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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#901

res 😉

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Chapter 4:

Such a cute relationship. I loved payal's dialogues. Anjali's getting hints! Didn't Arnav hear Anjali saying he was khushi's cousins or the line " he had an extraordinary hearing power and therefore NK's words poured into his ears like molten lava" meant he was so irritated to listen to his sister conversing with NK that he heard nothing? Happy, payal's parents refused the alliance! ArShi convo? Can't wait.

Chapter 5:

Such a cute conversation between Arnav and khushi. Happy to see Anjali happy. Who is the unfazed creature?

Chapter 6:

Hmm. Payal is smart and observative. Ha ha. It was Akash, eh. I expected NK. Ha ha.

Akash and payal's convo was fun and gaiety. Both mean the same actually.

Did i just read "Humko man ki Shakti dena."?! Hayee. I know the full song thoroughly. Had to sing it as a member of a school club.

Aww. Glad Arnav shared his thoughts with khushi and the vise-versa. I love psychiatrists, though never met one. But i really find the working of brain, complex ! I think thats how it is meant to be!

Chapter 7:

I think khushi understands him well. Thats what the convo between her and payal hints me. Not sure about LOVE. It is a long way from here. The friendship and brotherhood Akash- Arnav shared in the past was very lovely. Sad it got effected due to Arnav's terrible loss. We can't actually blame him. People have different reactions to loss. And his was the most predictable one. At least they spoke to clear and wish this had happened long back. But nevertheless its never too late.

Chapter 8:

Good to read that Lavanya took care of herself and that to WELL. ha ha. bhaiyya? Even i was scared for an instant. ha ha. Nice that Arnav apologized and loved how mami took it.

Loved the way you portrayed the show.

So thats what khushi suffers from? And google rocks! ha ha.

Chapter 9:

So the inability can be cured. Lets see how shashi and shyaam react to khushi's words.

Chapter 10:

The first date was very nice. And you are a musician aren't you! Or at least a fan of carnatic vocal and instrumental?

Edited by ...Iyla... - 11 years ago

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#902

Thanks for the note.
Waiting for the next update.

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Mints23

@mints23

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#903

Viji!! 🤗

Take your time... I have too many updates to catch up of this SS!!

I promise to read up this week... hopefully before you update next! 😳

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#904

Unreserved on Pg 146 !

I am a girl of MY WORD... 😉

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#905

take ur time dear!

will be waiting.

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#906

Lovely update. Khushi's musing over Arnav and his thoughts was written beautifully. liked the Raizada's sibling time where they were pulling each others leg.

Sheethal is back and is planning to hurt Khushi. Hope Shyam and Arnav will be able to keep Khushi away from coming harm.
Thank you for pm

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#907

I read the entire story so far in one go. It's a beautiful story. Loving this story. Very well written 👏 😊 .

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Sunara

@princessunara

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#908

Oh i just read the 1st chapter n its beautifully penned.. commenting immediately lest i lose this story even by chance as the battery is low on my tab..otherwise it hooked me so much that i wouldnt have paused even for a moment before moving to read all u have written..

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#909

Hi.. just came across ur ff and reading ur story the first time. Wow. U really write great. I just couldnt resist myself and completed all chapters in thread 1 and commenting now. Such a wonderful story and beautifully written. Great.