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Anushka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

OMG!

Just read all the parts today and i must say you are simply amazing!!!
Gawd tha taarey part was just out of this world! awesome...plz dun frgt to PM me...!

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Finally i read chap 7..
So evil spirit cant harm tani...if
she s with rey...wow...tats cool...
Its becoming so intrested

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

ok guys...first of all sorry ...and second i will surely update it tomorrow.

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raddhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.
ok guys...first of all sorry ...and second i will surely update it tomorrow.

Waiting

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

hi guys...i know i m late...m so sorry for that. I was very busy. I almost read all pms till now. I read all ffs and liked too. But did not commented bcoz of less tym. Plz dont mind it. Keep pming me. I will surely read all pms. If u didnt find my like on ur ffs dont hessist to pm me and remind me to read ur ff.

P.S : add my pm account ..Dipu_TaaRey.. for pms.

i hope u all like this chapter. I write it in hurry. Didnt read it again. Avoid mistakes.

CHAPTER 7

"ok...let me try this.." taani said and she went in the trial room of the mall.

She closed the door and lock it. She saw her reflection in the mirror. She can see sadness on her face.

"taani...kyu itni sadness dikh rahi hai tere face pe??" she start talking with herself.

"bhai dekhenge to kya sichenge?? Dekh ...hamesha smiley smiley raha kar...bhai ko bhi achha lagega." she told to her self..she put her both index finger on the corner of her lips and make a smiley face.

"wow...dekh ...smiley face kitna achha lag raha hai..." she again said to herself.

"are pagal...u came here to try this dress and u started ur bakwas." said taani slightly hitting her palm on her head.

She changed her dress and saw herself in the mirror.

"hmm...rey...maan na padega...your choice is too good. I like this dress." said taani.

"chalo rey ko dikha ke aati hu."
she turn and try to open the door. She hold the knob and try to open the door but it was not opening.

"are...ye door open kyu nahi ho raha??" thought taani. She raise her hand to knock on the door but suddenly the lights went off.

"ab ye lights ko kya ho gaya??" she thought. Suddenly she can smell a really bad smell...like a dead body...she look here and there but she can only see darkness.

In one corner of the room she found a pair of eyes staring at her. The pair of eyes were not brown or black. It was sparkling red eyes. And in the darkness it was scaring taani. Taani blinked her eyes for two or three times and gulped her saliva. She rub her hand on her forehead and she can feel sweat on her forehead. Suddenly that pair of eyes vanished and she can see light coming throught the wall. She went near it and pushed the wall and it opened.

Taani took a few steps back...how can a wall opened...she can see a forest outside. She decided to go out of the room. She step out from the room and suddenly she heard crying sounds of dogs. She turn to go back but instead of going in she collide with a hard surfes.

"huh...ye bandh kese ho gaya??" she thought and she try to knock on tge wall.

The soil was soft. Her hills were diging in the soil. Suddenly she feel some movements around her legs. She felt ticklish. She looks down and hrr eyes widen. She saw cockroaches around her legs.

"aahhh..." she screamed and start running from there. The forest was very scary. She can hear owl's voices. And other insects humming.

Slowly she slow down and start walking. The bad smell was getting stronger. She was looking here and there and walking.

Suddenly she hear a scream. She stopped. And look here and there. Now it was pin drop silence. She can only hear her own heart beat. And the only sourse of light was the moon.

"dhak dhak...dhak dhak.."

Her heart was poundring fast. She put her hand on her chest and feel her heartbeat.

*********

Meanwhile rey was waiting for taani to comeout of the trial room. It was almost 10 minutes.

His phone rang and it was showing swayam calling.

"rey kaha ho tum log??" ask swayam.

"taani dress try kar rahi hai...hum thodi der me aate hai. Tum log mall restaurant me wait karo." said rey..

"ohk...hum vaha jate hai..tum dono jaldi aao..." said rey and both cut the call.

**********

Suddenly taani notice a body lying. She ran there and try to shook the body. As she turn the body she scream in fear. Her face was half burn.

Suddenly she open her eyes and taani take some back steps. She stand up. Her eyes were sparkling in the darkness. Her hairs were thick but they were free. They were flying in the air. Her hands were black. Her nails were so long...5-6 cm long. She start laughing and walking towards taani. Taani become more scared. She turn back to ran away. But she notice more ghost comming towards her from every direction.

Slowly all the ghosts were around taani. Laughing at her. They were looking at her like she was a piece of meat which they want to eat. They start coming more closer. Taani gulped hard...close her eyes and with all her courage she push one of the ghost and start running , without looking back.

She run run and run. And then stood near a tree. She look back and didnt notice any ghost coming towards her. But syddenly the soil become so soft that taani fell down. The soil vanished and she fell down in a room...or may be cave.

"aahh..." she scream in pain. There was not much light.

Then she saw the spirit coming towards her.

"ohh...to ye sab iska kaam tha.." thought taani.

"kesi ho suhasi..." ask the spirit. But taani didnt answer him back.

When she ignore him he become angry. He lok in a corner and a ghost appear there.

The ghost walk toward taani and hold her hairs tight.

"aahh..." taani screamed in pain.
"tum chahte kya ho??"

"me to bas tumhe chahta hu suhasi.." said the spirit. He walk closer to taani and run his finger on her cheek to colarbon. " aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe. Me tumhara srikanth aur tum meri suhasi."

"kabhi nahi..." said taani and she push him hard. Srikanth fell on the ground. He become more angry. He close his eyes and then open. And as he open his eyes taani was in air and then with full speed she collide with a nearby wall.

She fell down.

"aahh..." she was screaming in pain. Her forehead and hands were bleeding. She again can smell the bad smell here. She look in the direction and saw three four dead bodies walking towards her. They were smelling so bad. Taani close her nose to avoid the smell. They were looking so dangerous. As they come closer taani stand up and run from there...but again she collide with a body.

"aahh...aahhh..." she again screamed as she saw his creepy face.

"achha chalo kisi se milvata hu.." said srikanth...

And then two people appear. She couldnt see their face. As they came close she can see their face. They were rey and swayam. Both of them were red due to blood...there eyes were sparkling green. There face was fadded white. They smile creepily at taani. Their nails were long.

"bhai...rey...aap ko ye kya hogaya??" said taani and she ran toward them. As she reach there their face change. They were not actual reyam. They laugh at her and then both scratch her arm with their nails.

Taani screamed in pain as blood started to coming out of her skin. All the creepy aatma and ghost start laughing at her.

"dekh lo ye jagah...tumhe mere sath yahi pe aana hai suhasi...marne ke baad.

Taani was sitting down. Srikanth hold her hairs and drag her in the center.

"dekhi ye jagah??" ask he.

"taani...taani..." suddenly taani can hear rey's voice echoing..

"rey...rey aap kaha ho??" taani stand up and look here and there.

Srikanth suddenly feel his powers weak against rey. He try to do something with taani but he was not able now. He become more angry. He notice a wooden piece. He took it and hit it hard on her head and everything went black for taani.

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It was now 30 minutes and taani didnt came out of the trial room. In this 30 minutes rey also pay the bills of her dresses through swayam's creditcard.

He thought to knock on the door.

"taani..." he called her but taani didnt answer.

"taani...jaldi karo...der ho rahi hai.." said rey but still taani didnt answer.

Now he panicked...

"taani...taani..." he start banging on the door.

When taani didnt respond he thought to break the door.

He hit the door with his shoulder but one of the employee stop him.

"sir...kya kar rahe hai aap??" ask the employee..

"meri friend andar hai...ab tak bahar nahi aayi aur andar se koi ans bhi nahi de rahi so i m breaking the door." said rey..

"but sir...try to call her...ese darwaza mat-"

The employee couldnt complete his sentense bcoz rey pushed him and he fell on the ground.

Rey hit the door for two three times and it broke. He ran in and saw taani lying unconsious on the ground. Her forehead was bleeding. Her arms were bleeding.

He sat near her and try to wake her up.

"taani...taani aankhe kholo.." said rey..

"taani..." he tap on her cheek for few times.

Taani slowly open her eyes. She can saw a blur image saying something. Slowly slowly the image was clearing and she saw rey calling her. She immidgetly sat up and hugged rey tightly...burrying her face in his chest and start crying.

"taani...kya hua ??? Tumhe ye chot kese lagi??" rey asked.

Taani stood on her knees and hug him more tightly..burrying her face in crook of his neck. Rey also hold her from her waist tightly.

"taani kya hua??" asked rey. But suddenly he felt her grip loose...he broke the hug and notice her unconcious again. He scoop her in his arms and start walking out side of the trial room. He saw so many employes outside. He nade her lay on a nearby bench. And he dial swayam's number.

Precap: reyam taking care of taani. Taani's first day in college.

Edited by .CuteKittyCat. - 12 years ago

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jallwa_taarey

@jallwa_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Yes ysss ysss am first at fist time in your ff

Yappp

Anyways update

Was scary and amazing

Taani dress was nice

The precap seems really interesting

Can't wait to see taani in collage

Omg what is going to happen to her. If the spirit come college

That would be so scary

Ohhh I really want to know what taani going to say about her hand and forehead bleeding

Thank you for the PM

Loved the update

Love ya

Please update WIMD

Made a new ff and forgotten the other

Not nice

(Not in a rude way okay ) ( but if you find it rude then sorry)

Anyways thank you for this lovely update once again

Edited by jallwa_taarey - 12 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Wow awsm update

Very scary

Continue soon

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Omg!!! Taani is in trouble
This update was scary, I had goosebumps reading it :)
All those creep after Taani and she can seems to find her way out...
Rey finally decided to call her and his voice protect Taani a little
Rey is Taani savior, I wish Taani share her feelings with him
Rey breaking the door and get his Taani out is amazing
I love how Taani hug him tight
Superb update Dipsy, beautifully written
I love it

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#639

Great update :)

It was hell scary ...

Taani ko aur kitna trouble doge ...

Update sooon ;)

PM me :)

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Naaz

@zulfinazi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#640

awsm updt
it was scary n amzng
rey breaking the door was superb
nw want to c wat taani wil say abt her wounds
precap is intresting
taani's first day im clg nic
will the spirit cm there also
updt sn

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