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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Just read all last three parts in one go...
Loved it...
U write fantttasstttiic Chaitlee...
I liked it how Arnav suceeded in fighting battle with his mind and with his brother...Loved the unfolding of mystery...Payal manipulated by Arnav n A better ending to Akash...

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napk

@napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

What a way to end it Chaitu. 👏

I loved every bit of this story... the way you built the suspense and Khushi's and Arnav's POV and also you made us rethink whether it was really Arnav imagining things... I loved how Khushi trusted him in the end and not question him about his actions.

I hope you write more suspense/thriller kind of stories... I like to guess even though I am wrong most of the time 😛

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#603

A wonderful story. I read this story in one go.

I really enjoyed reading the suspense thriller.

At the end of two chapters it really made me think if Arnav is really schizophrenic .

It was such a roller coast ride after each chapter their was some new twist in the story.

The title was so appropriate .

I loved the ending of the story instead of sending Akash to jail he made sure he would never contact or harm any of his family members.

A nice ending to a twisted tail.

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Superb ending Arnavz plan was awesome

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ocean28

@ocean28

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Your Twisted was indeed an interesting read. It was mostly about Arnav and I am not complaining. Khushi as usual is lovable. In the first half of the story it was difficult to read about a gigantic character like ASR who is afflicted with a mentally debilitating disease. An ASR who is unsure about his own mental condition and doubting himself was not an experience I want to encounter often. He comes...he sees... and he conquers...the epitome of power, and rationality was worried that his Khushi was unsure about his sanity...how different is that? Of course in the second half his superior intellect kicks in. It was very intriguing indeed. Very different from your other works. Nonetheless really enjoyed the story. Thank you. Looking forward for more...

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nnhk

@nnhk

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#606

I have been out of country for the past 2 months and finally today i got time to read this story and was lucky to read it in one go . isko parhnay kay baad i realized it would have been torturous for me to read it chapter by chapter. it is wonderfully written. the suspense and the twist was all great.

looking forward to more stories from you.

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#607

loved it..!!!!!!!!!!
i was reading it from the start...
but suddenly lost it n was searching lika a mad woman.. :P :P
read it in one go..!!!!
awesome piece of work..!!

Edited by jisa - 11 years ago