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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Awesome and riveting tale... Had my stomach in knots till the very end...

Loved it

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Amazing story and very different from what I have read on this forum so far. So much mystery and Arnav's condition, the suspense...wow I really don't have words. You write beautifully :)

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Perfect ending to the amazing story...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

That was a fitting end to this story ...

Arnav proved himself to be the cleverest and sharpest of them all inspite of the malady

he was suffering from ...

I had no idea that he would turn out to be such a smooth operator ... 😆

Thank you Chaitu ... hope we get to read more of your work ...

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

I am so loving this SS... upto chapter 4... will continue tomorrow... have already bookmarked it 😉

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Wow, that was one mindblowing mystery!

This story was intriguing right from the prologue...totally different from anything I've read on Arnav Khushi so far. And you executed this particular genre, which I'm sure is new even for you, with such finesse that I'm really impressed...!!

Glad that Khushi stood by Arnav..through it all...and that Arnav was not shown as a killer..:)

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

It was another fantastic story of yours... 👏

It was mystery and you have justify it properly ...As always loved it...Will read your other stories soon.

👏

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Finally read all the chapters... superb SS... loved it 👏

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mklam

@mklam

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

This was one difficult read for me and you carried it off so well - despite his condition, Arnav comes out a winner as he metes out justice and keeps the family honour intact. Khushi as a good wife remains his strongest ally. I had a hard time associating Payal with that of a bawdy woman but then again we need to think outside the box when creating characters -:!

An unusual story with unique characters - bravo!

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#600

wow.. this was just amazing.. kept me hooked onto it right from the beginning!

I just loved the twists!

I specially loved Arnav's part because there are more twists and turns in his part...

hats off to you for attempting this genre and doing justice to it! 👏

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