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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
aww...fab cs!!...i m already in love wid dis arnav!!...(as if i was nt before):D:D😛
part 2 was fab!!...
flashback was beautiful!!...seems lyk arnav was totally smitten by khushi!!...😳
n our own teasing n giggling anji!!...loved it...;).
well back to d present...whr he gave away all khushi's jwels to garima so tht she cant do d drama again!!...wow!!...go my boy!!...;)
thn my fav raizada family!!...
d family ritual!!...aahhh!!...my fav one!!...;P😆
n thr begins d dhak dhak!!...awww...😳
cant wait for d nxt part...(suhagraat whch means)😉
Edited by nirmal1992 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
nice start read all parts in a go
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Read both the chapters!
Firstly, I hate Garima :P
Secondly, I love ASR <3
Thirdly, you write amazingly well! :D

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Reserved for my comment
Once I can get my foggy brains working
Good morning Aalu 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Firstly, i love the way you add ur thoughts in the middle enclosed in brackets! Thats u!😆
The flashback was so cute...And the present very confusing! Hope to get it cleared...
And the lifting waala scene i mean the ritual was so cute and Anjali teasing...😆
Do continue soon !

~S
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Love it 🤗
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
the story is very interesting LOLWAsAALu ..

though i have read it .. sorry i coud nt cmnt properly ..

does nt seem its yur frst story 😛


ths is awesome .. ⭐️


keep writing !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

mine

*unres*

Prologue

Arnav is so head over heels fallen for Khushi...Love at first sight huh...and Khushi...God...she to was checking him out like anything... WOW...


Character Sketch

Arnav...A man who respects women...and I am in love with him NOW...
Khushi...why so many proposal got rejected...is it because people considered her unlucky...what the hell...how was her parents died...hows that possibly b her fault...
Anjali...she seems like a sweet elder sister...and I think she is gonna play vital role in ArShi love-life...kyun ki our Anjali Di hain sab se sheyaani
Armaan...good face choice...Aaliya JI, mujhe nahi pata kaise, lekin usse jaldi se nikaal de naa, okay...
Garima...she hates Khushi, okay fine, I hate her too...no matter what the reason may be...
Shashi...poor man...but he should have at least that much gut to support his orphan niece...
Lavanya...Kyun Aalu...kabab mein haddi kyun layi...lekin its okay...usse bhi hum handle kar lenge...

and Banda means husband??? tu ne banaya, ya phir saach mein...


Chapter 1


I so hate Garima here...how can a woman be this sensitive...that too to someone almost a daughter...its disgusting...
Poor Khushi...I felt so bad for her...she must be feeling too dejected...
Arnav...Man...he is AWESOME...the way he married Khushi...so dramatic...oye hoye...i wanna hug him plz...
lekin how will their relationship gonna go ahead from here...none of them no the other at all now...at least not enough to lead a life together...they both have a long way to go to start a proper life...


Chapter 2

the flashback...it was really nice, in spite her rishta was getting fixed with someone else...and Khushi, she is so affected by him...
and our angry young man is really fabulous...too sexy when he is angry...
and the family tradition...ufff...every family should have that tradition...
Khushi doesnt shies away from him, at all...that a real good sign...
and now what...suhagraat...well they cant have a proper one right now naa...may b some times later...hopefully...

by the way, Aalu, have a confusion...is Garima her massi, or chachi, or both...

if I know before u write so well, i would definitely married you...poor me...

chalo, u better continue soon darling...


AREY WAO KYA BAAT HAI!!!
That's for your last before comment 😉
The more your comment got lamba the more my smile did the same 😆
I so love you for this comment, it's just too awesome 🤗
'Banda' is a word I introduced 😆
Garima is her...mmm...not decided 😆

Thank you for loving my work!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Me

I loved it...will be back to comment...


Unres


Hayee...my favourite new author ...wah wah...loved the character sketch especially the part where he respects women...I love him already...
I loved their mutual dhak dhak...each time they came in close proximity to each other their hearts start talking to each other it seems ...in perfect symmetry ...both are attracted to each other but for obvious reasons cannot do anything about it.

I loved his possessive for her and how he is jealous of her ' Banda' and is cursing himself for not taking the opportunity to meet her before when he could have but then who can change destiny ? He is really too sexy...

I loved how he takes off all jewellery and wants nothing from her mayka...good movie...loved how he is hurting for her and is angry for the humiliation she has to face for no fault of hers and then he promises to keep her happy ...

Loved the graha pravesh and how everyone is waiting to welcome them having wanted her as his always...and I loved how his concern is for her feelings,,he is so sensitive to her feelings like that ritual might make her uncomfortable so he wants to avoid it,..so sweet yah. Then love how they feel for one another when he carries her and how he feels optimistic of what he thinks he can read in her eyes for him...lovely...my heart was melting...

Now waiting for a cute morning after,...but am sure nothing will happen in the SR ...as he will first give her the chance to adjust to what happened...and that she is his wife...for ever...

Oh and I love your comments in the brackets ...


Hayeee!!!! My favorite commenter ❤️
Lol...am happy that you are loving your Arnav more 😉
It's going to be a Dhak sdhak morning 😆

I am grateful to you!!! Thank you for liking it!!! 🤗
Extra wala love to my beauty 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: aquagal

Res
I'm blind, seriously🤢

I loved the flashback. Hayyeee so sweet!!! Khushi sat next to him with him almost touching her waist.. 😳 But almost changed into reality now with them getting married and him fulfilling the tradition and picking Khushi in his arms. ☺️ Uff the eyelocks and dhak-dhaks ❤️
I'm happy that Arnav didn't keep anything of her family and left the jewellery there itself. Lehenga looks nice so it was smart of him to keep that. Khushi looks lovely in this lehenga.
Manorama mami is for a change nice here to Khushi even if its for her selfish motive. 😆 I like her here.
Anjali is amazing. Finally her wishes are getting fulfilled. Khushi is her Bhabhi now. 😉
Now time for some more dhak-dhaks. It's ss..ssuu..suhagraat



And a romantic morning-after 😉😳




Gutter Gal 😆
oye!!! ma ASR isn't greedy, he knows to make more beautiful lehengas than this 😆
ss...ss...uuu..hhaa... will be interrupted 😆 they are too sleepy yar can't you see how tired Khushi is 😃
and a Dhak Dhak filled morning i guess 😳

Thank you for being early 😆
and Thank you for liking ma work !!! 🤗

P.S: I am loving the pics

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