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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

wow Khushi has started to change Arnav life already

he is starting to become Nannav for Akki again

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Arilip

@Arilip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Beautiful chapter 👏

Loved AAKASH overdose😉...no really it was amazing...

Khushi's presence is finally warming up Arnav's heart thus thawing the frozen emotions ...so he is finally trying to reach out ...

I always thought Arnav was scared of being like his father...

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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Hi Uthra... I just came across this story n I'm hooked... I'm really enjoying this emotional ride with you... Khushi's portrayal is awesome... N the relationship BTW akash n arnav is very beautifully written n how can I forget why am n khushi... Oh all n all I love all the characters :)
Eagerly waiting for the next update

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.

Akash and Arnav relationship of two brothers was so beautiful in the beginning until tragedy struck Arnavs life and ruined it all.

I am glad Akash and Arnav had a chat an d decided to work on being brothers again like before.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😊

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Awesome update

Thanks for the pm😉

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Fabulous part...
awww akash wants to get his nannav back !!!!
loved the flashback
awesome part

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

U, you are an incredible story teller...bas!

I never thought I would enjoy an Arshi less chapter as much as I enjoyed this one. The chapter may have been all about Aakash but it definitely made for quite a pleasant reading experience. His perspective gave us a great insight into how Arnav used to be and how he changed, what brought about the changes and so on. Aakash's exchanges with the whole family was just so darn amusing. The talk of getting a visually challenged girl as their bahoo was definitely quite a real and emotional scene. Aakash has seen the positive effect Khushi's presence has brought about for his Nannav and he won't rest until he makes everyone aware of it.

You made me grow quite fond of Aakash here! The bond between Aakash and Arnav was portrayed beautifully. Their confrontation in the present was probably exactly what Arnav needed and so Nani did both the boys a massive favour by setting the stage for this confrontation. What can I say I loved every single development in this chapter from Payal and Khushi's interaction to Aakash suggesting their whole family needed a psychiatrist in the household to the resurrection of that strong wonderful bond between Arnav and Aakash!

I can hardly wait for more U, bring it on whenever you can! :-)

PS. I am sure I have already congratulated you on the award but here it goes again! Many and Many congratulations for sharing an award with Mintsie! You both deserve it for being the awesome writers that you are!

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#548

I didn't realise that Akash was carrying around so much of emotional hurt.

I am glad that Akki and Nannav today took baby steps towards healing their cracked relationship and i am sure given the love and the deep bond that these two shared at one point of time...its all going to be good in the near future.