awkward between them.

"Where do you go when the stars go blue?" he asked.

"I come to expensive hotels such as these and call people such as you," she answered nonchalantly.

"What about your family?" he enquired.

"I only have a corporate family, which has 50-odd nationalities and 60,000-odd members. There isn't exactly a motherly figure to look after me anymore."

"What happened to the Sanyukta I knew 15 years ago?"

"She got lost in the business web when she was still young. She never cam back because there was nobody like you to rescue her from the entanglements of that web."

"So you come to me when the stars go blue."

"You wish," she said with an amused yet disapproving smile.

As if pure, unadulterated intuition took over him, he bent over her and caressed his lips against hers. She propped herself up on an elbow and helped him start his work that ceased unpaid and without a flattering compliment, for the first time ever.


Always,
Arushi

Chapter 1, Page 16

Chapter 2, Page 34



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haw! I love the title, it sets the tone immediately. And the prologue is absolutely brilliant. It's intriguing and not giving anything away yet. Can't wait to read the next update.
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nice one dear . Continue soon
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wowww what a poetic start of an FF... but you made me wonder that who is that underprivileged boy? Is he Parth or Randhir? But since your title says SanDhir SS so I will go with it for sure... no.. no.. I have nothing against Parth or SaRth for that matter but I feel the chemistry between SanDhir is more oozing and more sizzling..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res!



-Edited-

Writing in this color because I know its your favorite!!

Aaroooshi!! Yay! Another story from you !!

This one sounds so interesting ! I'm dying to read more !

Update soon !!

Loads of Love
Kreeeti :P

Edited by Ms.P.K.Tunn - 11 years ago
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Arushi!!!! 🤗
Tada! d stalker..d analyst is here 🥳
immediately add me in ur stalkers list...😆
First when i read d title "when d stars go blue"...i didn't understand cozzz my little brain takes time to process such "marvelous " titles🤣
seriously Arushi..my vocab is definitely gonna improve reading ur works👍🏼
d prologue is terrific👏..okie now plz dnt give me "r u dumb luk" but wat xactly is Randhir's job there???😕...luks like we have to catch up on a lot of things in dis ss...n wait they met 15 years ago😛...then wat happened y did they spring apart???did they even luv each other???n wts gng on???
n here goes d sentence dat trapped me in ur SANDHIR land

"What happened to the Sanyukta I knew 15 years ago?"

"She got lost in the business web when she was still young. She never cam back because there was nobody like you to rescue her from the entanglements of that web."

"So you come to me when the stars go blue."

sooo for now lets end dis analyzing session..if u want more then u must start update soon😉
Love,
Harita
Edited by Anamika1309 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice.. LIKe it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres!!

Arushi dear...I just..omg

Oh wow!!! No words dear...I am completely speechless!!

That was sooo beautifully written. You write with such eloquence! I love your style.

You didn't even have to write a huge piece, just that little amount of writng captured all the emotions perfectly.

Come here now...lemme give you a virtual hug 🤗

It was just tooo good!! Keep writing more

Your now very smitten fan,
Vinu
Edited by missreddy7 - 11 years ago
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RES ki bahar! Yayayyy! xD
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Its awesome. Such an attractive title. Update soon...xxx

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