SanDhir SS - The Road Not Taken Epilogue Updated - Page 26 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm feeling so bad right now and u're the reason!!!😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing SS
the ending was quite emotional
beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago

I m at loss of words aisha
truly a heart touchng update
i m still fighting my tears
u have penned down their emotions beautifully
i wish she was alive
bt i knw 1 thing 4 sure that they will meet,so wat if not in this world bt dey surely will
true love is beyond life and time
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
And with this, a beautiful SS comes to an end!
Actually I am a sadist at heart, so I could cope with the sad ending!

And I am glad that you made the ending out like you wanted it to be! You have a fan right here!

"Humaari Adhuri Kahani"

^^ Beautiful lines! But if not in the physical world, one can always reunite in the another world that awaits! And with this belief, I loved this SS!

Randhir's undying love for Sanyukta was just beautiful! And Sanyukta's sacrifice was even more emotionally provoking!

Do write more! I would look really forward to it!

Love,
Pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful! I loved this FF! Do write more okay? Whats your name, btw?
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all the chapters in a go! I had been searching and searching..and that's when I came across this beautiful thing!

I would not say a word about chapter 1 or 2 or 6 or 8..
I would just say Chapter 10 was heart drenching..
I have this constant pain in my heart and I know it's not a cardiac attack..

I mean,I don't know..I am not in my senses..I have tears in my eyes..I could not even see properly what I am writing..but I have this strong feeling in my heart to write about it..

I Loath Sad endings..I hate them..as in the end .. I am either crying or I can't concentrate on anything else..

I have cried like this the last time when I saq Aashiqui 2..

Life isn't a piece of cake..It's harsh..it's cruel!
Oh God!
PM me if you write anything new!
Bye!
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Posted: 11 years ago
And now i come to the last two chapters.
I thought i will read the 9th chap give review nd move on to 10th but thanks to u nd yr suspense i couldnt control myself nd read both the chapters first.
Well what to say?
U have rendered me speechless.
I really want to give a looong comment but i just cant thnk properly of words.
So i will give u a combined review.
U r such a moving writer Ash!!!
U do everything so perfecty.
If the first part made me sad then these last two chapters are so painful.
while reading them i got a lump in my throat nd i cried. yeah literally cried!😭
they met each others only to get separated!
Life is never what u want to be nd this was so beautifully portrayed in yr ss.
Chapter 9 was superb if it isnt obvious.
The way randhir did come but sanyukta told him harsh words not to hurt him but for saving him from the bigger hurt! ah!! love it is as i have said earlier too!
And she decked up as Mrs. Randhir SIngh Shekhawat before she left the world.
And then parth coming to randhir nd whispering gently to randhir that sanyu left somewhere where she could never return from.
believe me the words took time to sink in nd then i had to read chapter 10
And Chapter 10 was ah well!! *sigh*
So the mystery is finally unveiled nd sanyu has a hole in heart?😲
And the letter!!!
Goddamn Ash!!!!!
How can someone be so good at writing?????/// that too like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I envy u nd love u for the last chapter bcoz as i mentioned earlier i am a sadist.
And then these lines:
He didn't want to let go off her He wanted her forever and ever. she was his one..his soul mate. He promised her what she wanted but He knew that he will die an old man, and He will die alone till He would see her again, his wife.
It shows everything of randhir's love, the intensity, the extent to which he loved her with everythng he had just like she did too.
And thats why he will wait to meet her again somewhere someday...
Now the present...
Itt wrenched out my heart.
I still have a pain in the middle of my chest...
Ah god!!!! i hope no one has to go through this!!!!
And then the sealing:

Na Jaane Koi , Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagani ,

Humari Adhuri Kahaani...

It sealed the whole thng with which came the end of one heck of an ss.
I commend you Ash! to thnk of somethng like this nd to put it on paer so brilliantly! hats off!!!!!👏👏👏
And yeah this story is different from the rest. and i love it this way!
Happy ending are nice but these stories like u have written is what makes A love story a true love story. thats not to say i was not craving for a happy ending. but well some love stories are meant to be incomplete i guess...
Last but not the least Ash, I so very sorry for being so late!!!!!!!
I was caught up in so much work, this nd that that i didnt get a single moment to comment earlier... A BIG BIG BIIIGGG SORRY FOR THAT!!
And yeah I love u!!! And your writing so continue writing!
Love
Shreya😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Epilogue-

10 years later-

Randhir was sitting in the living room of his palatial mansion reading the business section of the Times of India when he saw his Two daughters come running towards him and placing themselves in his lap and giving them a warm hug . As he hugged them back , he lovingly pecked their cheeks and said ," Ahana , Paridhi kya ho gaya aaj papa pe itna pyaar kyun aa raha hai??"

Paridhi said," Arre papa aap bhul gaye aaj Sunday hai ?? Family day na ? lets go out please?"

Yes papa , humare exams bhi khatam ho gaye hain please take us out!!"Said an equally excited Ahana .

Okay my lovely princesses ! Go Get ready we'll go out !

As randhir went into his room to change his clothes , he looked at the giant portrait of his ladylove which hung at the wall of his room . He looked at it and smiled . He went closer and leant his forehead towards it. He could still feel the warmth of her embrace , her soft hair brushing over his face , he could still feel her love for him...

As he sat in the corner of the park watching his two daughters play with a toothy smile on their faces , he felt happiest.He had achieved so much in life , he had everything fame, money, success ,respect but it still seemed all so empty without her. His company Sanyukta automobiles was a multinational . He had done commendable things for women education . He had opened a school for girls and a orphanage which looked after girls. He had even adopted two girls as his daughters and had sworn to himself that his daughters would be a shadow of his girl, Sanyukta. This was his way of paying a tribute to the feminist Sanyukta. He never had any affairs neither did he get married . all his business firms and schools were named after his late wife , Mrs. Sanyukta Singh Shekhawat.

Sitting at the dinner table at night , he intently heard paridhi and ahana talk about their school, their favourite teachers and what not. Randhir then took them to their bedrooms and tackled them to bed .

But hey, they two little girls would never demand for a bedtime fairytale . Instead they always told their father to tell them something about their mother..And they would sit and listen intently to all of it and just think how exceptionally nice and warm their mother was. They both had promised themselves to become just like her one day...

50 Years Later

Today as randhir lies in the hospital bed , he can hear the doctor briefing his daughters that how their father had very little time left in this world. He had his eyes closed when he sensed them entering in through the door. He could hear their faint sobs. He opened his eyes and whispered to them not to cry and stay strong for their husbands and his grand children. He gently kissed their foreheads and told them that he will finally meet the love of his life after 6 decades. He said that he knew she would be really happy with me for whatever I have done in my life. And if she is really happy then she will give me a kiss with those deep red lips of hers.

It makes me shy to even talk about it. And then he slept an eternal sleep departing on a journey to be with his beloved . They had waited enough, longed enough for each other and now it was their time. To see each other again, feel each other again,love each other again and most importantly be with each other again.

After all, as they say " Just Because Love Has A Gap In It, It Does'nt mean that it can't be fixed. Love That is still in your heart can always be mended ..."

-------- THE END----------


Author Note -

Hey everyone, I am overwhelmed with the amazing response i have recieved for this story of mine. I have been receiving PM's telling me how much they liked the story, how thy love my writing skills and a few complaints as well as to how they feel the story should have had a happy end. So , even though i knew it's very stupid of me to post the epilogue almost 2 months later yet , I have provided a kind of happy ending here...

This Epilogue is dedicated to all the lovely readers of this story. Please do comment this time as well and let me know whether my effort was worth it or not!!!

And Hey, I started a new SS , Prologue updated , Do give it a shot...

Link -http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4068581

Lots Of Love,

Aisha RandhirHolic😳😳

Edited by RandhirHolic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
" Just Because Love Has A Gap In It, It Does'nt mean that it can't be fixed. Love That is still in your heart can always be mended ..."Aisha...Superb...Totallly nw ur SS is complete..its just fabulous!I really have no words! Do continue writing!Keep Writing!With Love Rekha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love ur writing skills yar so heart touching story it is... when reading epilogue also i m cryg it us so emotional story i loved it yar

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