SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue - Page 42

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

RES!!! Dare you update before 25th! I will review all the chapters that day and you will update only after that!!


IpIp! Thank you for RESing after long xD
The next chapter is ready, but because you made such an earnest request, I shall not update! 4 days to go!!

PS. People, please read the above post xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
res.. Sorry to all the writers..
M feeling quite too lazy and tired to unres all my comments today...
I promise to unres all my comments within 1 or 2 days...😭😭
So, apologies for that...
_________________________________________________________________________

Unres...
...
I've been reading this ff since the beginning...
Such a unique concept..
It's quite a difficult task to think about such an out-of-the-league concept...
And it's even more difficult to implement it, to pen it down in such a fine way..!!
I don't know why, I don't really feel like reviewing it...
This fiction is above all that...
So much emotions, extreme depths of pain, hidden tears, mutual healings and what not..
Everything expressed in such an exquisite way...
You left me dumbstruck..!!!

Hats off to you for writing such a wonderful piece of fiction..!!! 👏👏 (And I really mean it)...
I can't thank you enough for this one..!!!


Love ya
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: barauni

I don't think I can loathe myself enough for getting to ur updates this late everytime! 😭 Niku! No, no! Don't say that!
I commented on the prologue and then I was emasculated enough by my laziness that's becoming lethal these days! 😭 🤣 Ahahahahaa! Don't let it get to you xD
GS had me hooked to it after the 23rd chapter n then 24th marked the end ofthe story.. i hope the chapter numbers are right! I'm afraid not. There were only 23 chapters!
Im so insanely ecstatic that I aren't as late as I was on GS! 🤣 Ahahahaa! Me too! xD
Cutting my bakhwass here's what I hafta say about the story till date...

Gawd Arushi! Firstly I think I gotta address u as Arushi di! Why di? :(
So dear,
The way you penned ur prologue definitely had me anticipating for chapter 1 but then I already told u about my lethargic self so... 🤣
Four chapters n I must say u have everybody pulling up there socks for res-mess game as I call it every time u update! Res-mess! Aahahaaa! Ive seen SO many on Secret Fantasies! <3

The story... Ah! I agree that The fault in our stars by John Green, is definitely a read girl! Isn't it? :")
Talking about the story line, I suppose it is new to this forum but I relate it to one of my fav ffs in another forum n I must say that ur concept is definitely intriguing Thenkoo! :*
Starting from the title till the precap ur story emanates a genius in every single word.. Thank you SO SO much! You made my day!
Do I really hafta talk about ur way with words dear?
Okay.. you are mind blowingly amazing at it!
Both of them need answers and they find solace in each other's embrace...
He left his escort job n she emancipated herself from her usual acquaint, drinks...
That was awesome.
Ur choice in quotes is also real good! Yeah? I love quotes! I feel like they flow in my body instead of blood xD
I had a real good time reading it!
Finally read all the chapters! *phew!*
I love how u dig into a situation or emotion n let us feel it but then u dont drag it too much cuz thats boring again! I was hoping somebody would notice that and I'm so glad that it is you! :D
Girl I have so much to say but blame my exams! No, no! You must study! :*
I promise with a comment longer than ur update after i finish my exams n take me measuring the length n then commenting! 🤣 Ahhahaa! Longer? Let's see! xD
To end my bakhwass n insane comment I'd like to say three words--> Hooked to heights!
N three more words,--> waiting for more
N four more words--> ASAP (these are four letters but I abbreviated it... lazinees u see! 🤣 )
N an oath to myself..
-->Dont let laziness take over u atleast at Aru Di's adda! I mean stories! 🤣
Hope u didn't doze off reading this 😳

Love,
Nikitha :)


I loved your 3 and 4 word pointers! Thank you SO much for commenting in spite of exams! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey! Please tell me your name! And unres soon! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue


Hey! Please tell me your name! And unres soon! :D


Hi.. M Kirti... 😊

Actually, I'd like you to go through this link just once... 😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4012485

And ya, I've started commenting since a week now..
I got free from my xamz yesterdat night... These DU people, I tell you..😆😆

So, was kinda very tired... A lot of comments res..
Will unres all my comments today... 😃😃
It's just that this ff is awesome, and I didn't feel like commenting just "nice update" on this.. 😛

I've a lot more to say..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

arushi yet u not fail to weave the beauty ...eh i awaited fr this but my o my this was much more thn one could ask for...oh dear...
d way u described their mee
hus anxiety... her need...his answers...thn their embrace to d final end wid a hug...

i felt dreamy...couldn't have been better...
awww it was so perfect...
m sad this wud end sooner


Gunn! I'm so glad to see a comment from you! :D
This has to end because the central idea of the story has been conveyed!
Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kirtiarora111


Hi.. M Kirti... 😊 Hi Kirti! :D

Actually, I'd like you to go through this link just once... 😊 Sure, I will :D

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4012485

And ya, I've started commenting since a week now.. Commenting where?
I got free from my xamz yesterdat night... These DU people, I tell you..😆😆 Ahahaha! I hate all people related to education xD

So, was kinda very tired... A lot of comments res.. Aww! No problem! :D
Will unres all my comments today... 😃😃
It's just that this ff is awesome, and I didn't feel like commenting just "nice update" on this.. 😛

I've a lot more to say..😊

Aww! Thank you SO much! Will be waiting! :D

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

res

will unres asap
-----edited----
Arushi di!
This was very GOOD chappy!
Loved it!
Sanyu had to become police so that Randhir could come!
Very much Sanyukta indeed😆😆😆

This was last second part😲
Will miss this SS

Write soon!

-In Hope Of More Such Stories
and Love
-Prachi😊

PS:Sorry to unres late


Hey Prachi! Thank you SO SO much! The central idea of this story has been conveyed, so I have to end it! Thank you again :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue



Gunn! I'm so glad to see a comment from you! :D
This has to end because the central idea of the story has been conveyed!
Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! :D



m glad i could experience something so precious...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anyania

Res
unres...
Woah! It was simply awesome. Their interaction after so long, eagerness to be with each other, their pain from the past life still moving on seeking answers for their endeavour and curiousness. Inspite of enervating each other, they became each others' strength. Wow.
*"Listening to his heart beat reminded her that she was alive and had to give love and life a chance. If not for herself, then for him." *"It was serene, yet restless; fervent, yet soft; sated, yet hungry."so beautifully described. U r a beautifier and it reflects in ur work. I hav become a fan of urs.
Well, i m sad that this is the second last part. But, everything has to come to its end. So , eagerly waiting for the next one. Update soon. Waiting...


Hey! Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :*
They enervate each other? What makes you feel so?
Beautifier? :")
The next one is out after the 25th :D


Edited by PrussianBlue - 11 years ago

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