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premlata

@Missu_TR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Wow Super lovely update

Rey didn't want go but Jana pada...

Swayam soo much worried For shona... Rey tell swayam Taani mere ghar par hai... Nice swayam relief

Taani nightmare scary... Omg

Taarey eyes lock... So cute

Wrist kisne badae... Esse pta chlta Rey ko Taani ke past se connection hai... Yupee

Rey feed Taani and taani ke nakhre... Lovely

Swayam uncomfortable... Hehehe

Update soon

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: premlata
Wow Super lovely update
Rey didn't want go but Jana pada...
Swayam soo much worried For shona... Rey tell swayam Taani mere ghar par hai... Nice swayam relief
Taani nightmare scary... Omg
Taarey eyes lock... So cute
Wrist kisne badae... Esse pta chlta Rey ko Taani ke past se connection hai... Yupee
Rey feed Taani and taani ke nakhre... Lovely
Swayam uncomfortable... Hehehe
Update soon

thanks dear...yes they have connection with each other...

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premlata

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Update chahiye

Kab mile ga

Update update

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Priyanka Saha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.
thanks for the lovely comment priyanka...i will today ir tomorrow...

u r welcome cutie pie...i'll be waitng...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha

u r welcome cutie pie...i'll be waitng...

i love my new name...almost 90% story is done...ho sake to aaj mid night ko hi update de dungi...

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Priyanka Saha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.
i love my new name...almost 90% story is done...ho sake to aaj mid night ko hi update de dungi...

thank u so much...i'm glad that u lyk it...koi jaldi nehi hai...take ur tym...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

HELLO MY LOVELY READERS. 🤗

I M BACK WITH THE UPDATE. ENJOY...

CHAPTER 5

Taani was sitting on the bed and rey was sitting in front of her and was feeding her paratha. Swayam came and stood near the door. He was facing rey's back.He was little uncomfy when he saw rey feeding taani but then he smiled at rey's care for taani.

Here when rey was about to feed her last bite of paratha when taani saw that rey's first button of shirt was not there. Rey's chest was visible because of it. As taani saw this she close her eyes.

"kya hua??" ask rey as he saw taani sitting with closed eyes.

"umm...vo..." she point a finger at his shirt. Rey look down and saw. He smiled at her innosense.

"vo button tut gaya hai so..." rey said and adjust his shirt.

"ho gaya?" ask swayam as he enter in the room.

"umm...ha bas ye thoda hi baki hai." said rey.

Taani took it and eat. "ho gaya bhai.." said taani..

"ok...by the way rey...tumhe magic aata hai kya??" ask swayam.

"nahi to kyu??"ask rey making space for swayam to sit on the bed between them.

"vo isi liye because kabhi aalloo ke parathe na khane wali ladki ko tumne ek paratha khila diya." said swayam putting his hand around his shoulder.

"ohhh...vese taani ne bola tha but mene phir bhi khila diya." said rey..

Meanwhile reswam get a call from sharon. And he went out of the room to attend the call.

Here taarey were alone in the room. Taani look at her chain and then at rey.

"m sorry about the button." said taani..

"its ok...tumne purposly nahi kiya.." said rey..

"ha...but ye to nikal hi nahi raha hai..." said taani trying to remove it.

"let me help you." said rey and he went closer to her.

He hold her chain with his hands and his fingures touched her upper chest and neck area. Both felt a sentation in their body. Both look at eachother and get lost in each other's eyes. But soon rey came back to his sense and again try to remove the button. But it wasnt coming out.

"its ok rey...me baad me kar lungi." said taani and rey let go off her chain.

Swayam came back in the room.

"bhai chalo na ghar chalte hai...phir aap ko pata hai na mere clothes bhi lene hai..."said taani..

"are ha me to bhool hi gaya...achha rey...sham ko free hai na tu??" ask swayam...

"ha...kyu??"

"great...we all will meet at xyz mall in evening and then sath me dinner karenge." said swayam.

"ok...nice idea..." said rey...

"wow...nice idea bhai...achha chalo ab ghar chalte hai.." said taani...

"ha...chalo-" he stop in mid when he saw a button in taani's chain.

"taani ye button??" ask rey holding her chain.

"um...vo na mere shirt me uski chain atak gayi thi...aur nikak hi nahi rahi thi...to button tut gaya.." said rey..

"ohk...achha chal sham ko milte hai..." said swayam..

"ya ok..." said rey and both hug eachother.

"chalo taani.." said swayam and rey acompany them till main door.

"bye ..." said rey looking at taani..."and take care..." taani smiled at him in reply.

"ek kaam karna tu sham ko mere ghar aa jana...hum sath me jayenge." said swayam.

"ohk.." said rey...

TaaYam start walking toward their car.

Taani was feeling some wierd emotions. She was feeling like something precious is going away from her. Suddenly she turn back to see rey and found him looking at her. She again smiled at him and then turn.

"whats happening with me??" thought taani but soon she brushed her thoughts away.

**************

TaaYam reach home in 15 minutes. Taani was lost in her thoughts. Swayam notice her. He open the door and both enter in the house.

"taani??" swayam call her..

"ji bhai..." said taani coming out of her thoughts.

"kya soch rahi ho??" ask swayam..

"bhai...vo me...soch rahi thi ki ...ha...me ..mujhe ye chot kaise lagi ...mujhe kuch yaad nahi bhai.." said taani..

"tum tension mat lo...bhul jao iss incident ko...jao jake rest karo..." said swayam...

Taani noded in yes and went in her room.

*************

TaaYam's parents were sitting in the hall with coffee mug in their hand. The atmosphere was calm. Window curtains were dancing on the rythm of wind. The only voice was coming from the sipping of coffee by mr. And mrs. Shekhawat.

After few minutes mrs. Shekhawat broke the silense.

"hope taani vaha thik ho." said mrs. Shekhawat in a worried tone.

"tum tension.kyu le rahi ho shikha. Swayam hai na uske sath." said mr. Shekhawat while taking a sip of his coffee.

"ha but swayam ko kuch bhi pata nahi na hi taani ko.." said mrs. Shekhawat..." kya hum taani ko abhi kuch nahi bata sakte. Vo andar hi andar mar rahi hai. Jab bhi vo mujhe uss bare me puchti thi me usse bata deti but phir mujhe guruji ki baat yaad aa gayi. Kya hum usse bata nahi sajte ki vo hi suhasi hai...guruji ki beti jisne taani ke rup me dusra janam liya hai."

"tumhe yaad hai na...vo humare kulguru hai...unhone jese kaha vese jab tak taani ki kalai(wrist) pe vo laal nishan nahi aata tab tak hum usse kuch nahi bata sakte." said mr shekhawat. He went near mrs. Shekhawat and put his hand around her shoulder.

"bhagwan plz suhasi ko jaldi se uske Arjun se mila do. Jab vo dono ek dusre ko pehli baar dekhenge tab unki kalai pe laal nishan aayega...aur uske baad hum unhe sab bata sakte hai..." said mrs. Shekhawat putting her head on mr. Shekhawat's shoulder.

"tum tension mat lo...sab thik ho jayega.." said Mr. Shekhawat.

*************

Taani was sitting on her bed and was thinking about rey. His care for her touched her heart. She know she was a stranger for him but he care for her so much. She felt safe around him. And while thinking her hand automaticly hold her chain which has rey's shirt button in it.

"are ye button..." thought taani and she try to pull it out of the chain. She try hard but it was not coming out of the chain.

"ufff...pata nahi ye nikal kyu nahi raha ." said taani..

She smiled looking at the button.

"rey kitne achhe hai...meri kitni care ki...mujhe apne hatho se khilaya...aur-"

"what the hell r u thinking taani?? Ek stranger ke bare me itna kyu soch rahi hai?? Kahin tujhe love at first sight to nahi ho gaya...vese bhi pehli baar dekhte hi tu unki aankho me kho gayi thi.." said taani to herself.

"nahi nahi...me kuch zyada hi soch rahi hu..." again she said to herself.

***********

-with swayam-

Swayam went in his room and changed his clothes.

Then he dialed sharon's number to inform about their plan.

"ha swayam..." said sharon in her sweetest voice..

"hi sharon...actually me and rey planned outing today. Vo kya hai na taani ko shopping karni hai. So it will be great if u nil and simmi also acompany me taani and rey.." said swayam..

"oh great...issi bahane tumhare sath time spend karne ko milega..." but then she realise what she said...she immidgetly change it.."i mean sab friends ke sath time spend karne ko milega aur taani ko jan ne ka bhi chance milega."

"ya...vo to hai...so today evening sharp 7 pm...at my home..." said swayam..

"ya...ok...i will be there with nil and simmi..." said sharon..

"vese ...if u want to spend some time with me...u knw...we can spend..."

"so...r u asking me out for a date??"

"tumhe kya lag raha hai??" ask swayam..

"mujhe...mujhe lag raha hai ki-"

"yes i m asking u for a date...so we can know about each other more...its like...u know...i wanna say that i like you..." said swayam.

Swayam heard a chuckle from other side.

"ok...so aaj sham...shopping date..we will shop together...and will talk about us too...and.."

"and..?? "

"and i like you too..." said sharon and she cut the call...

"hayeee..." said swayam and he fall on his bed dreamily.

**********

-With rey-

Rey was sitting on his bed and was thinking about taani. He was sitting with a heart shaped red pillow in his hands.

"kitni cute aur innocent hai vo...but kahin na kahin mujhe laga ki jaise vo kuch chupa rahi hai. Esa lag raha tha jese ki vo janti hai ki usee vo chot kaise lagi but batana nahi chahti.. There was pain on her face and in her eyes. But she is so beautiful...so anhelic.."

Suddenly rey stand up from.the bed and started talking with himself.

"rey...tum ye taani ke bare me hi kyu soch rahe ho?? Have you gone mad?? Kahin tujhe love at first sight to nahi ho gaya??" said rey.

"nahi nahi...esa kaise ho sakta hai...love...rey...tu kuch zyada hi soch raha hai...just stop thinking about her."

*************

-with taani-

Taani was trying to remove the button from her chain. Suddenly windows and door of her room closed automatically.

As she heard the sound of the door getting close she look at the door. Few minutes later she heard clock niddle voice a bit loud. She look at the clock but when she look at the clock her breath stopped in the middle. The clockniddle was moving anti clockwise and blood was dripping from the clock niddle.

Suddenly she heard the books moving sound..she look in the direction of the bookshelf. It was moving left to right and right to left. Suddenly Few books came flying to her but it didnt hurt her.

Then her eyes catch a sight. In front of her on a wall...someone was writting something with blood.

"USKE BARE ME SOCHO BHI MAT VARNA ANJAM ACHHA NAHI HOGA"

Everyletter was written with blood and the blood dripped from everyletter...it roll down through the wall and touched the ground.

Taani was so much scared seeing blood everywhere. She close her eyes tightly but there also she again saw swayam head in his hand covered with blood.

She immidgetly open her eyes and saw him in front of her...really close to her...

"aahhh..." she took few steps back and collide with bed end and fell on the bed on her back...

That spirit fell on her purposly...and hold her both hands...

"us ladke ke bare me mat soch samji...varna uske liye thik nahi hoga."said that spirit in dangerous creepy voice.

Taani was trying to get free from his grip. She was used to face him everyday now...so she was not scared seeing him very close to her.

As taani tried to get free he tighten his grip on her hands and in the next second both were in the air.

"ahhh...mujhe niche utaro.." said taani...

"niche utaru...thik hai...ye lo.." he left her and taani directly fell on the ground.

"aahh...aah.." she was screaming in pain. Her knees were hurt badly. She try to get up but it was so difficult to get up because of the pain.

"me kuch madad karu??" ask the spirit coming down slowly.

"tum chahte kya ho?? Kyu mera jina mushkil kar rahe ho?? Mera picha chod do plz.." said taani angrily...

As she said this his facial expression changed in anger. He went back and pull her chain from back...now her throat was chocked with the chain.

"aahh...chodo mujhe .." taani was trying to pull the chain from her side. But as she tey to pull it he pulled it more from back..

Taani was feeling lack of oxygen.

"oohuu..oohuu..." she was coughing badly.

"cho...chodo...mu...mujhe..." she was not able to speak properly.

When he felt to free her...he loosen his grip on the chain and taani felt relief. She start to take long breathes as he loosen his grip.

"abhi to tumhe ye sab tum 20 saal ki ho jao tab tak jhelna hai...uske baad to tumhe me apne sath lejaunga...mera matlab hai tumhari aatma ko...hahahaha.."he laugh and vanished from there.

The wall on which he wrote with blood it start vanishing and in few minutes the wall was as like as before. The books were also in the bookshelf now. And the clock was running in clockwise direction.

And when she try to move her legs , yes she can. The doors open again.

Swayam who was going in kitchen noticed taani on the floor.

"shona??" she called her as he enter in the room.

"bhai...aap yaha??" ask taani.

"tum yaha niche kyu bethi ho??" ask swayam and help her to get up from the ground. "bed pe betho na..."

Both sit on the bed.

"kya hua?? Itna dari hui kyu ho?? Phir se bura sapna dekha kya??" asked swayam worriedly.

Taani nod in yes and tears roll down on her cheeks. She hug him tightly. Swayam got scared when he saw her crying like this. Because she never cried like this before.

"shona...ro kyu rahi ho?? Kya hua batao??" ask swayam. He caress her hairs like a mom caress her child's hair.

Taani remember her dream in which the spirit had sw's head in his hand. She was scared...not for herself...but for swayam...

"plz batao...kya hua??"ask swayam and he broke the hug.

"vo...umm..ma papa ki yaad aa rahi hai.." taani lied.

"sach bol rahi ho na??" ask swayam and taani nod in yes.

"aww...mera baby..." said swayam and he again hug her. This time it was very protective hug from his side. "me hu na...tum ro mat...hum mom dad se baat kar lenge...ok??"

"hmm.." taani said..

"achha suno...tumhe paa hai aaj mene sharon se kuch kaha.."said swayam to divert her mind.

"wow...kya kaha??"ask taani ..she wipe her tears immidgetly inexcitement.

"yahi ki...i-"

"i love you?? Omg aap ne i love you bol diya??" taani almost screamed.

"nahi shona...i said i like her...actually i m not sure ki i love her or not..." said swayam. "and we decided to spend sometime together in shopping mall."

"wow...great...matlab shopping date...wow bhai...aap to bade majnu nikle.." said taani in her bubbly tone.

"tum bhi na shona..." said swayam and thought.."thank god iska mind divert ho gaya.".

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Precap: all in mall shopping together.

Taani and rey talk about that night.

Spirit's attempt failed to hurt taani..

And a horror scene.

Edited by .CuteKittyCat. - 12 years ago

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cuppypie121

@cuppypie121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

😲 i am the first one to comment...yipppeee!!!!

Superuuubbb update 👏

A bit horror but loved it

Thank god swayam ka possesive brother mode nhi kick hua 😆

Awww taani feels she is loosing something prcious

Ommmggg... Rey arjun hai!!!!!! Ab wo taani ko bacchae ga 😃

Taarey ki wrist par woh mark a chuka hai...now taarey need to know the truth!!!!!

Ughhh this bhoot...poor taani she might be damn scared

Loved the tayaam scene and swaron convo too

I get a feeling that swaron will help taarey in fighting against the evil spirit

Ps taani at the present situation kitne years ki hai?????? 😕

Edited by cuppypie121 - 12 years ago

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Naaz

@zulfinazi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

ooops sry res kare so jaga bhulgayi n dusra cmnt dedi anyways its k my cmnt is in nxt

Edited by zulfinazi - 12 years ago

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Naaz

@zulfinazi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#480

awsm updt
taarey talks was nic
rey ke shirt ka button uske chain se nikal kyun nahi raha bichari kabse koshish karri hai it was superb i really liked dat chain n btton prt
rey n taani thinking abt eachother was superb
so taani is 2nd birth
as guruji said taarey ke wrist pe mark aachuka hai
ab unhe jaldi sach pata chaljaye
oh god bhoot prt was scary
swaani scene was nic kitna care karta hai apni behan ka so swt
precap is nic
will taani tel abt wt hpnd dat night 2 rey
eager 2 knw dis time spirit ne kya kiya n hw it failed
updt sn

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