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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

perfect end to the story...

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#572

that was a nice ending chaituu

loved it

thx for this SS -

another feather to ur cap

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palaayan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

This was a brilliantly woven tale of mystery and intrigue. You handled the element of psycopathy with Arnav's schizophrenia brilliantly. Its complexity wasn't trivialised in this story and for that I applaud you, as it's difficult to manage in the trade off of telling a good story.

I really liked the manner in which you spun the story from different perspectives, it was a very effective format for this story.

A brilliant tale dear, glad I could read it through in one go today.

Manreet :)

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luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Oh wow that was amazing... So akash has got what he deserved... N payal got her money ...band arshi live happily ever after :)
Lovely ... I'm going to muss this mysterious story

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amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#575

dear this has been a very fine story to read and i enjoyed the journey immensely... the way you gave the final strokes has left no room for want ... the last chappy stands by itself in completeness

thanx for the update and the story ... wish i could say pls continue soon...however i will wish that you start a new SS quite soon...

congratulations on the successful completion of quite an intriguing story

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-Shilpaa-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

Simply superb! I just loved how you ended the story without much drama. Had fun reading it.😊

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Shamz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#577

I can say I finally understood

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msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#578

Just finished reading this entire story in one day. Absolutely loved it. 👏👏

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#579

Wow what an amazing planning by Arnav.

The ending turned out to be equally as twisted as the entire story.

So Naani will never know that Akash is alive somewhere and is living a life like a vegetable. Wonder what Payal will do with her life.

Arnav is much more intelligent and shrewd than Naani thinks about him. There was really no need to have hidden the fact from Arnav in the first place.

Khushi knows the truth right. Arnav has found a really good partner in Khushi.

Sad that the story ended so soon and hope you write again and not keep us waiting for long Chaitali.

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#580

Beautiful...Arnav has planned so much and executed it effectively...kudos to him for not succumbing to the disease...and to the people who tried to betray...wonderful story line and you were 100% successful in maintaining the suspense factor...Waiting for more wonderful stories from you...thanks for the PM

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