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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Don't know how I missed out on reading the prologue.

Chalo, now I can stalk this story!

The prologue was terrifying.

Its going to be tough waiting for updates.

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Fabulous update... i thought it was anjali and shyam but what a twist akash and payal...arnav wants is brother to be safe abd sound but nani is mourning her grandson and payal is treated like culprit... why does nani and doc wants khushi to hide news of her pregnancy from arnav...

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hotchic.

@hotchic

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Fantastic story. I have sent you a buddy request

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

So its Akash and Payal..
Initially, I thought its Anjali and Shyam...
Khushi is pregnant and Arnav is mentally ill...
And Nani considers Akash dead and hates Payal..
Its really complicated..
Can't wait to read more :)

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napk

@napk

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

This is surely twisted so far... I liked the idea of narating (i would rather say khushi's mind speaking) even though you didn't give away much about each character... khushi seems to know only part of whats happening why and thats what we got... so far the situation is too serious

From what i understood is Akash is in debt and is missing... Nani thinks he is as good as dead... is that why she was mourning? Payal being his wife is being treated that way? is does she have something to do with the situation they are in? I am also guessing that they have not met before and khushi only met payal only after Akash went missing... Now i wonder why there was no interaction with them since the 1 yr shes been at sheesh mahal??😕

I am looking forward to know about the characters... especially about Arnav-Khushi 😳

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

I really like the fact that you've chosen to use Khushi as the narrator. I'm also curious to know why she's kept her pregnancy a secret from Arnav- or rather, why she has been ordered to. You've built up the suspense really well- and my interest is thoroughly peaked!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

So the one being mourned is Akash and the 'her' is Payal? Akash is related to Arnav by blood but Payal is only Kushi's sister in law not sister, right? Nani does not seem to like either Akash or Payal. Kushi cannot tell her pregnancy news to her husband because of the mourning? Arnav and Kushi are happily married. What did Akash do and is he dead? Need to peel back the layers to get to the bottom of this. Going back to the prologue - Why would Arnav want to kill himself? Guilt over Akash's demise?

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

mindblowing part

loved it

thanks for the mail

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

So Khushi is pregnant and Naniji hasn't allowed her to share the news with her husband Arnav. Akash is missing and Naniji was mourning over his death 😲and ordered Khushi to stay away from her sister in law Payal.. wow interesting start and so many questions but will wait for future updates for answers😊😊

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

At the beginning i didnt understand anything. But after reading few lines i got it.
Nani is mourning akash and hates payal. Why? We will get to know in the following chapters. Khushi is married since 1 year and is expecting, but not allowed to tell her husband. Why? I think i do not like this nani. Maybe i will change my mind after reading few chapters and come to know her little more.
I have to many questions which needs answers. This suspens will kill me.
Eagerly waiting for the update

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