ArShi SS: In Your Eyes/ Link to thread #2 on page 1 - Page 56

Loved the brotherly act...

Aakash is an amazing bro Arnav could hav asked for!!!

Hope Aranv comes out from his shell n reaches out for his loved ones soon...

Thnks for pm

I really loved the way you wrote the pain from Aakash angel...

He is a true brother and he dont want to loose his hopes on their relationship and wanted to bring his nannav back...

akash was fab ...

finally bro's had d convo

Wow this is such a lovely story! Accidentally stumbled upon the story and boy it was such a great accident indeed! I thought of commenting once I'm back after my exams but thought of doing it right now😊 First and foremost I always wanted to read a story where one of the protagonists are visually challenged, I won't use the word blind since I feel that people who are fortunate enough to not to be physically-handicapped act all blind and behave like self centered idiots to the realities of the world as if they own the whole world...

Anyhow now moving on to the story I really like Shayam's characterization, he is a good son, a devoted brother above all a good human being as well who is willing to sacrifice his own happiness in lieu of his sister's happiness. When it comes to Raizadas seems like each and every sibling is carrying their own baggage of misery without voicing them out. But now after the pleasant interference of Gupta siblings added with Payal their lives have taken a surprise turn and looks like everybody is heading towards their own happiness without their knowledge. Can't wait to see how Arhi will fall in love, Arnav seems to be already considering his feelings and trying to understand why he feels such a strong pull towards Khushi, whereas Khushi seems to be so used to living in her own world that she is finding the impact she is having because of Arnav strange and difficult to dissect, but with our Payal aside nothing to worry I suppose! Shyam's and Anjali's interactions are so sweet and they have already reserved a special corner for each other in their hearts. Payal and Akash: I'm sure it will be very entertaining to read the progression between these two😃 finally Arhi as Shashi predicted their journey won't be smooth, I'm sure there will be a lot of resistance and insecurities coming forth but hopefully they will beat all the odds...

You have touched a very sensitive topic and doing a marvelous job in conveying all the emotions using Arhi. You have described the interiors of SPARK splendidly it felt like I was literally and physically there! Wonderful piece of writing looking forward to see how the story will unravel, and apologies in advance since I won't be able to comment on future updates regularly until my exam finishes!