TaaRey horror FF:Saviour Of The dark Soul #2 link added on pg 1

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TaaRey FF:Saviour Of The Dark Soul

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I M NOT GIVING LONG CHARACTER SKETCH. DE DIYA TO STORY ME MAZA NAHI AAYEGA.

TAANI SHEKHAWAT:

Main lead , 19 years old , in second year B.Com

REYAANSH SINGHANIA:

main lead , 21 year old , in first year M.Com

SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT:

Taani's brother , 21 years old, in first year M.Com

SHARON- NIL- SIMMI :

rey and swayam's friends. In first year M.Com , sharon and swayam like each other.

MR. AND MRS. SHEKHAWAT:

taayam parents.




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THIS IS I M FIRST TIME TRYING HORROR. SORRY IF ITS BAD.

-In Jodhpur-

A girl was standing near her window and was staring at the stars in the sky. Wind was playing with her soft silky curls. She was lost in her thoughts. Why every day she feel like someone is there with her all time. Someone who she cant see but feel. Why her parents always avoid it when she told them about it. Why its happening to her. Why her??

"taani..." she heard her mom calling her name from hall.

"ha ma...kya hua??" ask taani..

"chalo beta dinner ready hai..." said her mom

"aati hu ma..." said taani. She closed the curtains of the window and turn to go when she feel someone holding her belly so smoothly from behind. She can feel fingers marking circles on her belly. She immidgetly turn and saw there was no one. She again start walking when she heard sound of curtains. She stopped. She turn back to saw whts happening and her eyes widen. The curtains were opening. No one was there. She closed her eyes and again open...curtains were closed.

Suddenly she heard some voices echoing in her ears.

"tum meri ho...tum meri ho suhasi...hahahaha..."

Taani put her hands on her ear. She tightly closed her eyes. She ran to go out of the room. But the door automatically closed. She tried hard to turn the knob of the door. Curtains start to fly in air. Windows were flakering in air. Her hairs were flying in air. Someone was caressing her cheek with finger. She can hear evil laugh echoing. She was sweating badly. She was scared. Very scared. Suddenly atmosphier become quite.

"aaj ke liye itna hi kafi hai suhasi..." she heard evil voice and then automatically the door opened. She ran downstair.

When she reach in the hall she saw her brother swayam. She was panting badly. Her face all sweaty. Her parents were shocked. Bcoz swayam came hone after a year and he didnt know about the things happening with taani.

"taani...tumhe itna pasina kyu aa raha hai??" ask swayam...

she ran and hug him tightly. She felt safe in his arms.

"kya hua taani??" ask swayam.

"Aap kab aaye??"ask taani

"me bas abhi aaya. Thode dino me clg bhi start ho jayega. So socha tum sab se mil lu." said swayam and he broke the hug.

"tum batao...kya hua tumhe??" ask swayam.

"are pehle dinner to kar lo...baate baad me kar lenge..." said his mom.

"nahi...taani pehle ye batao kya hua??" ask sw. His parents get worried.

"bhai vo..." taani told what happen with her in the room.

Her parents got shocked. Because first time she heard his voice.

"taani tum thik ho na??" ask her mom worridly. Her dad came and hug her from side to believe that she is ok.

"ha ma...but ye suhasi kon hai??" ask taani.

"vo beta-"

"all this is bulshit...horror movies dekhna kam karo tum..." said sw.

"aur ha...tum ab mere sath mumbai chalogi. Mene vaha tumhara addmission karva diya hai. Aur iss baar koi bahana nahi chalega mom dad. Last year bhi aap ne mana kar diya tha but ab Taani mere sath aa rahi hai and its final." said swayam.

His parents said yes and thought " agar taani vaha jayegi to shayad uske sath ye sab nahi hoga. Bhej hi dete hai."

********

-In Mumbai-

Rey nil sharon and simmi were in rey's house.

"Yar abhi bhi college open hone me thode din baki hai. Ghar pe bor ho raha hu me...swayam to chala gaya jodhpur. Hum kya kare ab??" said nil.

"clg open hone ka wait...aur kya kar sakte hai..." said rey.

"hmmm...swayam se baat hui kya tumhari?? Ask sharon.

"nahi...vo phone nahi utha raha.." said rey...

"zarur apni behen ke sath busy hoga.." said sharon.

"behen???" said rey nil and simmi.

"ha...u know what aaj jab vo yaha se ja raha tha tab mujhe pata chala ki uski koi behen bhi hai" said sharon

"ohhh...ha usne kabhi bataya nahi.." said rey..."anyways guys kal mujhe clg jana hai as i m GS to meet vp sir. So i m going to sleep."

"ok...hum bhi chalte hai...bye.." said all and they leave.

Rey closed the door.

"swayam ki behen?? Kabhi bataya nahi usne ki uski koi sister hai. Are but rey tu kyu uske bare me soch raha hai. Soja varna kal late ho jayega." thought rey and went to sleep.

Here taayam and their parents also sleep after spending a gala time with each other.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm Concept and start
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey not fair...😳
teaser de ke neend uda di...😕

luved it...👏❤️

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the intro!!
It was amazing!!
Bechare rey ko nahi pata ki voh swayam ki behen ke baare mein nahi, apne pyaar ke baar mein soch raha hai!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey di..!!!
Chalo nice try..!!!
Ok looks like some haunty haunty past...
Ye suhasi kaun hai????
Aisi cheeze padke hi goosebumps aate hai..,
Ayyyeee..!!
Chalo yaar aap jaldi update karo..
Waiting waiting..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow interesting concept
very scary
taani is going to mumbai and ye suhasi kon hai
update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww
this will be interesting to read
Looking forward to this ff
update soon
And thank you for the PM
Do inform when you update
Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Wow!! Horror story...my fav :D
Di plzzz chapter 1 jaldi update karo...

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