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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#531

That was simply superb...Nannav and Akki are back...

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esk1990

@esk1990

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

nice one... though it dint have any Arshi moments still loved it...

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#533

awesome update

loved the part on akash & arnav

hope their relationship becomes as before

so evryone in the family approves khushi

waiting for arshi scenes😊

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Super fantastic update

This update was all about charming princes of the city, Desi Boys of the Town, Nannav and Aki.

I love the flash backs sequence. Young inseparable Nannav and Aki were so cute and their childhood was adorable. it was amazingly written and with in moment covered the journey of lively and innocent nannav and Aki and their strong bonds of brothers to distant cousins Akash and Arnav Singh Raizada. i love the slap which Akash gave to his class fellow to bad mouth Arnav. Truly no matter how far they went away for each other they always look out for each other now and then.

Naniji is right time has come that the bridge the gaps in the family especially between the brothers. Arnav will have to accept his past and will have to stop running away from him, his past and fears of future. He is only the son of his mother who is brought up by strong naniji and immense love and care of his mama n mamaji. He and Anjali were indeed very lucky that they got such a lovely family to take care and help them when they were just going to be homeless and help them out through the pain of being orphan and betrayal.

The following bright morning will rise a the sun of new life filled with more happiness.

Love Payal and khushi conversation. "Mission dissect Arnav Singh Raizada" LOLZ Payal is very funny and that's why now someone has started dreaming about her, she deserves a guy like Akash.

Eagerly waiting for the next update to read abut the meeting of Shyam and Anjali. And i am sure Akash will pay a visit to payal again. The Raizada siblings are falling hopelessly in love.

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#535

First of all m really sorry for this late comment!
Loved the chapter!
God arnav's voice has effectively seduced khushi it seems! That husky seductive voice, with thr undertones of melancholy is enough to attract any female to ASR!!!
Coming to Arnav aakash part! It was really sad to see how such a beautiful brotherly bond was destroyed by one unfortunate incident! Not only lost his parents in it but akash also lost his brother in it! You know i can understand understsnd Akash's missing Arnav in his life and feeling that void but i am genuinely surprisrd to see the extent of damage it has caused to aakash! I mean change in his personslity! N to be very honest i am not able to connect with that part!
I mean behaviour of arnav could affect akash to this extent that he unconsciously tried to become wat his bro was at one point! That he lost himself n became into some one else!!I just didnt really understand or connect with this part! N i really didnt understand arnav's logic too of staying away from akash in particular
I guess it my lack of understanding of such deep emotions!
But its good that both have found a lil bit of their former selves again!

N i really liked the way akash allayed mami n nani 's fears n objections to a visually challenged daughter in law
Loved the chapter!!Waiting to read what happens next!

Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Uthra, thank You for updating and a very Hapoy Birthday to you Dad!

This update was spectacular!

I was thinking from the last update when Arnav sang, there was so much pain buried and all bottled up, now everything adds up!

Loved how you explained their childhood journey onwards, it so emotional, Now I can see hope Building, it's like a light at the end of the tunnel! Their Nani is amazing, and as they say, grandparents are full of wisdom, she would not give up, to add to that, the family's support is admirable!

Your story has such meaning and such positivity, it's inspiring to read your work!

Looking forward to the next.

PS: waiting for the two brothers to bond, like old times.

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inamajar

@inamajar

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Awesome update. Loved the bond they shared and will continue to share. And like Akash mentioned though there was distance they were there for each-other, now they will be there physically.