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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Beautiful story ends hier
arnav was nt as sick as his mom have been
he was really intellgent ans screwd minded
i really thought that akash would come to the sheeh mahal and try to kill nani and then polic will come and get him
but no arnav make a really crule fate for akash
he killed him before he was dead
made him handicap and throuw him somwhere
now akash would never take reveng on arnav
but where did payal gona to
with her talks she was a greedy woman so she is gone
but what if she go and found akash and help him to take revenge
but arnav is very dangerose and
i really like kushi shie trusted him
and nani would never know what happend
hummm
love it

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#582

I am a huge fan of beautiful mind and john Nash as portrayed by Russell Crowe. I love how bittersweet Arnav's revenge was. His cousin has taunted him and abused the fact that he had a condition. Sadly for Akash, he underestimated the beautiful mind that also co exist with the diseased part and Arnav made great use of it to reverse the table on Akash. Payal was the only threat to his plan malfunctioning but he was able to monitor, control and pay her off. Keeping it secret from Nani was his way of protecting her but paying her back for doing the same for him as well. I know this will boost his confidence and he will be able to protect his family accordingly as they get ready to welcome their baby. He will not doubt himself again since he has overcome the evil that tried to control him. Glad that Kushi was able to trust him in the end.

This was a great tale and you did succeed in your objective of muddling our minds with the mystery. It was very different writing from your previous works and I quite enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Well...wonderful chapter...so aakash got what he deserved... it was a nice plan on arnavs part...
loved the whole story...
will miss it...

Edited by aarrsshhii - 11 years ago

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Awesome ending...liked the way everything turned out

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

awesome ending... loved the story :)

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Beautiful update! Amazing story! Thanks for the email.

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Chap 9 - Gr8 update

Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#588

What a perfect end... Loved it..😊

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Loved the end!! But I couldn't guess what Arnav's motive was till the end. I was under the impression he will have police there to catch Akash red handed when he tried to kill Nani. And I was aghast after finding his real plan was! No matter how bad Akash was, I wouldn't want the protagonist to go in the path of a killer, so was glad when Arnav spared his life!!

And so glad, Khushi believed her husband!!

Happily ever after, after all!! 😊

Thank you for the intriguing story Chaitu!!👏