ArShi SS: Dhak Dhak Go!! REMOVED - Page 8

Originally posted by: tanu45

would like to read more...update soon.

Originally posted by: celinawalter

Meri Aalu!!! take a tightwala Hug🤗
Aahhh!!! Am i that transparent in being Smart!😆😆
and yeah i liked your style of narration! it was the natural, fangirlish one that we all relate to.
And yeah, you rightfully pointed out,"
who better than a reader would understand another reader!"
And i will be waiting for the update eagerly!

Originally posted by: celinawalter

unres!

i loved the update. no, its ok! i like your particular brand of story telling!
And now i get it, perhaps Garima did fake the drama. but what about Arnav's reaction? the way he decided to throw every piece of her jewellery of Khushi's back to garima, how are they gonna patch up???

Also i liked that Aakash's bold nature and his dialogues! i liked the rituals of Raizada's. kuch paasane ke bahane to milte hai!!!😳😳

Continue soon Aalu!!!

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..

Fantastic update

Anjali is such a tease

Originally posted by: Viji79

Res

I am unresing before I go on to read the next.

What I loved about the story is that it's simple, heart warming and most importantly has a loving arnav who has pined for khushi, who is otherwise living in hell.

I am truly happy that you have discovered your writing skills and finally given it a shape.

Congrats !!

Originally posted by: Viji79

Res

Unres

Shuttling between past and present is a good style of narration.

Arnav trying to hit sixer in the next available opportunity to be as close as possible to khushi brought a smile.

The way he took her throwing back all her jewels was true to angry ASR avatar.

In the middle of such a tense wedding, Akash is very focused. I hope Mami treats khushi well.

Overall, nice part 👏

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply fabulous
loved it,

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

thanks for the pm buddy...

but i had this big doubt ,,is khushi anjali r friends????how r they known to each other????

and arnav is so naughty ...

and even my dhak dhak also started...

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Mee


Soorryy 😔 Nd Thankyou 😳

Bcz bcz i unresd late wen u updted prt Two 😔

Nd thnku isliye Tu forum mein post ki 😃

Chal back to update

Hayee tu kya karne wali thi armaan nd khushi 😲

U serious 😡 ..

Bt bt i m glad armaan didnt come Nd arnav took d crct decision

Lekin armaan q nai aya 😕

I loved d way arnav Did carry khushi nd marry her ❤️

Ufff dat was My ASR 😈

His style to claim his thing

Lekin i wonder tu woh sab likhegi kya jo shadi ka baad hota hai ☺️ I hope u knw wat i mean 😳

Aalu thnkooojj 🤗 For posting dis 😃

I hope u like my cmnt 😕

Update toh tu already de di 😆 So no update soonish 😛

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

How come Lolwa is first in every update 😲 When she is offline also 😡

Back to update

Hayeee d scene were he carries was Awsm

I loved d possessive arnav .. 😳 who cared for his wife respect ..

He knew wid d raizada surname khushi aunt wil be sweeet to her as homey he left no stone for dat aslo

Poor he if he had a chnce lehnga bhi de deta 😆

Did khushi accpets arnav wholeheartedly ..I knw its to early to assume

Bt is dere a chance of romance.. 🤔

I loved d teasing arnav .. ❤️

I loved d update aalu ji ❤️


Update soonish 😳

I m waiting for dere first night nw 😈

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Tu ne meko mention nahi kiya 🥺

*wipes her tears, drops her shoulders, picks her bags up and moves away from here with a heavy heart*

Originally posted by: suwin

awesome update...

Originally posted by: pup03

amazing story.. came across it today.. loved it.. 😃