SanDhir SS - The Road Not Taken Epilogue Updated - Page 26

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PROLOGUE-
THE ROAD NOT TAKEN
' I understand,' was all she said.
Why does'nt she say anything more?Does she not realise the enormity of my mad,beseeching words?Does she not comprehend that everything has come to an end?Is she so devoid of emotion that she can't even shed a tear? Why is she so unfazed by the things i'm trying to tell her? Why is she not fighting for us?

If only she would say something ...anything...
The cold wind was blowing so hard , it cut like a knife through his heavily muffled face . He did not know which was causing more pain,whether it was the wind,or whether it was her standing there saying nothing when he said that they could not go on further...
They had known each other for the past 3 years now yet they felt so connected that it seemed to be a bond developed over several lifetimes.They had been through a gamut of experiences together,each bound to the other with hustle and loyalty. But now their paths had diverged forever. Sometimes in life,roads do diverge , for no fault of anyone. It just happens to be that way.
If only he could hear the thoughts running through her head behind that stoic mask...They were not coherent , they were not even relevant to what he was saying because she could'nt hear them anymore.The things that were ring in her ears were conversations that they had with each other in the past years.
And now he was leaving on a journey she knew she could not accompany him in. She did not know if she would ever get over him or would she forever live in the shadows of the past , but she knew that if she let a single tear fall , he would never go ahead and pursue what he had decide to.
Slowly Randhir walked away , leaving behind a stoic and expressionless Sanyukta who stood there like a statue for hours together...

You know it's love when all you want is that person to be happy , even if you are not a part of the happiness. She closed her eyes and prayed that maybe in a alternate universe , in an alternate time their names would resonate together and Sanyukta And Randhir would be SanDhir .

Author Note -
Hi everyone, i'm Aisha . i have been a silent member of this forum for quite a time . This is my first One Shot so dont be harsh on me pls! I would also like to mention that i dedicate this os to the writers of my favourite sandhir stories - Meant To Be, The Grease Story And Love Is In The Air.
I must say that these writers are really an inspiration for amateurs like Me😊 I specially hope you guys like it :)

Waiting For Your likes and comments :)


CHAPTER 1 - Page 4
Chapter 2 - Page 6
CHAPTER 3 - PAGE 8
CHAPTER 4 - PAGE 10
CHAPTER 5 - PAGE 12
CHAPTER 6 - PAGE 15
CHAPTER 7- PAGE 17
CHAPTER 8 - PAGE 19
CHAPTER 9 - PAGE 21
CHAPTER 10- PAGE 23
EPILOGUE- PAGE 26
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aisha, darling this was soo amazing!
I am nt a big fan of sad endings, bt this one is beautifully written!
U have to write more girl...!!

P.S- Write a bit longer one next time, would love to enjoy a bigger treat u know!😉

Love,
Ifra.
Edited by winchesters - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res .
The Road Not Taken reminds me of the poem Robert Frost Has written . What A Poem it was <3
UNRES
Aru , Anu Di and Arpita well definitely like it <3
It was amazing . I've seen you a around too , Aisha I must say this was amazing but this was a little small for an OS .
Well I'm sadistic , and I personally love sad endings and this was undoubtedly beautiful .

-Nidhi :)


Edited by Sarunforeva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res.
p.s i love your username
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

Res .

The Road Not Taken reminds me of the poem Robert Frost Has written . What A Poem it was <3
UNRES
Aru , Anu Di and Arpita well definitely like it <3
It was amazing . I've seen you a around too , Aisha I must say this was amazing but this was a little small for an OS .
Well I'm sadistic , and I personally love sad endings and this was undoubtedly beautiful .

-Nidhi :)



Well i'm glad that my attempt is being appreciated ! thank you nidhi for the lovely comment and next time i write something i'll make sure it's longer :)
Edited by RandhirHolic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: winchesters

Aisha, darling this was soo amazing!

I am nt a big fan of sad endings, bt this one is beautifully written!
U have to write more girl...!!

P.S- Write a bit longer one next time, would love to enjoy a bigger treat u know!😉

Love,
Ifra.

Thank you So much !! I promise to wrte more !😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aisha,,Your one shot is simply exhilirating..Its like dew drops (your work ) embellishing cannabis(sandhir)...such is the serene beauty of this work...That quest for undying and unfathomable emotions just cant be overlooked...It has taken sandhir to an all new level,,separation is also an integral part of love...How selfless you can be for the one you are devoted to!!!Can there be a better plot,,nope!!!!Roads do diverge,,for no fault of anyone,,so true!!!
The turmoil tht both of them faced,,the courage sanyukta showed,,,words just couldnt define it any better...
I love you fr writing on these lines...
One request actually,,continue it,,please,,on the line tht
'The price of a memory is the sorrow tht it brings'..please!!!
I knw i m being nagging,,bt wt to do??
By the way,, i am Himani..:-)
👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this reminds me of Robert Frost's poem...u penned down all the words with such a depth...u can even convert it to an ss or maybe ff...its gonna turn out to be great Aisha...an awesome OS👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki08

Aisha,,Your one shot is simply exhilirating..Its like dew drops (your work ) embellishing cannabis(sandhir)...such is the serene beauty of this work...That quest for undying and unfathomable emotions just cant be overlooked...It has taken sandhir to an all new level,,separation is also an integral part of love...How selfless you can be for the one you are devoted to!!!Can there be a better plot,,nope!!!!Roads do diverge,,for no fault of anyone,,so true!!!

The turmoil tht both of them faced,,the courage sanyukta showed,,,words just couldnt define it any better...
I love you fr writing on these lines...
One request actually,,continue it,,please,,on the line tht
'The price of a memory is the sorrow tht it brings'..please!!!
I knw i m being nagging,,bt wt to do??
By the way,, i am Himani..:-)
👏👏

OMG!! I'm overwhelmed! thank you so much Himani ! I love you for writing such a lovely comment! i will try to move the story ahead...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyasenak

this reminds me of Robert Frost's poem...u penned down all the words with such a depth...u can even convert it to an ss or maybe ff...its gonna turn out to be great Aisha...an awesome OS👏


Thank You !! will try to continue it!

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