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jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Very interesting - too many questions unanswered as of now !! But hopefully Khushi is not making a mistake by hiding her pregnancy from Arnav.

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anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Awesome update!! Loved it 😊 Very interesting, too many questions yaar, update soon Chaitu!!!!!

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

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~Unres

Oh so this is the evil eye Nani wanted to ward off the unborn. Payal is a dancer and Akash the rotten fruit of the bunch who. Nani has boycotted.

So according to Khushi, Payal carried out the facade of distressed wife to enter the Sheesh Mahal well.

Akash missing, many theories erupt in my mind the latest one, is it possible that Akash and Payal are in his together to extract money from his family, other theories are obvious to hiding due to debts, or held for debts etc.

Interesting..,Khushi is the curios cat that doesn't heed to warnings. Hope she doesn't get in trouble for the same.

So it was an Arrange Marriage. But she acknowledge at least to herself that her feelings for her husband runs deep. Than why coverup on the biggest news a couple awaits.

I mean she said she doesn't know how he will react like her doctor said owing to his previous episodes which she is not privy too. But she would never know unless she share the news with him... She knows he care that why keeping him away from the possible joy he might feel wholeheartedly. And anyways if it's a gamble of his reaction than same will be there after her first tri-semester.

Another blunder she is doing of blocking his advances without giving any reason. Can definitely affect their relation.

That phone call, was Arnav trying his own measures to find out his brother.

Well it's getting interesting by each chapter.

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Nutcase

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

The narration was too good from Khushi's perspective. I loved it..there was a subtly haughtiness and real feel to it..Payal was excellent portrayal of nautch lady...Arnav's description was almost close to perfectionist!...Since its you who is writing, I am not taking any guesses...will wait for you to unfold in your natural style...:-)

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Whom he talking to...akash...or payal

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MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Payal is a dancer , that came as a surprise & she is jealous of khushi (interesting)

Akash is missing & Arnav is also a mystery ...

khushi's pov is interesting...

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

another intriguing update chaitu

lovely one

will wait for the next

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Curiosity is killing the readers here. Yeah yeah we know about your tera speed internet connection.

Now we know why Nani detests Payal and Akash and their relationship. Arnav as Editor wow interesting. I guess Akash is the one Arnav talking to over phone.? Lets see how the abstinence continues for a month without revealing the news :).

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Raji Senthilkumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Very interesting
Looking 4ward to read more

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napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

You definitely know how to keep us guessing and curious...

Khushi's naration is very very well written... her assumptions, observations, opinions and analysis keeps it very interesting... all your characters are a mystery I say and thats your intention right...

The identity of Payal and Akash is very interesting... we don't know their story yet but khushi's curiosity is like all of us I guess except she knows more than us... so she dared to go against Nani's words and went to meet Payal... that conversation is not what I expected... Payal surely doesn't like Khushi... reason unknown but maybe because she is jealous or maybe because Khushi has more rights than her... will wait to know more...

Ahhh so Mr. Handsome is a editor in chief who doesn't talk much and it was an arranged marriage... very interesting... Still don't know his character as I am curious as why she was told to hide her pregancy... maybe he would be happy with the news and khushi wouldn't have to be guilty of hiding it... but i know you sure have a reason and want us to guess 😃

With all the mystery, you create another one with that call Arnav had with someone and he disconnected after he heard Khushi... me also hope like her at its nothing... 😕

have to wait for 4 more days... 🤔

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