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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: dh19
nice and itneresting
loved taarey convo
finally some part of taani's past is revealed
try to cont soon

thanks...i will soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: _PanCake_
amazing update...
taarey talk was lovely...
wow yeh taarey ka 2nd birth hai...
nw they need to knw d truth asap...
taarey thinking abt each other...
swaron part was nyc...
yeh spirit ne toh kuch zyada hi dara diya taani ko...
am eagerly waiting for nxt chap...
n i hope that will be more scary...
update soon... :)

thanks mehu...yes its second birth...they will know soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: taashareyam
kuch zyada horror ff hai
but i love it
i got a feeling
that its like savitri a show which came on life ok
but its more nice than it
and scary too
awesome update
i hope spirit taani ko tang karna band karde aur taani rey taarey ban jaayein

thanks dear...sorry idk about any savitri show...may be kuch similarity hogi...but its all my own imagination...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: tharu01
superb.. rey feeding taani.. n den d button scenes... aww.. n precap spirits plan flop😆😆 n taarey shopping...😉

thank u...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: ...pooja...
amazing update
taarey talk was nice
rey made her feed paratha that she never eat amazing rey has a magic
taarey chain button scene was superb rey's shirt button didnt coming out from her chain it means that had a connection with eachother
suhasi is guruji's daughter that means this is taani's second birth n rey also
taarey had mark on their wrist means rey is arjun wow
taarey are thinking about eachother superb
that creepu aatma scene was little bit horror but not much
taayam scene was nice
precap is interesting
update soon

thanks for the lovely comment pooja...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi
awesum update ..👏
taarey .. luvd dem ..!😳

suhasi ne taani k roop me janm lia h .. strange ..!😕

suhasi ka arjun .. dat means taani ka rey ..!😳

n inn dono k haath par cut bhi aaya ..😲

taayam .. luvd dem ..!👍🏼

swaron .. damn cute ..!😳

luvly update ..👍🏼

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm ..😊

thanks aditi...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: monikasaxena05
Superb update..
Taarey scene was nice..
Aww...taarey thinking abt each other😛..loved it
That creepy bhoot😡
Thnkgod zyada hurt nhi Kia usne Taani ko..
Precap is interesting
Continue soon!!!

thanks...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Natasha.
Aww Rey feeding Taani was so sweet
Possessive bhai can't let it lol
Taarey thinking about each other was too cute
I love how both was thinking if it's love at first sight ;)
Rey button stuck on Taani chain is beautiful, I think it means something :)
Omg!!! That evil is back again and him telling Taani to stop thinking about Rey is awful
I can't wait for Taani to fight back with Rey help of course
The blood writing on the wall, that thing dropping Taani, chocking her everything was damn scary
Love Taayam bonding as usual
Swayam knows how to get his Shona to smile
Wonderful update Dipsy, I love the entire update
Beautifully written
Sorry for the late comment Dipsy, I was a bit busy
And I didn't want to read at a speed and skip anything
Because u no how much I love reading your work :)

thank u nats...sorry in hurry warna reply bhi long deti...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997
rey ke shirt ka button uske chain se nikal nahi payiii
depicts a connection of ages
rey n taani thinking abt each other was superb
and its taani's 2nd birth
and according to guruji's prediction taarey ke wrist pe mark aachuka hai as soon as they meet each other

swayam taani scene was nice kitna care karta hai apni behan ka and woh apni bhai ka
precap is nice
will taani tel abt wt happned that night 2 rey
eager 2 knw dis time spirit ne kya kiya n how it failed as rey was with her
as .. Rey arjun hai!!!!!! Ab wo taani ko bacchae ga
loving it
waiting for the next...

thank u di...

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HI GUYS...I M HERE WITH AN UPDATE. BUT I M SO DISAPPOINTED BCOZ I PM 130+ BUDDIES AND I DIDNT EVEN GET 80+ LIKES. BUT ITS OK...I KNOW ITS EXAM TIME ALSO...SO KUCH LOG USME BUSY HONGE...BUT I SAW SOME PPL READING OTHER FFS AND NOT MINE...ITS OK IF U GUYS DONT WANNA READ MY FF. JUST TELL ME SO THAT I CAN REMOVE U FROM MY PM LIST OR U R FRRE TO UNBUDDY ME...I M UPDATING FOR THEM WHO ARE INTERESTED IN READING MY FF. RIGHT NOW I M NOT IN A MOOD TO SEND PMS. WILL SEND LATER IN THE MORNING. I KNOW KUCH DIN SE I M NOT READING OTHER FFS BCOZ I WAS NOT WELL AND MY GRANDMOM WAS ALSO ADMITTED IN HOSPITAL .I WRITE THIS CHAPTER IN HURRY.HOPE U ALL LIKE IT.

CHAPTER 6

Somehow swayam was sucseed in diverting taani's mind. Swayam was waiting for 7'o clock so that they all go for shopping and taani feel nice.

In the afternoon swayam call their parents and 4 of them talk for an hour. Taani didnt tell them about the red mark nor they asked her about the mark. Taani didnt tell them about the incidents happened with her because she didnt wanted her parents to be worried for her.

-In the evening-

All were in the mall for shopping.

"taani simmi will help u in shopping." said swayam

"its ok bhai...i can handle alone to. Plz guys if u want to shop for urself u r free...esa nahi hai ki mere sath hi shopping karo." said taani..

All the tym rey was observing her. She was so happy , smilling widely. She can hide her pain very well. But rey can see her fake smiles. He can bet on that taani is faking smiles. The pain behind her smiles is so deep.

Taani who was looking at rey in between her talks. When she found him looking at her she everytime avoid looking at him.

"nil simmi...u both shop together...i can manage alone." said taani..

"thanks taani..." said nil and simmi and they both went hand in hand to shop for them selves.

"taani...me aati hu tumhare sath.." said sharon..

"are nahi nahi sharon...aap na bhai ke sath jao..." said taani and a blush appear on sharon's face. Then taani wishper in her ears "enjoy sharon bhabhi" and sharon hit on her shoulder lightly.

"kyu? Me aap ko bhabhi nahi bula sakti kya??" ask taani in a low voice.

"bula sakti ho...but ye tumhara idiot bhai mujhe propose to kare...me to kabse uske pyar me pagal hu.." said sharon.

"karenge karenge...aap dekhte jao bas...ye mere idiot buddhu bhai ko pyar and all,ye sab samjhne me thoda time lagta hai. U know na girls pyar ko zyada achhe se samajh sakti hai." said taani. Both the girls hifi eachother and laugh.

"ye tum dono kya baate kar rahe ho??" ask swayam.

"umm..kuch nahi bhai...its secret between us..." said taani..

"ohh...new friend kya mil gayi tum apne bhai se ab apne secret nahi share kar rahi..." said swayam...

"are swayam...girls are like that...apni baate chupati hai...ab dekho na sharon ne bhi mujhe , apne best friend ko apna secret nahi bataya." said rey putting his hand over swayam's neck.

"rey...tum na...-" said sharon.

"kya me na...sahi to bola.." said rey...

"achha ok bas...me to chali apni shopping karne...u guys go and shop for urself." said taani and she start walking.

"ok rey...hum bhi chalte hai..." said swayam.

"means u and sharon??" ask rey..

"yes.." said swayam...

Rey whistled at them and said "wow...my friends didnt inform me about their date.."

"esa kuch nahi hai rey...actually its not a date...we will just talk about us bcoz we both know we like eachother and we want to confirm ye pyar me badal sakta hai ya nahi." said swayam..

"all the best dude.." said rey..

"thanks.." swayam hug rey..

"achha sun.."

"ha kya hua??"

"can i acompany taani?? Me akela bor ho jaunga.." said rey.

"ya sure...take care of her plz.."

"thanks dude...i will...chal milte hai pgir.."

"bye.."

"bye.."

Both bid bye to eachother.

*********

Rey ran to catch taani.

"taani..." he shout as he spot her.

Taani heard her name and she turn and saw rey running toward her.

As he was running towards taani he collide with a girl. Both were about to fall but rey manage to save both of them.

"m sorry..." the girl said. Rey smiled at her and she went away. Rey again start walking towards taani.

Taani saw this. She was somehow jealous with that girl. But she herself didnt know why she was jealous.

"hi.." said rey standing beaide her. But taani was in her thoughts. He wave his hand but she was still lost. Rey shook her holding her shoulder and taani came back to her sense.

"umm...aap yaha??" ask taani and she start walking.

"vo kya hai na...me akela hu...so socha tumhare sath hi shopping karu." said rey walking beside her. Their hands brushed with eachother while walking. Both take their hands away as they felt current running down their spines. Taani started to looking for knee length frocks for herself.

"vese ek baat puchu tum se??" ask rey..

"ha puchiye na.."

"vo...tumne kal juth bol rahi thi na ki tumhe yaad nahi tumhe ye chot kaise lagi??" ask rey..

Taani look at him with wide eyes.

"ese kya dekh rahi ho?? Ask rey.

"vo...umm..aap ko kese pata ki me.." ask taani..

"mujhe bas pata chal gaya...so tell me the truth.." said rey..

"umm...me aap ko kyu batau??" said taani picking four frocks and put them on her hands. She start walking toward the cash counter.

"ek min taani.." said rey..

"ab kya hua?" ask taani and she turn toward rey..

"actually tumpe blue colour zyada suit karega...ye brown wala mat lo..." said rey. He took the brown frock and put it back. He took blue frock and gave it to taani. Taani didnt say anything and start walking toward the cash counter. She smiled looking the blue frock.

"where can i get jeans and t-shirts??" ask taani while the boy prepare the bill.

"on second floor mam...u can shop for party wear too and long and mini skirts are there too mam.' said the counter boy.

"thank u.." said taani. "ye frocks me abhi yaha rakh sakti hu na??"

"sure mam...u can." said the boy with a smile. Taani too smile at him.

Rey who was watching all this didnt like it a bit. He just turn his face in another direction.

"lets go.." said taani when she came back to rey.

Both started walking.

********

-SwaRon-

Swaron were walking and talking with eachother. They talk about each others like dislike. Swayam was little shocked because sharon already know about his likes and dislikes. Sharon was smilling looking him shocked. When they were walking suddenly a girl collide with sharon. She was walking holding a coffee mug in her hands. Coffee fell on sharon's hand.

"aahh..." sharon screamed as she felt hot coffee on her hand.

"what the...hey cant u walk properly??" swayam littrally scold the girl.

"sharon...r u ok??lets go in washroom fast..." swayam drag her in washroom. He didnt care if it was girls washroom or boys. He drag her fast. Luckily there waa no one in the washroom.He put her hand under the tap and turn on the tap. Sharon felt relief as she feel cold water on her hand. She look at swayam . He was so worried for her. Sharon smiled at him. Tears were there in her eyes.

"r u ok sharon??" ask swayam. He found her looking at him.

"i m ok swayam." said sharon. She hug him and was smilling like idiot.

Swayam also hug her back. He realise that actually vo jise like samajh raha tha its love. He litterally sqeez her in his arms.

"swayam i cant breath.." said sharon.

"sorry...sorry sharon..." said swayam and he loosen his grip. Both came out of the washroom after two minutes.

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Taarey enter in the lift. There was no one in the lift.

"tumne bataya nahi exactly kal kya hua tha??" said rey. The lift door closed and taani pressed second floorbutton.

"vo...umm...kal actually...-"

Suddenly the lift stopped in between.

"ab iss lift ko kya hua??" said taani with irritation. She was going to press the button again but the lights went off. But taarey can see each other. It was not totally dark.

"tumhe andhere se dar nahi lagta??" ask rey..

"nahi...har ladki ko andhere se dar lage ye zaroori to nahi hai na.." said rey...

Rey was impressed with her answer.

Slowly sloely taani can see smoke in front of her. Her eyebrows curved and she bit her lowerlip.

Rey notice this.

"kya hua taani??ese kya dekh rahi ho??" ask rey looking in the direction where taani was looking. He didnt fine anything there.

Now taani can see the spirit near the door of the lift. She went closer to rey and hold his arm with both her hands. The spirit start laughing but only taani can hear him.

"kya hua?? Tumhe to dar nahi lag raha tha na??" said rey. While he free his hand from her grip and put it around her shoulder. Taani clutch his shirt from his waist.

The spirit came closer to taani. He get angry when he saw taani with rey. He was going to grab her hairs in his hand but as he try to grab her hairs he felt like he got electric shock. He was thrown away by the unknown power. He was so shocked and taani too. Her eyes went wide when she saw this. That spirit stand up and came near taani in a second. He raise his hand to slap taani but as her try to slap again he was thrown away by the unknown power. When he raise his hand to slap taani , taani burried her face in rey's chest and hug him tightly.

The spirit was shocked and he vanished from there angrily. E was not able to digest that his attack didnt hurt her.

His powers didnt work because rey was with her. His power of love protect taani from that spirit.

"taani?? Kya hua achanak??" ask rey putting his hand on her back. He try to break the hug but she was not allowing. He forcefully broke the hug and saw her face. The same fear was there on her face when he saw her first time. Both of them's faces were so close. Both can feel eachothers hot breath. Rey remove her hairlocks which were on her face and tuck them behind her ears. Taani look into his eyes and she get lost in his eyes. She came back in her sense and she try to rest her head on his chest but it rested on his lips. His lips touched her forehead and both felt a new feeling.

The lift start working and taani realise that she is in rey's arms. She seprate herself from him. She set her hairs properly. Both avoid looking at eachother.

"umm...tum itna dar kyu gayi??" ask rey...

"USKE BARE ME SOCHO BHI MAT VARNA USKE LIYE ACHHA NAHI HOGA"

Taani remember his warning.

"vo...umm...aap ne cockroach nahi dekha kya??" taani said innocently.

"what?? Tum ek cockroach se dar gayi??" ask rey and he laugh at her.

Meanwhile the lift reach second floor and they came out of the lift. Taani become angry when she saw him laughing at her. She start walking after giving him an angry glare.

"achha tumne bataya nahi kal tumhare sath exactly kya hua tha??" ask rey while walking behind her.

"nothing happened with me." said taani while checking out the jeans there.

"oh comeone...tell me now...me swayam nahi hu jo tumhare uss innocent juth ko sach maan lu." said rey..

"actually i was walking in sleep last night so thats why i came on the road." said taani while choosing few jeans for herself.

"really??" ask rey.

"yes...really.." said taani.." now u plz keep ur mouth shut. I want to shop" said taani.

"ohk.." said rey and he show her he zipped his mouth.

After half an hour taani was done with jeans top and long skirts. Now she wanted to buy some party dresses.

All the time rey was watching her , observing her and staring at her. Her innocent eyes were talking something else than her words. Rey was sure that she was not afraid of the cockroach and he didnt believe on her "sleep walking juth". But he also dont want to irritate her by asking about that night again and again.

Taani was confused about her outfit so she think to ask rey whichone to choose. She found rey looking at her. For few sec they were caught in an eyelock but then rey came in his sense and start looking here and there. She went to him and call him by tapping his shoulder.

Rey raised his eybrows and ask her what happen.

Taani show him two dresses and asked him to choose which one is better with her eyes.

"umm...ok so...ye lo...ye wala tum par bahot achha lagega..." said rey choosing one dress

"ohk...let me try it." said taani and she went to try that dress.

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Precap: full on scary update

Edited by .CuteKittyCat. - 11 years ago

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