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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
i really did not understand first part of the update , but towards the end i got to know , who was the other women that nani asked khushi to stay away it is payal... Akash is not so favourite grandson of nani... Arshi are already married & expecting a baby well that is interesting ...looking forward for the story to unfold ...
Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope the first "her" refers to Anjali not Manorama as I can't imagine Manorama doing Poojas and bhajans :) . Nani is mourning the death of Akash though he is alive and on run for yet unknown reasons and Arnav has soft corner for his brother. Kushi is pregnant and Arnav is not aware of it and she is not allowed to tell him because of recent non existing death in family and waiting for auspicious time (Really...). Did Akash marry Payal secretly? Is Nani against him marrying her?. Why Akash absconded? Kushi here seem to be mature and following traditions closely. Perfectly twisted first chapter :) and I hope our nerves won't be twisted with the suspense in the following chapters.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
I'm totally lovin d way u r building the suspense surrounding d inhabitants of sheesh mahal..terrific update...thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Ok, 'Twisted' has first chapter now - and it is twisted, I really mean it. At this point, it is very vague, and I can't form opinions for any characters yet - but the characters have been introduced to some extent I guess, waiting to read more... and here is my first guess for this stroy, I think Akash is very much alive but is hiding somewhere...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start !!! so many thoughts are running in khushi's mind.. oh god she is pregnant and not supposed to be under so much of stress.. arnav doesn't know about her pregnancy.. nani is sort of dictator.. well will be patient to see how the story unfolds.. but loved the start..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Awesome update Chaitu!!! Cannot wait to read the next update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Wow more suspense...khushi's perspective add more charms
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Intresting story this chapter clear som of thing lk akash is dead payal is his wife nani hate her but why nani stop kushi to tel arnav about her pregnancy curios to know
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Chaitu
As usual your stories have a brilliant premise and more than that its the way you spin the yarn that makes it so good to read. Just finished reading the first two posts. Will definitely come back for more. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
What the this is fun! Just like a thriller movie!

No idea of what might happen next and why something is happening right now!

Fun man! Complete fun!

Loads of drama suspense and action along with emotions!

Looking forward to it!

Cheers

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