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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">awesum concept ..!👏</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">luvd d CS n banner ..!👍🏼</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">prologue .. scary ..!👍🏼</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">suhasi ..? who's she ..?😲</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">n vo ladka kon h ..? 😕</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">luvd taani's parents n swayam's concern towards taani ..!👍🏼</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">nil-simmi-sharon-rey .. der convo was nyc ..!👍🏼</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">update soon ..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">thank u 4 d pm ..😊</font>

thank u so much aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI GUYS...HERE I M WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER. WHEN LAST NIGHT I WAS THINKING ABOUT THE CHAPTER...I ACTUALLY GOT SCARED...LOL...I LOVE HORROR MOVIES AND BOOKS BUT AFTER READING OR WATCHING MUJHE NEEND NAHI AATI...😆😆 ...ENJOY THE UPDATE.



CHAPTER 1


"Taani..." said swayam while coming in the house. It was 6 pm of the evening. Swayam had gone to meet his old friends of school. He felt so good after meeting them. All the old memories were refreshing.

"ji bhai...aa gaye aap...kaisa raha aap ka get together??" ask taani coming from upstairs.
"it was awesome taani...and see me tumhare liye kya laya..." said swayam showing her a cute stuffed teddy bear.

"aww...teddy bear..." said taani and she start coming down veryfast.

When she was at the last two stairs she fell down from the stairs. But immidgetly swayam ran and hold her so she didnt get any injury.

"kya taani tum bhi...dekh ke chala karo na..." said swayam."ye lo tumhara teddy bear...tumhe hi to milne wala tha...itna jaldi jaldi aane ki kya zarurat thi?? Gir jaati to??" swayam littrally scold her.

"sorry bhai.." said taani with a weak smile.

"ab me aap ko kya batau bhai...i felt like some one pushed me from behind. Agar aap ko bataungi to aap yakin nahi karenge...pata nahi pichle ek saal se mere sath ye sab kyu ho raha hai." thought taani.

"taani..." swayam called her when he saw her lost in her thoughts. But taani didnt listen to him..

"taani..." he again call her and put his hand on her shoulder. Taani get scared when swayam put his hand on her shoulder.

"aahh..." taani screamed.

"kya hua??? Itna dar kyu gayi tum??" ask swayam..

"kuch nahi bhai...vo bas ese hi...thanks for this teddy bear.." said taani..

"u welcome shona.." said swayam...

"plz bhai mujhe shona mat bulaya karo...i dnt like it.." said taani with cute frown.

"but i love to call u shona.." said swayam..."ok suno...apne bags packkar dena...kal dopahar ko hum ja rahe hai...thik hai??"

"ok bhai...i will.." said taani.

Just then their mom dad came there.

"hi dad...hi mom.." said swayam..

"hi beta...how was ur get together.??"ask his dad.

"it was great dad...achha kal hume jana hoga dad.." said swayam.

"ohh...to kal se hum apni princess ko miss karenge.." said mr. Shekhawat..

"awww...i will miss u too papa." said taani and hug him.

"aur ma ko??"

"i will miss you too ma..." said taani kissing her mum's cheek.

"ok ok...chalo me dinner banati hu. Swayam tum fresh ho jao. Taani tum apna bag pack kar do. Phir humesha ki tarah last minutes karne mat bethna." said mrs. Shekhawat.

"ha ma...me bags pack kar dungi...aap tension mat lo." said taani.

*********

Taani was packing her bag . She was folding her cloths and putting in her bag.

But suddenly her hands hold her own neck. She was not in her controll. She was clutching her own neck with her hands.

"aahhh...ye kya ho raha hai mujhe??" taani almost scream. She was now feeling lake of oxygen. She was feeling like she is gona die in few seconds.

But then her grip loosen on her neck and she remove her hands from her neck. She ran and grab a glass of water from the table and gulped it down. She was breathing heavily. Sweat drops were clearly visible on her forehead. When she was drinking water she heard sounds of cloths. She was shievring in fear. She slowly turn and her eyes went widen.

Her cloths which she put in the bag were in air. All the clothes were in air. Suddenly all cloths came flying and fell on taani. She was so scared that her voice was chocked. She hurriedly remove all cloths and look here and there. There was no one in the room. The lights started to turn on and off. She become more scared.

"dekho...tu...tum ye mere...mere sath kyu kar rahe ho?? Mene kya...kya bigada hai tumhara?? Kon ho tum??" taani could hardly say this lines when someone grab her hairs from back and he drag her in the middle ofthe room.

"aaahhh...plz chod do mujhe" said taani. He leave her hairs.

"achha...ye lo chod diya..."she hear a scary echoing voice .

"kon ho tum...???" ask taani..

"kon hu me??? Hahahaha...tumhari maut..."said that invisible person.

"mau...maut..??" said taani shivering in fear...

"ha...but tension mat lo...abhi nahi marunga...uske liye abhi der hai..."

"tum kyu mere piche pade ho??? Plz chod do mujhe..." taani pleaded...

"chod du...hahahaha...kaise chod du tumhe suhasi...tumne choda tha jab mene tumse apni jaan ki bhikh maangi thi?? Mujhe maar diya tha apne uss aashiq ke liye...tab mene kasam khayi thi me tumhe kisi aur ki kabhi nahi hone dunga."

"suhasi??? Dekho...tumhe koi misunderstanding hui hai. Me suhasi nahi taani hu..." said taani.

Suddenly a man with a scary face appear in front of her.

"aahhh..." taani screamed after watching him. She take back steps and stampped on her own foot. Her back collide with the wall.

"tum hi ho suhasi..."

"dekho me suhasi-"

"taani..." swayam knocked on the door.

Taani open her mouth to scream but he clumpped her mouth with some power.

"tum ja rahi ho yaha se...par tum jaha jaha jaogi me vaha aaunga..."

Taani closed her eyes tightly. When swayam again knock on the door and taani open her eyes she was shocked. Her clothes were in the bag and there was no one in the room.

"taani..." swayam again knock on the door. Taani rub her palm on her forehead and remove the sweat. She calm down herself and then open the door.

"ha bhai...sorry me washroom me thi." said taani.

Swayam came in. He look here and there doubtly.

"yaha koi tha kya??" ask swayam. He look at her. She was looking scared.

"taani tum kuch chupa to nahi rahi?? Mene tumhari chikhne ki aawaz suni..."

Taani hugged swayam.

"nahi bhai...me kuch nahi chupa rahi..." said taani in a sad tone.

"to phir itni dari hui kyu ho tum??" ask swayam. He caress her hairs with one hand and her back with another hand.

"vo bhai..kya hai na...chipkali...ha chipkali dekhi to me dar gayi thi...isi liye..." said taani.

"to ab horror movies dekhne wali chipkali se dar gayi...!!!" said swayam.

"meri to life hi horror ho gayi hai bhai." thought taani and closed her eyes and snuggle in to swayam more.

"bag pack ho gaya??" ask swayam.

"ha bhai...ho gaya..."

"ok...chalo dinner kar lete hai." said awayam and both went down to take dinner.

*******

-At Night-

Taani was sitting on her bed,praying to god.

"god...ye sab kyu ho raha hai mere sath?? Me to janti bhi nahi ye suhasi kon hai aur ...aur vo aadmi...kitna daravana hai. Plz help me god...plz help me. Kya esa koi nahi hai jo meri help kar sake??"

When taani was thinking this rey's face was shown. He was sitting on sofa doing some work in his laptop.

"kya koi nahi jo mujhe is aadmi se bachaye??"

Meanwhile rey's face .was shown. He was drinking coffy while working on his laptop.

"plz god...help me...plz" taani pray to god and drift off to sleep.

Here rey was checking the informations of all new entries of the college.

And while checking he come to read a name "TAANI SHEKHAWAT"

"Taani Shekhawat??? Kahin ye sawayam ki sister to nahi??" thought rey...

He open her informations but he saw only a blank boxes. There was no info about taani.

"blank??? But samir ne kaha tha usne sari info daal di hai to iski information delete kaise ho gayi??" thought rey. "chalo koi baat nahi...kal clg jake phir se add kar dunga."

He turn off his laptop and went to sleep.

********

TaaYam's parents were sitting tensed. They were thinking about taani. They were scared for her.

"vaha taani thik to rahegi na??" ask her mom..

"swayam hai na vaha. Tum chinta kyu karti ho??"

"but pichle ek saal se jo uske sath ho raha hai vo...hamari beti bahot musibat me hai. Hum kuch bhi nahi kar rahe hai." said her mom crying.

"dekho..agar vo musibat me hai to bhagwan ne uski musibat dur karne ka koi rasta bhi banaya hoga. Kya pata vaha ja ke usse vo rasta mil jaye." said her dad.

"bhagwan kare usse vo rasta jaldi mil jaye. Taani ko to pata bhi nahi ki vo hi suhasi hai." said her mom..

"ha...pata nahi uska kya reaction hoga jab usse apni sachhai pata chalegi..." said her dad.

Suddenly a a flower vase,which was kept on the table...started to move. And it fell down from the table.

"haaww...ye flowervase apne aap kaise-"

"apne aap nahi mene giraya hai isse..." they heard a scary voice .

"tum...??" said mr. Shekhawat

"ha me...ye batane aaya hu ki ye mat sochna suhasi yaha se chali jayegi to me use chod dunga...bilkul bhi nahi...me usse yaha se apne sath le kar hi jaunga...aur us se pehle uske sath ek haseen raat bhi bitaunga...hahahahaha..."

"dekho plz hamari beti ko chod do...dekho me tumhare samne hath jodti hu." said her mom..

"chod du...ese kese...aakhir itne saal tak uska intezar kiya hai...usse usi din yaha se le jaunga jis din usne mujhe mara tha..." said the person. And then his evil laugh was echoing in the room. And after sometime it was completly silence in the room.

"hey mahadev...meri beti ki raksha karna." said mr. Shekhawat. He console his wife and then both drifted off to sleep.

Precap: taayam in mumbai.

so...how was the update guys?? i m really so excited to read your comments. I just hope its up to your expectations.

P.S - add this acc for pms.

Edited by ..Dipu_TaaRey.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Yipee me 1st
Nice update thoda scary tha
Edited by nidaTaarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
scary yaar
bechari taani

swayam is caring for her
luved their bonding

hate that dark spirit

finally taarey will meet
waiting for it
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
amazing update...loved it...
waiting 4 the next part...
thanks 4 the...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
First chapter full rocking
Love it whole chapter
Swayam give Taani teddy bear... Aww
Who is the men puch taani in stairs... Thanks good right time par swayam aa gaya
Wow Taani ja rahe h apni princess charming ke pas... Yupee bole bole
Taani room scene horror... I am still scary
Taani pray to God... now rey face appear... Perfect timing God ji...
Taani ne Rey ka face dekha tha????
Rey searching for Taani information... Taani information black how????
Taani parent knew Taani past... Plz reveal suhani past
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
wow
this the only thing I can say
Wow
Thank you for the PM
It was super duper scary
Do PM me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Bit scary and amazing update
Ok taani is suhasi but how ?
Rey is saviour loved that part shown by u. That taani praying and ilon the other side rey is shown.
Waiting for next part
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
really too excited loving it pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW! what a scary updt yr...
OMG! taani hi suhasi hai...bt ye kaise huya???
must say she is very strong...
ye aatma to bohot jyada torture kar rahi hai taani pe...
per agar taani hi suhasi hai to uska aashiqe kon tha???
aur collage website se taani ki info kais egayab ho gayi???
want to know...pls updt soon...can't wait

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