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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Woah!! Never in my dreams did I expect this! It came as a surprise, a big one...It makes me want to read more:)
Loved it!

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Whoa...another story from u...wow u just made my day..i totally loved dis whole suspense dat u hav built up...i'm hooked to this thriller just reading dis super awesome prologue...its totally different from ur other stories...i really cant wait to read d next chapter now...thank you for this new story.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

most intriguing prologue

the question begs, what is wrong with Arnav that he wants to take his own life

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Niya

@niya55

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Continue soon.

Interesting.

Hope he is fine.

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

You made my wish come true...yipppeee!! Will come back and read the prologue at leisure...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Shit! I thought he was just distributed and all! But to this extent that he would try to kill himself?

Man intense!

Thrilling indeed! Suspence kept intact!

Looking forward to it!

Cheers

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

A refreshing start...looking forward to reading more

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napk

@napk

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Omg a suspense thriller!!

The prologue is gripping especially the end... They are in sheesh mahal...what happened that arnav is hurting himself physically? Did something happen that he thinks he could have avoided and is it guilt that's driving him?

Can't wait for the next update. Excited 😊

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Camb

@Camb

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

First thing first - so you are going to give the readers a hard time with a suspense thriller. I was on edge with LL and I have no idea what I would do with this one, don't blame me if I demand for answers/updates Chaitu, I am pretty serious about it 😊!!

Coming to the update, its brilliantly written with suspense and thrill all over it - and you have a thing to justify your titles far too much and so 'Twisted' is going to be really twisted by all means, I am sure... I am not going to predict anything yet and will give it a rest at least until the first chapter is written.

Amazing update, way to go Chaitu... and I will be there with you all along the journey, I promise 😃