ArShi SS: In Your Eyes/ Link to thread #2 on page 1

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Chapter 1

"Nita! When ASR is here, let him know that Ms. Grewal is waiting for him in the conference room and that the lawyer is on the way" Aman instructed his assistant on his way to his cabin.

"Yes Sir!" said Nita and sat in her chair which she hadn't occupied for the past 2 hours and the fact that she was tying knot in a week with her boyfriend of 8 months and fianc of 2 months, had taken a toll on her emotional and physical composure, what with being dragged out for shopping every minute she spent outside work. Just a few more hours and then she was off for 20 days for her wedding. She only prayed that she pulls through the rest of the day without any hitch. Only, her prayers were not destined to be answered.

Nita was jerked back to reality rudely by a voice which the entire office remembered, respected and feared even in sleep,.

"Where is she?"

Every time she looked into that face, she managed to feel a shiver run through her spine, a little stronger when he was angry, which was quite often. And every time, she managed to fumble and curse Aman, to have left her to deal with the devil.

"SSS...Sir! She is waiting in your room."

Fate

And the tornado called Arnav Singh Raizada whirled towards his room.

Nita, pitied the woman, Ms. Grewal, for the storm that was about to strike her.

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Anjali was going through the designs on her table that were to be finalized for summer collection. She had been on it for the past two hours and was badly in need of a coffee to reduce the nagging pain that had developed in her head. As if on cue, Lavanya walked in with two cups of coffee and placed one in front of her. Anjali gratefully accepted her cup and took a sip with great relief. Settling down on a chair opposite to her and sipping on her cup, Lavanya asked,

"Where is Mr. Gupta? Isn't he supposed to be here half an hour back?"

With that question Anjali's thoughts flew back to the first time she met him. Shyam Gupta. It was at a party thrown to celebrate the 25th anniversary of the commemoration of their construction company, Gupta Constructions, to which the who's who of business circle of Delhi were invited. Arnav was out of town on business and hence Anjali had attended the party. Shyam's pleasing personality, immense knowledge in his field of architecture and construction business, the way his family dotted on him, didn't take much time to make her like him. Shyam had spent most of his time by her side that evening. Anjali had asked him if he could help her with the remodeling of her designing unit at AR and he had readily accepted. They had met once after that for work and today he was coming to have a look at the space to finalize on the blue print.

Anjali leaned back on her chair with a sigh and answered,

"He called a while back and informed that he was running late. He must be here at anytime"

"And he is here"

Hearing a male voice both the women lifted their heads to see Shyam standing at the door accompanied by a young woman. He looked handsome dressed in a formal wear, hair set in order but what caught anyone's attention was the charming smile that adorned his face. He looked at Lavanya briefly, throwing a cordial nod in her direction before turning his attention to Anjali. Lavanya found his smile broadening instantly and glance turning appreciative at Anjali's appearance which was nothing less than ethereal in one of AR's ethnic collections.

"Mr. Gupta, pleasure to meet you. Ms. Gupta, very happy to see you here"

Before the woman could respond, Shyam cut in,

"I thought we became comfortable with first names during our last meeting." Turning to Lavanya, he enquired, "How are you Ms. Kashyap? I don't think you have met my sister. This is Khushi. Khushi, Ms. Lavanya Kashyap here is AR's head designer."

Lavanya looked at Khushi properly and the designer in her couldn't help but appreciate her choice of attire. Dressed in a beige colored tunic top paired with a stole wrapped around her neck, with a pair of black pant complimenting her top, she looked an epitome of elegance and beauty. Her straightened waist length hair and a few shoulder length bangs that bordered her unblemished face sans make up enhanced her simplicity. Lavanya extended her hand for a hand shake but had to withdraw when Khushi did not even look at her and settled for a half-hearted Hi'

Lavanya was a little taken aback by the rude behavior from the sister of such a cordial man, but didn't show it. Effect of a rich, careless upbringing, perhaps.

Shyam decided to alleviate the little awkwardness and spoke,

"Actually Anjali, there is a reason why Khushi is here today. You know she is actively involved in the activities of SPARC'. They have planned a fund raiser program. Khushi feels that the presence of ASR will increase the participation from the corporate world and would get media coverage and that would ultimately help the cause. I am trying to convince her to settle for a representation from AR, but she is very insistent. What do you think? Will ASR be upto it?" asked Shyam with a little hesitation.

Lavanya realized that the discussion didn't need her and decided to check with Aman if ASR's meeting with Ms. Grewal had begun. She raised to excuse herself and leave, only to be stopped by Anjali.

"Lavanya, I would want you to be present when Shyam sees the facility and give your inputs. If you are going to meet Aman, why don't you take Khushi to Arnav's room? She can discuss about the program with him until we finish our meeting. That way we will save time."

"But M'am do you think today would be good for this, what with his meeting with the journalist and"

Anjali cut her in and gave a reassuring smile, "Don't worry Lavanya! Arnav knows to behave well with guests"

Shyam looked at Khushi and asked with concern, "Will you be okay Chutki? We can do it some other day too. You have plenty of time."

"Relax Bhaiyya! I have come this far, I am not coming back without meeting him. Don't worry. Shall we go Ms. Kashyap?"

Khushi stood up and turned in her place and Lavanya realized her mistake.

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"You must be aware of the write up that came in the "World of business" last week, aren't you?"

Shyam nodded his head in affirmation. They were walking back with Lavanya to Anjali's room after surveying the facility to be remodeled.

"I knew it was crap, the moment I saw it. I have seen and gone through enough of media stunts to know which is real and which is fake, Anjali".

"But Chote has not taken it lightly. He hasn't given a damn about stories written about him, but when it comes to me..."

"That's how brothers are Anjali. I am extremely protective about Khushi too."

"He has called the journalist here. I don't know what he is having in his mind. I thought he would threaten the editor with legal action. This girl is just a tool"

"Relax Anjali! I am sure he knows what he is doing"

They met with Nita around the turning of the corridor leading to Anjali's room.

"When did Arnav turn in, Nita?"

"About ten minutes ago, M'am"

"Then he must be in the conference room Shyam. Are you sure you want to wait in his room until he is back? Khushi would be alone too"

"Conference room M'am? But Sir has gone to his room M'am. That's where Ms. Grewal is waiting."

"Ms. Grewal?" asked Anjali, now panic picking up speed.

"Yes M'am. Ms. Khushi Grewal, the journalist from World of Business'?

Lavanya interjected, "But she is waiting in the conference room. OMG! What did you say her name is? Khushi? M'am" she turned to Anjali, whose face had lost color.

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Arnav stood silently by his room's entrance as if to gather all the calmness that existed in the universe and took in the appearance of the woman who sat in his room in one of the chairs opposite his across the humongous table set in the center of his room. She had long hair that touched her waist. Nothing much was visible beyond the cascade of her hair. She hadn't taken notice of his entry as she seemed to have been absorbed in presumably a book which peeked out of her profile. He quickly strode across the room towards the window on his side of the room and looked out trying to gather some patience. And then he turned around to look at her. She still hadn't noticed him and to her credit she had earphones plugged to her ears, probably listening to music, without a care to the damage she is threatening to do to his life. He closed his eyes in frustration and turned around to look out of the window again and raised his voice enough to be heard despite whatever that was filling her ears and said,

"Ms. Khushi"

Startled at hearing a voice, Khushi abruptly pulled her earphones. After a moment's silence, she composed herself and replied,

"Mr. Raizada?"

"So you finally realize that you are not alone in this room. You must be waiting for a long time now, isn't it?"

She was momentarily taken aback by the lack of amiability in his voice, but didn't show it. She had heard that Arnav Singh Raizada was not a very friendly man, but was not prepared for the coldness that oozed out of his voice.

"Yeah you can say that. I was determined to..."

"I can see the power of your determination Ms. Khushi. It is so powerful to the extent that you won't hesitate to belittle a woman, about whom you know nothing, isn't it?"

"Excuse me?"

At this, he turned to her.

"You media people have a misconception about pen being mightier than a sword, isn't it? You showed my sister in a poor light, you thought, I would surrender to the power of media and consent to give you an interview?"

She didn't look at him and fumbled with her words.

"I don't know what you are talking about. I am here to talk about..."

"I don't give a damn to what you want to talk about. You will only tell me who gave you that disgusting photograph that gave you the guts to write that disgusting story about my sister. TELL . ME . WHO!!" He yelled at the top of his voice making Khushi jump out of her seat and knock off the book she was reading in the process. Khushi trembled and spoke in a shaken voice,

"Mr. Raizada! I am sure there is a misunderstanding. I am not who you are thinking."

She still wasn't looking at him and that irritated him immensely.

"Precisely ! You are a cunning, conniving b**ch who would do anything to scale up the ladder in your profession. What was the price for my interview? A promotion or much more?"

Khushi cringed at the suggestion behind his accusation. She just wanted to leave and reached for her phone in her pocket to call Shyam. As she started punching buttons, it was ruthlessly snatched and thrown against the wall.

"I am not a patient man. Tell me Who . is . behind . this? Where . did . you . get . the . photograph . from?"

Shocked beyond measure at the turn of events, Khushi spoke,

"You are clearly unwilling to listen. I refuse to speak to you. I want to leave"

That did it for Arnav. He roughly grabbed her upper arms and said menacingly,

"Like hell you will leave. Look at me"

She squirmed under his hold but stubbornly refused to look at him.

Arnav roared, "Look at me when I am talking to you"

The door opened and Anjali, Shyam and Lavanya rushed in, worry written all over their faces. And at the same moment a volcano erupted.

"Enough!!"

With all the might she seemed to have possess, Khushi jerked herself from Arnav's hold and pushed him back. She trembled with rage and shouted in a voice that she didn't know she had,

"I won't look at you. I don't want to see the face of a man who doesn't treat a woman with respect and accuses her who he doesn't even know, driven by assumptions. I would never want to look into the eyes of a man, who calls a woman names, even if I can"

A painful silence followed with different emotions etched on the different faces of the people who occupied the room. But one face was totally emotionless and that was Khushi's.

She bent to the floor to sweep her hands here and there to search for her book. Her fragile pale hands stumbled upon a few pieces of her broken phone and just like that a few tears sprang in her eyes. That was when Shyam finally came out of his stupor and found his own voice. At that moment he hated his inability to protect his little sister and called out in a broken whisper.

"Chutki"

Khushi suspended her action and stood up and in no time Shyam was besides her holding her hand. She flung herself on him and cried. "I want to leave Bhaiyya!! Take me from here. I was wrong. I should have listened to you"

"Sshh!! Its not your fault dear!! I should not have left you alone. Let's go!"

Saying thus, Shyam led his sister out of the room. He didn't trust himself to have a control on his temper and consciously avoided looking at Arnav, lest he unleashed his consuming anger on him. He stopped before Anjali. "I should have trusted my judgment rather than your words, Anjali. Your brother certainly knows how to behave with his guests. Good bye!!"

Anjali hung her head in shame at the outcome and gave a resigned look to her brother before leaving him to face the truth.

And Arnav stood right where Khushi had left him, looking at the open book on the floor, which glared back at him accusingly, with script written in Braille.

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Wish you all a very Happy Valentines Day !!
This chapter goes to Aayat (aquagal).
Happy Birthday my girl !!
Have a wonderful day and a great life ahead !!
Please scroll down for an important note and Index.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear Friends

Here I am, as I promised, with an SS, which may or may not turn into an FF, "In Your Eyes". This has been in mind for a very long time and Vandana and Gita's constant push made me take it up seriously. And there are so many friends who have been motivating me to write. Thank you all !

Having worked with visually challenged patients and their families for nearly a decade, it is only reasonable if I make my dedication to each and every one of those out there in the real world who suffer from some form of visual impairment or the other and a tribute to the family members of those great people. This story will certainly not be preachy, but may have little information thrown here and there to suit the narration. I may take a few leverage in the medical information I would provide, only to maintain the flow of thoughts. I only hope you all like it. Please feel free to pm/scrap me for suggestions, clarifications, if any and make the story more logical and acceptable.
The Characters will be introduced as and when the story progresses. A word about Shyam - he is out and out a very positive character and my immense respect for Abhaas Mehta will show throughout the story. You are free to imagine any actor to the characters, most of them, belong to IPKKND. Some non-IPK characters will be introduced later.
Disclaimer: My knowledge of visual impairment diseases are limited to basic science research. It is possible to not find logical explanations to conditions explained in this story although care is taken to present scientific facts as much truly as possible. A little creative liberty is expected. Thank you !!
Cheers
Uthra
Chapter 1 - Above
Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago
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Happy birthday to you my dearest AKA...🤗
In your eyes

Viji, what can I say about your writing? I feel so proud when I read an update or for that matter the comments and each one leaves me agreeing wholeheartedly at your talent.

Right from the ambience in the office that you created with your words I could feel the hustle bustle of a busy office where people are running around on tip toes in order to ensure the perfection that is expected of them...
A terrified Nita, a time when she should be relaxed finds herself in quite a contrary situation ironically and to top it off a boss who is the epitome of bad temper seems to be in a particularly bad mood today ...

In all this confusion enter Shyam and his sister, at first I was wondering why Khushi was so abrupt in her interactions with Lavanya, which seemed a bit more pronounced in contrast Shyam's pleasing and amicable personality. Anjali seems interested in him and if I am not mistaken so does in her. And it has not gone unnoticed either.

And to add to all this a case of mistaken identity which is not really his fault ...arrey how was he to know ? What a coincidence both with the same name and in wrong rooms...but yes he could have checked before his outburst. But a mistake which will end up a blessing in disguise I am sure.
And the outburst was a bit violent but then I guess when it came to his sister's character being assassinated then there is no logic, patience or understanding ...

Her emotional and very brave confrontation would have made him realise how hasty he was and the manner he spoke in was maybe harsh and sounded uncivilised and barbaric. Especially at having being told how even is she could she would not have wanted to see him, this left me with goosebumps and I had to re read this line twice.
It explained her initial action with Lavanya...

Also interesting will be to see the impact of interaction on Shyam and Anjali and their developing feelings.
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I am curious to know how he will make up for this very volatile first meeting and they form relationship from herein. His regret and repentance will be interesting to see.

The power of words and writing left me speechless, I am not to eager about her being blind but I have faith in your writing ...

Bring on chapter 2!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Winnie 😃

Sorrry for d late unres dii 😔

Par seriously a awsm cncpt 👏

Par pehli hi mulakat mein takrar 😲

Aisa q kiya dii 😭 . Khushi is Shyam sis nd Shyam is a Good character 😲

Too much to digest

Bt y was Arnav angry... How could he use such abusive words to a lady .. How much fault she is at.. He shouldnt have frgtnn his manner

Nd den wat happened at d party .. For wich anjali is used by media

I liked d brave khushi.. Who stands for herself infront of wrng

Gosh how arnav manhandled her ..

Bt d spirit khushi shown was commendale

Mistake kiski nd result kisi aur ko

Will dis fight will chng every equation Btwn Arnav-Khushi nd Anjali-Shyam

Awsm strt dii ❤️

Cntinuee soonish 😳
Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago
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S for Res 😊

UnRes for U 😉

First of all kudos to you for this amazing story ⭐️

Nita's description made me apprehensive that she is going to mistake someone for Khushi and send ASR to Khushi.

I like Shyam as the brother of Khushi and he is so protective of his sister 😊

The meeting of Khushi and Lavanya made me think why Khushi didnot look at her or shake hands with her..is she feeling uncomfortable or is she tensed to meet ASR? But never did I think Khushi can be arrogant..
I didnot get what mistake did Lavanya realise but I understood it at the end of chapter.

Mr.Raizada all set to give it to Ms. Grewal and here comes the famous ASR blowout without listening to what the other person had to say..he is going to regret it later for sure.
I adore the strong Khushi who gave it to ASR..I loved her reply to him :

"I won't look at you. I don't want to see the face of a man who doesn't treat a woman with respect and accuses her who he doesn't even know, driven by assumptions. I would never want to look into the eyes of a man, who calls a woman names, even if I can". 👏

I have to admit that I have no idea what "Braille" meant until I looked it up in the dictionary. And then did I understand that Khushi can't see!
I loved reading the entire chapter and didn't pick the clues that Khushi was blind until the last word of the chapter. Its awesome 👏

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Edited by Skiran - 11 years ago
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This came like a total surprise to me. Totally unexpected plot yara.
Waiting to read more.
Edited by JforChimpanzee - 11 years ago
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Hum bhi Res😃

Time to Unres!!

Thank you Uthra for the dedication.
This story is special to me for three reasons:-
1. You started a SS finally. 😊
2. You dedicated the first chapter to me. 😃
3. Shyam is related to my field and he is a positive character. 😛

I read your note before reading the story and I expected that there will be people with vision impairment in this story but I never thought that it could be Khushi. I thought may be your story is fixed in the field of doctors. Yeah so many assumptions!!! But I'm so glad you proved me wrong.
Arnav is the typical ASR with a bad temper and people fearing him day & night. I'm sure he will still be hot. 😉 Oh Nita should have taken an early leave.. Only 8 days left...😲
And then there is his sister Anjali who is working and independent. I like the changes you have made to the characters. They are positive and realistic. Anjali has already started feeling something for Shyam since the first time she met him. Lavanya has a sharp eye. She noticed how shyam pays much attention to Anjali. 😉
The first expression of Khushi on Lavanya changed soon because she got to know that she wasn't being rude or spoiled but suffers from visual impairment.
Arnav wasn't completely wrong. He had no idea that there were two Khushi's in AR waiting to meet him at two different places. It all just got mixed up. Nita mixed it up. Would she have to find another job after marriage? 😆
Arnav didn't listen to Khushi and it never occurred to either of them to call by full name than first name basis. I loved how Khushi replied to him. For a girl who came there to meet him to invite for a charity function, if a man ends up behaving so rudely then he ought to get some good words. He was completely impolite.
Now when Arnav realised his folly, I hope he apologises to her and makes up for his behavior.


Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Another Brilliant story from a brilliant writer! what a beautiful Valentine's day present... Wonder if my husband can beat this!!! 😉
I will start in chronological order so I don't miss anything...

Nita... poor girl. literally made to work till the last minute before her wedding... so happy she gets to go away for 20 days. hope she is leaving her phone behind so ASR cannot call her on her honeymoon to yell at her.
I hope she doesn't get blamed too bad for her little mistake with the rooms. At least on hindsight ASR will thank her for that mistake, but that might be much later!

Anjali ... I like her for the simple fact that she is WORKING! I am sure we will be in love with this Anjali and Shyam before long... Poor thing, trying to impress Shyam, and messing up so badly. I hope she gives Arnav an earful about his behaviour.

Lavanya ... what's with her? Is she Anjali's secretary? the 'ma'am' completely threw me off... looking forward to find out more.

Shyam ... Hmmm... You know I liked him too at the very beginning of the show. he had such a good looking , friendly kind of face. He looked like the kind of person you want for a brother. I was very happy to see your note about Shyam being good in this story. And also, sounds like he is very sensible... his restraint at the end was admirable... instead of blowing off at Arnav , he chose to silently walk away. That is a sign of strength... I am looking forward to reading about his relationship with Khushi and with Anjali...

Khushi ... Blind! really!!! that is new. can't say I am too excited about this, but then you have a way of surprising us, so I am going to wait eagerly for the story to progress. Other than that, at this point we know almost nothing about her... so will have to wait.

And finally Arnav... his reaction and his character seem to be the most predictable of all so far. he is exactly what we think of him as... impulsive, short tempered, fiercely protective of his sister... I want to see how he reacts to what just happened.

I am curious about the newspaper article that caused all this.


ok, I think I have bored you enough... so I shall stop... I am loving this story already and can't wait for the next chapter... and thanks for buckling under pressure and writing it... and thanks for mentioning me too! 🤗






Edited by mem1 - 11 years ago
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You wrote a new one and didn't even tell me? I loved your OSes, chalo koi nai baad mein gussa ho jaungi:P

Awesome start! I am so happy that you decided to write a SS! So khushi wasn't rude as Lavanya thought, she cannot see:( That is sad.

Arnav was so rude! When I saw the banner, there was this song playing in my mind, aapki aankhon mein kuch mehke hue se raaz hain! I love that song:)

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter:)
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Oh God! You took me by surprise! 😲
Loved loved loved the first chapter. Khushi's blind and the way you wrote the entire chapter one couldn't even guess about her situation until the very end.👏

Really looking forward to the story. Update soon.😃

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