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aafan

@aafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Quite a complex story! I'm already hooked:)

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Rppp other story yaaayyy *happy dance*
Am confused will wait for the story to move then I would be able to give points right I just have to many things happing what's what and why is Khushi hiding her news

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

The story is still building and it is intriguing to know what's the mystery around these people.

Arnav and Khushi seems like more of a formal relation kind of one in arrange marriage which reached companionship level but still lacks love (my take on their relation from chapter 1).

She hasn't told him that she is pregnant. Nani superstitiousness is understandable but why is doctor waiting for right time to inform one's husband of his wife pregnancy? Strange.

What's the mystery of Payal, why she is bad omen for the unborn?

The story is really mysterious and intriguing...just the way I like.😉

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Still trying to understand what's going on. Is Akash alive or dead? Wasn't the mourning for Akash? Then why does Arnav say that he might be hiding? Nani hates both Akash and Payal.

Should Arnav not know that his wife is pregnant? Why do they want to hide that fact?

Since the story is from Khushi's POV it's different. Again as the writer Chaitali has captured the reader's attention with just one chapter. Kudos to her.

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Vaibhavi Mane

@cookie-lover

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Hey Tai...
congrats on new story...
MAAN is being replaced by this... but a drastic different genre...
as of now there are many question about the plot...which i know will be answered, every single one by you...but that what makes me a curious cat...
Nani's character is way to mysterious... and something unusual... i have a vibe that she plays an important role in all this...
and the ff in its very chapter has ArShi married and pregnant... so no pre-marriage romance... i don't think it will have loads of romance,will it?

waiting very patiently for the next update and for story to unfold...
till then take care
see you at updates
love ya...

Edited by cookie-lover - 11 years ago

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Very interesting and different story! Cannot wait to read further! Thanks for the email.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Very intriguing...looking forward to the mystery...continue soon

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Poju

@Poju

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

hmmm...

M still thinking... this chapter did not give me detail explaination... i guess some more chapters and i will understand it better... 😃

Please update soon...

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Awesome...

Nani is very conservative... She wants khushi to not go near payal bcuz she is widow??? Or there is some other reason???

And why is khushi not allowed to tell Arnav about her pregnancy???

Loved the update...

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

interesting prologue waiting eagerly now

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