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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

OMG tht was scary... im not too much into scary and horror stuff... n im glad this story is nither... i dont want to miss anything u write :)

interesting prologue ...waiting to read more :)

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

well that was scary and was totally unexpected.. so from the corporate world you have started suspense thriller... interesting.. would love to read more 😊

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

I nearly had a heartattack towards the end...omg what a prologue...khushi having frightening nightmares and arnav doing weird things out in the garden...he is stabbing himself for speaking out aloud!!!...thats really gripping, guess what happens next.

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

And thanx for assuring a happy ending...i am already scared out of my wits by the prologue and a tragedy would have ensured my paralysis...
Interesting story...you present such awesome suspense ,continue soon.

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

looks very interesting...sad depressed Arnav trying to commit suicide...hmmm

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

The prologue has set the tone for the coming story...I was holding my breath...thanks for the PM

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

I like the genre of suspense-thriller, but I would have read the story independently from the genre as it's you, who is going to tell the story. 😃

Looking forward. 😊

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sandystarz19

@sandystarz19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

y did arnav harm himself?? wat hppn to them... hope khushu does nt leave him alone for single moment & tk care of him...
dear today is 12 march.. hope to see nxt chp 2day...