ArShi SS: Dhak Dhak Go!! REMOVED - Page 9

Originally posted by: Skiran

Aalu 🤗 Res 😃

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Aalu❤️ for writing and Lolwa🤗 for making Aalu write this story 😃

Khushi made Arnav's heart go dhak dhak just hearing her name😳 And what a description of her eyes, nose and her smile

He is feeling bad that he missed seeing her day and night 😉

Khushi was admiring Arnav and suddenly remembered that she is getting married to another guy 😆

Khushi's Groom didnot come to the mandap, she had to hear the curses of Garima and other. But Arnav came to the rescue and married her 😃 now dare anyone say anything to Mrs.ASR!

Loved it Aalu🤗

Originally posted by: Skiran

My previous comment UnResd here


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Khushi sat beside Arnav when Armaan's family came to see her..kahi pe nigahe kahi pe nishaana 😉 And Arnav placed his hand on her waist 😳

Arnav couldn't see Khushi in tears, promised to keep her happy always ❤️ so sweet

Gruhapravesh rasam discussions of Akash and Anjali were funny. Arnav carrying Khushi and their talk was cute 😳

Awesome Update Aalu..waiting to read more

Originally posted by: mints23

M! 😃

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So sorry Aalu for the late unres... But police aunty was at duty!! I am in awe that such a talent was hidden behind all the craziness... What the!! Loved this story... from the word Go! Loved how you have described both Arnav and Khushi... especially with pictures... The whole wedding scenario... of the groom missing... the chaos and waiting... worried parents and an embarrassed bride... was perfectly described...

And then jumps in our saviour Arnav Singh Raizada to marry his pretty, beautiful woman... saving her from disgrace and the society. Though he is happy to marry her... already smitten by her!! Garima is even happier to get an awesome son-in-law... Good job Aalu!! This is truly exceptional... I am enjoying this story already!! 😃

Originally posted by: mints23

Ahhh another cute chapter Aaliya!! Loved the flashback... and Arnav's thoughts about Khushi... His family is totally crazy... teasing and chatting away while doing the rasams of the wedding... So Khushi blushes when Arnav praises her... Why is he so surprised... I wonder why he hasn't noticed how he affects her too... I love the way you use emoticons in the update... It is so typically you!! Very very cute!! So now that Arnav has picked up his wife and carried her to the mandir... I hope after the prayers we get to see a little bit of their suhaagraat!! I am curious to see how you have written those parts Aalu!! 😳

Unresd my earlier post... 😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100722498

Originally posted by: nirmal1992

aww...fab cs!!...i m already in love wid dis arnav!!...(as if i was nt before):D:D😛

part 2 was fab!!...

flashback was beautiful!!...seems lyk arnav was totally smitten by khushi!!...😳

n our own teasing n giggling anji!!...loved it...;).

well back to d present...whr he gave away all khushi's jwels to garima so tht she cant do d drama again!!...wow!!...go my boy!!...;)

thn my fav raizada family!!...

d family ritual!!...aahhh!!...my fav one!!...;P😆

n thr begins d dhak dhak!!...awww...😳

cant wait for d nxt part...(suhagraat whch means)😉

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Read both the chapters!

Firstly, I hate Garima :P

Secondly, I love ASR <3

Thirdly, you write amazingly well! :D

Continue soon babes<3

Originally posted by: ranogill

very interesting

Originally posted by: rajiarshian

Love it 🤗
Thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: ...Iyla...

Firstly, i love the way you add ur thoughts in the middle enclosed in brackets! Thats u!😆

The flashback was so cute...And the present very confusing! Hope to get it cleared...

And the lifting waala scene i mean the ritual was so cute and Anjali teasing...😆

Do continue soon !

~S

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu

haha...Thank You !!! 😳 you know me very well !! 😉
confusing, but why? any clarifications from ma side?? 😕

I will, or else VS would not leave me!! 😆
Thank You so much!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: ...Iyla...

How they ended up marrying each other! In the flashback they were'nt actually engaging, na?

Originally posted by: ...Iyla...

How they ended up marrying each other! In the flashback they were'nt actually engaging, na?