SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

*PM from Arushi*

SHOCKED! Itni jaldi!!!

*Starts reading. Wait. WAIT. WHAT! IS THAT A DEDICATION! OMG OMG OMG*

*Dies*

*Realises she's wasting time and gets back to this world and starts reading*

The stars were shining through the open French windows and the salty sea air was ruffling their hair. He was dressed in an indigo blue t-shirt, much like the color of the sky that night. She broke the hug to take in the humongous reality that this was. Meeting one's life savior after fifteen years.

^My god. This is so visually decriptive. I could absolutely see it happen right in front of my eyes!

Arushi! I was lost. I got lost while reading this. IDK it took me to some other world rey! :')

I was in some trance. And you know, I was listening to this song called 'Heaven' by Bryan Adams and I.OMg.I can't even. :'') I'm out of words rey Seriously. This couldn't have been any better.

Every paragraph is beautiful. You're great with expressing through words. I love this. Thank you so much for dedicating! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :)

Also, it is always the writer's choice when it comes to ending any write-up. So, I won't nag about this being the 2nd last chapter but yea, this short story is one of a kind. I haven't read any thing of this sort on this forum before! I wish this never ended. But endings are inevitable. Right Thank YOU, Arushi. Thank you so much for this piece of excellence. :)

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Sanchita

@IheartDramione

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

*shrieks excitedly* I got a chapter dedication! Oh my! Yayayayayay! Waka Waka waka! Ole Ole Ole!

Well...now with the scary enthusiasm out of the way...I proceed.

"And when the daylight comes, I'll have to go. But tonight I'm going to hold you so close. Because in the daylight, we'll be on our own. But tonight I need to hold you so close."

Wonderful quote! It sorta reminded me of the story of the Swan Lake.

Meeting one's life savior after fifteen years.

*gets goosebumps reading it* Ah! Finally the moment of reunion has arrived!

And then the way Sanyukta reached out to touch him...to reassure herself..that he was there for real...not a figment of her imagination.

Listening to his heart beat reminded her that she was alive and had to give love and life a chance. If not for herself, then for him.

*reaches for tissues and starts bawling*

All the love, warmth and besottedness they felt were poured into the kiss. It was serene, yet restless; fervent, yet soft; sated, yet hungry.

Ah! Perfection. Your writing is captivating.

Finally...after years of inner turmoil...both their minds are at peace.All questions answered...all secrets revealed. If there was one word to describe this chapter...it would be 'dreamy'.

*sighs sadly* Ending really is inevitable,na? Will miss this story. I have never seen this level of writing in our forum! Bah! Before I get too sentimental...I will shut up.

P.S: Keep writing...keep rocking...and start another story ASAP. *at gun-point*

P.S.S: Also...let me borrow your awesome brain?

Shit...I forgot I had res-ed!

Edited by IheartDramione - 11 years ago

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Comment for three chapters on Page 52.

Sorry for the length.

Hope you dont mind xP

Chappie four comment later.

Sorry

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Rachna

@richurachna

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

awsome...loving the way u r writing,..all things seems to run in front of eyes

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Why you do dis?

I went further to read Chapter four.

Couldn't resist.

Damn its Five Thirty neraly.

oh God.

*Hurriedly reviews*

Bwahaha.

The convo in the beginning xP

Ahaaa!

They meet <33

Aww dear.

Poor Sanyu.

And poor Randhir.

Thank god they met finally.

Sanyukta really became a corpse...Man.

How much one meeting can affect you :'')

And change you life.

And how entangling the web of business can be.

"She got lost in the business web when she was still young. She never came back because there was nobody like you to rescue her from the entanglements of that web."

^^I love this line!! Muaah!

"But that is no excuse to become a ghost. There was no way for me to come to you."

Absolutely true!

"What joy did my uncle find when he overpowered me when I was a mere child? I tried and tried but never found the answer. I left the job right after the day I met you."

Mission Successful Arushi Kotecha.

I will pay you, fine?

Just train me please.

Godd.

Your writing skills <3

*Awed*

I love Sanyu And Randhu in ur fic yaar. So So diff from show...both of them :')

So calm..so understanding.

She felt his pain man.

And he ...well I just :'')

Keep writing :*

Update only after tomorrow xP

Tomorrow night works.

Vacations start!!

I love you <3

Tanya

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: anjipankaj
i read all the updates in one go .it is just simply awesome.
chap 4- i liked the qoute very much and the best part the intimate moment shared b/w sandhir is just beautifully written.
chota sa update😭😭
i want long updates
do continue soon its just simply awesome

Hey, again! Thank you SO SO much for reading and commenting! :D

The last one will be the longest, I hope! :D

Thank you again! :D

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: gujjupari
Edited!

I really don't know what to say! Then don't say anything xD

Their meeting after 15 years of separation! You know stories like such (fictional or non-fictional) always make me believe in love! I don't know why... Makes me believe in 'Romeo-Juliet' wala love for some reason I believe it does exist and that is why I write about it :")

And the way you use the envirnoment around them to create humour (with technology) to sensuality (the breeze and all)... I can't even!!! Puurrrfect😃 THENKOO! :*

What else to say? This SS is coming to an end?!!?!? Nooo!!!! Where else am I going to speculate now?!?!?!😭😭 Ahahahaa! You're sad because you won't get to speculate? xD Just kidding! Yes, this story has achieved its goal and so, I have to end it :(

BTW: My theories were sooo off on a tangent Aru🤣🤣... I swear I made it more complicated and dramatic then it needed to be🤣🤣 Ahahahahaa! I really want to say "I told you so" but I won't xD

Update sooon! Yes, yes :D

PS: Year 2027.. My reaction when reading that was, "Shit! I will be in my early thirties by them... W*F?!?"
^^ I couldn't help it😆 Ahahahaha! I thought of the same thing too! xD I really can't imagine being older than eighteen! xD

Lots and lotsa love,

Aru :*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: myrahh
beautifully written arushi
deir hug was just perfect,devourng each others sorrow
its btilliant
thnx 4 d pm :)

Hey Myrahh! Thank you so much :*

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: IheartDramione
Res! I love stalking and reading everybody's comments!
*avoids frantic pepper spraying*

Your reviewers are also quite eloquent! 👍🏼 Myself included.😉

Let me get my thoughts in order...and then comment.

Also...*Nirupa-Roy ishtyle* NAHIII!! 2nd last chapter? Why you khatam the kahani so soon? *pouts*
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Updated next page...coz I am an forgetful idiot. *facepalm*

Ahahahaah! I saw your likes on so many comments, Sancho xD

Naw, nobody will spray that on you!!

Aww, that you are :*

I have to finish it because the main part of it is over :(