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Posted: 11 years ago
res
will unres asap
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Arushi di!
This was very GOOD chappy!
Loved it!
Sanyu had to become police so that Randhir could come!
Very much Sanyukta indeed😆😆😆

This was last second part😲
Will miss this SS

Write soon!

-In Hope Of More Such Stories
and Love
-Prachi😊

PS:Sorry to unres late
Edited by Prachijainn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..loved it!!
Dey met aftr so longg...hayeee wat a blisss!!
😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Prachi! Read jaldi, jaldi! I wait so badly for your reviews! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IheartDramione

*shrieks excitedly* I got a chapter dedication! Oh my! Yayayayayay! Waka Waka waka! Ole Ole Ole!

Well...now with the scary enthusiasm out of the way...I proceed. AWW! Naw, It does scare me a little but I love the enthu! :*

"And when the daylight comes, I'll have to go. But tonight I'm going to hold you so close. Because in the daylight, we'll be on our own. But tonight I need to hold you so close."

Wonderful quote! It sorta reminded me of the story of the Swan Lake. It is a song by Maroon 5! Swan Lake <3

Meeting one's life savior after fifteen years.

*gets goosebumps reading it* Ah! Finally the moment of reunion has arrived!

And then the way Sanyukta reached out to touch him...to reassure herself..that he was there for real...not a figment of her imagination. :")

Listening to his heart beat reminded her that she was alive and had to give love and life a chance. If not for herself, then for him.

*reaches for tissues and starts bawling* Why you cry, Sacho? No cry! :*

All the love, warmth and besottedness they felt were poured into the kiss. It was serene, yet restless; fervent, yet soft; sated, yet hungry.

Ah! Perfection. Your writing is captivating. Thenkoo so, so much! :*

Finally...after years of inner turmoil...both their minds are at peace.All questions answered...all secrets revealed. If there was one word to describe this chapter...it would be 'dreamy'. Really? Them webs you SO much! :*

*sighs sadly* Ending really is inevitable,na? Will miss this story. I have never seen this level of writing in our forum! Bah! Before I get too sentimental...I will shut up. Whaaa?! Don't say that! There are people here who write much better than I do! Swear!

P.S: Keep writing...keep rocking...and start another story ASAP. *at gun-point*
P.S.S: Also...let me borrow your awesome brain? Ahahahaha! Yes, if you can manage to get it out of my bony head first xD

Shit...I forgot I had res-ed! Oh, God dammit! You are SO adorbs :*

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my gosh! What is this????
Already 4 chapters have been completed and here I was waiting for the updates?!!!!
Curse my lady luck for being unjust with me.
Uh! Well as you already know that I was busy with my exams so I wasn't able to read and review any of your works. Please accept my heartfelt apology and I promise to be punctual next time...
Now I proceed to read the story..

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So here is my chapterwise review..

CHAPTER 1

Now this certainly is what I was waiting for. A chapter so praiseworthy...
Personification of both Sanyukta's and Randhir's character was the best! They both might belong to different socio-economic status but their similarities were very well depicted.
Tch! Sanyukta has an orthodox family here as well. Poor soul...
Now Sanyukta certainly had a past that haunted her and made her so conservative. I loved this part...!!!(although I'm not a sadist)
Oh My Gosh!! Randhir had such a dreadful past... Where are you Arushi??? I wanna kill ya for being such a sadist!!!!
God! This girl definitely won't let Randhir live in peace...
Uh! Well, I certainly am in love with this chapter. Both Sanyukta and Randhir had their fair share to a miserable childhood and had a tormented past...
Moi love ya for this chapter...

CHAPTER 2

Eeekkksss... SanDhir! SanDhir all the way!!!
Ahem! Ahem! Sanyukta and that too tequila- bottle- philic... Quite hard to digest, I guess..
Sanyukta's bond with tequila has been so awesomely penned down, that it seems as if they are soulmates. (I know that's impossible)
OMGeee... SanDhir!!! The two strangers merely had an eyelock and they had shared their deepest scars and remorseful secrets of life...
Baby I wanna give you a tight hug now.. You are definitely a genius with words.
Jack Sparrow, eh?? Randhir baba ko tune sparrow kyun bana dia???
Damnit! I'm dead!! SanDhir convo was so intriguing and escatic.
The aftermath of party, in the morning was genuinely splendid.
Moi loved this chapter more...

CHAPTER 3

That's it!!!! Girl, I'm highly addicted to this story. I seriously am and I ain't joking...
I really wanna be a writer like ya, pweezz.. Be my teacher and guide me through...
Your description of the scenic beauty of the night, though an eerie one, was certainly marvelous.
Oh! So now once tequila-bottle-philic has become tequila-bottle-phobic. No wonder Randhir effect..
Love for machines here also... Ah! That's definitely like Sanyukta..
Woah! Both need jolts of electricity from the other... Moi love the track where it is leading to...

God! I'm operating from phone so couldn't write a longer review. Will review the chapter 4 shortly...

In hopes of loads and loads of update...
--With love
Kajal
Edited by --ScarletRed-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Comment for three chapters on Page 52.

Sorry for the length.
Hope you dont mind xP
Chappie four comment later.
Sorry


I don't mind long comments at all!
In fact, I love those even more!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--

Oh my gosh! What is this????
Already 4 chapters have been completed and here I was waiting for the updates?!!!!
Curse my lady luck for being unjust with me.
Uh! Well as you already know that I was busy with my exams so I wasn't able to read and review any of your works. Please accept my heartfelt apology and I promise to be punctual next time...
Now I proceed to read the story..

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Kajal! No, not at all! Please don't apologize for exams! There are rude b*tches xD
Waiting for you to review :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: richurachna

awsome...loving the way u r writing,..all things seems to run in front of eyes


Hey Richu! Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TashaForever

TANEEEYYA! Inna vadda comment?! Yeh le mera dil! ❤️

I'm tired of Resing.
I really am :/
My Alulu's updating, and I cant comment?
No ways.
I was waiting till Saturday for vacations to start, but now that you have updated again, the guilt is killing me.
Having my lunch.
Gimme five minutes, then I will start reviewing each chapter as I read :'') Take your time, duhling :*
-----Unres----
*Rubs her eyes, exhausted from school*
*Should really bathe now, but cant resist reading* Go bath fast, stinky xD
*Warns Watson in advance, about her rant* A-n-d, Watson is ready B-)
*This one's going to be long :'')*
Okay so lets start xD
*Luckily I have commented for the prologue already*
*Sighs with relief*
Now lets really start xP AHAHAHAHAAA!
So for Chapter One...
WHAAADDD?
*Faints*
I told u. You get the most amzingly creative ideas i know. Don't lie so much, Tanu! It doesn't suit you!
Randhir is from an UNDERPRIVELEGED family??xO
*Unconcious*
Both were insanely intelligent, alone amongst friends and perfectly imperfect.
Wow :'') Lovely line xD Thenkoo! :*
Sanyu's family died :'( Poor baby girl :/ I know, right? :(
He jiggles around with four jobs??
A waiter at a restaurant xO Washerman?
Naaww.
MALE ESCORT?
*dead* Yes. It was that hard for him :(
My Randhir, only reserved for me, KBGs and Sanyu ofcourse.
So if you ever describe him on duty with another girl...make sure it is one of US...as in the KBGs or Sanyu. Ahahahahaa! He was with me all this time! Make sure Priri doesn't read this xD
OMGEEE.
That Kameena of an Uncle.
*Prays for that inhumane creature to be hanged*
So the truth was revealed...but seven years? :'( Sometimes, the most urgent truths take the longest time to be spoken :(
OH GOD.
STop the torture girl..Why you do dis :'(
My Randhir <33
Its okay baby, Sanyu ll be here for you :'') I had to do this because it was important to show the contrasts in their backgrounds! Sowwy! :*
Invitation huh?
For whom? For Kaustu's budday partaaay! xD
*Runs to read next chappie*
*Oh wait. I need to bathe*
*Will get back and move on to next* Did you have a bath? Good girl! xD
I am back!
SO on to chapter 2 :)

"I believe I rose in love the moment his eyes met mine across a hall of innumerable people and never wavered till our last breaths. Other people fall in love, but that day, he and I rose in love."

Looking into his eyes was like life, death and everything in between.

^^ What the Effing Eff?
Aru , how can you write so well. God damn it :/
These lines were beautiful :'') Thank you SO SO much, Tanu! I cannot hank you enough for taking the time to quote my lines to me! :")
People have pets, other people and phones for life companions, but Sanyukta had many a tequila bottle.
^^Whoa.
Tequilla-bottle-phillic?
ROFL!! xD
Royal Blue Jumpsuit???
I wannna see. I wanna see!! http://images.karmaclothing.co.uk/images/products/zoom/1371479141-36614400.jpg">Royal Blue Jumpsuit
Aahaa! Randhir is admiring the beauty, huh?
Your vocabulary!!
Godd Aru. I need to start taking classes from you. Then take, na xD

"Should I be scared or amused?" he quipped.

"You... s..s...should be drunk," she uttered, her words slurred.

Lol xP
I would be looking up the dictionary at the word ubiquitous, but luckily I read it in my school text book recently xP I love the word and use it in any place I can xD
"See, I don't know what you saw in me, but I know what I saw in you. Don't hold this against me but I felt that you need to be protected from all evil that is out there, starting from this tequila bottle."
^^Aawww <33
"Funny how I don't know your name and yet you have showed me where it hurts the most."
^^SanDhir. Whatever state they may be in, wherever they may be, whatever the situation may be, whoever they may be. They are simply SanDhir :'') I SWEAR!!!!!!!
There are only two important days in our lives. One is the day we are born and another is the day we know why. Find your reason for being born, Sanyukta."
^^I need coaching classes.
Please train me for free. Cannot afford ur high fees. Le le! :*
I know these phrases are completely thought of and written by you :'') And even if they aren't many of them are, and those which are not, have been used so aptly at the perfect places! Thank you SO SO much :* This one is a quote by Mark Twain! :D
And she would find a way to return it to him. Not because she couldn't accept what he had given her but because she didn't want him to walk down a painful road at her cost.
^^Wow. Simple words that beautify ur work :'')
I wish I hadn't started reading and reviewing ur updates today :/
Now I cant stop.
And I have so much work to finish before tomorrow :'(
Damn man. Ahahahahaa! Take it easy, baby xD
Chapter three...
I loved the quote in the beginning :'')
I should also mention, since I didn't before, that I so love all the titles of each chapter :* Thenkoo! *blush blush*
WHAADD?
2 years passed? O_o Yeah, man! I made time pass in this story so fast xD
Ahaa.
Life getting better :'') That it is :")
And he had always been grateful for the ray of sunlight that had been sent into his perpetually frosty life.
^^Speechless. Simply Subtly Charming :'') Thenkoo :*
"Beta, I know you want me to stay at home but your dad has to work so that you can have the prettiest dolls there are."
When did Randhir's childhood in show become Sanyu's in this fic? Wow. Intrasting. Ahahahaa! But did you get the idea behind that flashback?
"I don't want dolls. I want you."
^^Aww baby. I wish you were so sweet with randhir...On the show I mean. -_- I know, right?!
Oh. So both of them changed each others life for the better?
This is so damn beautiful :'') What happens between two people sometimes is so unpredictable! :")
Maybe she needed a jolt of electricity again. His electricity.
^^I guess she does need that in the show too. Poor Randhu has been getting so many, the poor lad's gone Love Struck Lovey Dovey Romeo. xP Totally, man! I feel so bad for him, sometimes! :(

"I want him. Find him from wherever you can or be prepared to be arrested for lack of cooperation with the police."

Oodi baba!
Aa su che?
How domineering xP And demanding!
Typical Sanyukta xP
Is it her though? I guess so.
Telling herself to be from the police? xP
ROFL. Ahahahaa! She is smart, isn't she? xD
Okay Now Alu, I told you the reason on WA.
I will read and review Chapter 4 on Sat. Yes, but I already saw a review for 4 xD
Sorry for the delay Watson,
I hope this comment satisfies you.
I love you <3 I love you more :*
Tanya
~SoulStalker

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Posted: 11 years ago
What should I ask for more...? It was like I was dreaming...!
It was magical... He reached the place unwantedly but when he heard her voice, he realized it was SHE... Even without seeing her she realized it was his sanyukta!! His happiness was no bounds & here mine! 🤣
The way she placed her head on his chest to hear his heart-beat it was like serene for every heart who believes in 'true love' 😳
They realized their feeling without uttering any lovey dovey words it was bliss! They understood each other so aptly that word doesn't need to explain their feelings!! ❤️
Their kissing... You described it an amazing way that it's hard to elaborate! They made love that night, not because of physical intimacy but they were pouring their pain... Their togetherness after ages made them realized they need each other... Only in each other's company they will find their SOLACE!!☺️

Loved it from the core of my heart!! It was just like the way i always want to see them!! What should I say more, I think I should stop here!! Too much talking is not good!!😆



Edited by Sunshine_Ami - 11 years ago

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