SanDhir SS - The Road Not Taken Epilogue Updated - Page 26

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tanda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

i was one of the readers who demanded a happy ending.. so thanks that finally they are with each other .. am kinda happy :)

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Kri

@kri1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

AWH! THIS IS SO PERFECT YAAR! I LOVED IT! AWH AWH AWH!

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Gul Mallik

@CleanBowled

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

hi there

i'm Gul and 2dy i jus hppnd 2 read ur ss

it was beautiful

i'm not a very emotional person never even been close to it - infact i hav been very cold n passive where emotions r concerned but ur ss the road not taken has given me the catharsis effect,

by the tym i finshd reading it i was crying.

u r fabulous!!!!!! keep writing.

regards

GUL

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Firstly me can never forget you Aisha! So don't even ask that question jaan!

Secondly Thank You for the PM, I had completely forgotten to comment on this! Sowwwy!!!

I had already read it, but forgot! *stoopid me*

Love is eternal! It is really isn't it?! I loved this epilogue Aisha! It was just beautiful and elegant just like your writing!!!

Please update your new SS! Eagerly waiting for that one!

Love,

Pari

PS: Coming to Winter Chills... I really don't know😆

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Vanii

@-Ms.Rocker-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Sorry. I found it finally.

I will read it rightaway. :)

Sorry for being super duper late.

Res.

Unres.

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I have read all chapters in one go.

Chapter 1 -

Sanyukta's emotions were so perfectly expressed. The words you choose to write are damn appropriate dude. Sanyu looks good in blue, she will never forget her Randhir's words. Made for eachother.

Chapter 2 -

OMG! When I read the fisrt line only I froze. His mother died? o.O

Gosh, that was a shocker.

That flashback was just A.W.E.S.O.M.E. The letter you wrote clearly depicts a mother's feelings towards a child. It was beautifully penned down.

Chapter 3 -

Misunderstanding. Gosh, that was so heart wrenching.

Parth is Randhir's bestie? Yeah I love it that way. I wish she had seen Randhir.

The last line literally got a tear to my eyes. :(

This was beautiful.

The flashback, the lioness and the lion! OMG! It was so cute! :D

Chapter 4 -

Sanyukta ko mai maar dalungi! ;/

I hope she has a good reason to leave Randhir alone. :|

Same flight? seats beside the other one? YEAHHH! This is going to be fun now! :D

Chapter 5 -

She confessed? YEAHHH.. YIPPEE.. You know I was jumping like an idiot :P

And the flashback was a cherry on the top. :D

They kissed. Aww. When I was reading that I had my hand under the chin and the other one on the other side of my cheek. :D Something you do when you are seeing something very romantic. :D This chapter is my Favorite! :D

Chapter 6 -

Two two kisses? Scratch that top one. THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAP NOW!

Aww. Sanyukta is soo caring. Thankgod the misunderstandings got cleared. :D

It was so sweet of you to dedicate it to soo many people! :D

Chapter 7 -

This was soo cute. Their date! :D

Loved this chapter.

The flashback was soo cute! (:

Chapter 8 -
I was like, "Marriage! Yeah, FINALLY!"

But you crushed my happiness.

What was in that envelope? Why did she tell she wont marry him? Another misunderstanding. :|

I have to jaldi jaldi. WAIT!

Chapter 9 -

I was soo angry on that girl for doing that to RAndhir. I was like, "I slap you Miss. Aggarwal. Mrrry him now!"

But wait, she's dead? How? Why?

Chapter 10 -

Gosh, I was crying when I was reading this chapter.

You ended it in a bitter note?

But its okay. I loved it! :)

Sometimes sad endings are required to show that life is not full of happiness.

After all, as they say " Just Because Love Has A Gap In It, It Does'nt mean that it can't be fixed. Love That is still in your heart can always be mended ..." - I love these lines. <3

Right now I am cursing myself for not reading this story before. It was beautiful Aisha.

I loved it.

You are really an awesome writer and please do keep writing.

I'd love to read your other works.

I loved this one. Hats off mann. :D

Love,

Vanii ^_^

Edited by -Ms.Rocker- - 11 years ago

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

u made me cry
lovely ending
awesome

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Sheetal

@Little_Muffin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

First of all,I am sorry from the bottom of my heart because I couldn't reply before.

A happy ending?? WOW!! This is something I loved with all my heart.

I read it way back..even before you PMed me but could reply at that moment.

But now I would.

Randhir..God! He lobes her sooo much.I just can't believe this..Loving someone so much that that person becomes the focal point of your life..Your entire life revolves around them..

You feel them..you miss them when they are gone way back..

I so Loved it.

His daughter's part was also nice.

Keep the good work up!

May god Bless you!!

Sorry once again..

Love,

Sheetal!