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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

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Posted: 11 years ago

I apologize for the inconvenience but due to unforeseen reason there won't be any blog in the near future. If I ever decide to have the blog you will be informed.

With Love,
Aalu 😃

Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 9 years ago

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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

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Posted: 11 years ago

I apologize for the inconvenience but due to unforeseen reason there won't be any blog in the near future. If I ever decide to have the blog you will be informed.

With Love,
Aalu 😃

Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 9 years ago

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

for the prologue ..

yu have dissected her face aalu 😆

her eyes , the curls reaching her eyes , her lips , her smile , yu hv described so perfectly .. fr a moment i thought that its actually arnav telling his feeling while looking at khushi rather than some aalu :P

will unres rest later

Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 11 years ago

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 11 years ago

yeee!!...u did it!!...ILUD!!...🤗

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Mee

Soorryy 😔 Nd Thankyou 😳

Bcz bcz i unresd late wen u updted prt Two 😔

Nd thnku isliye Tu forum mein post ki 😃

Chal back to update

Hayee tu kya karne wali thi armaan nd khushi 😲

U serious 😡 ..

Bt bt i m glad armaan didnt come Nd arnav took d crct decision

Lekin armaan q nai aya 😕

I loved d way arnav Did carry khushi nd marry her ❤️

Ufff dat was My ASR 😈

His style to claim his thing

Lekin i wonder tu woh sab likhegi kya jo shadi ka baad hota hai ☺️ I hope u knw wat i mean 😳

Aalu thnkooojj 🤗 For posting dis 😃

I hope u like my cmnt 😕

Update toh tu already de di 😆 So no update soonish 😛

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

res unres

I am so happy for you sweetheart! ❤️

you are amazing sis.. wonderful job⭐️⭐️

amazing prologue and super amazing start!!👏👏

lol.. arnav was lost in khushi... hayye and khushi in arnav!!

hayye.. their dhak dhak... so sweet!!

really liked it, how they noticed each other... 👏

hate garima.. poor khushi.. after so many proposal when she had to marry, that guy run away??😡😡 idiot kahi ka!!

more idiot are those persons...!! who were talking bullshit about my khushi... but they don't know, her marriage proposal didn't got accepted coz, she is MEANT TO BE FOR ARNAV😳😉

btw... there is any problem with khushi kya?? that's why so many person's rejected her?? hope not!

OMG... arnav married khushi... shabash arnav.. I am proud of you...

they got married to each other and now their new life will start..

their new journey

you got to post next part soon.. warna.. mai tujhese badi gundi hoon😡😉

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

aaj mausam hai suhana

aalu ke first ss post karne ka hai bahana

la la la la

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res

I am unresing before I go on to read the next.

What I loved about the story is that it's simple, heart warming and most importantly has a loving arnav who has pined for khushi, who is otherwise living in hell.

I am truly happy that you have discovered your writing skills and finally given it a shape.

Congrats !!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you for the dedication...🤗

I loved it, poor Khushi's fate being cursed, my heart was breaking for her and and the way that Garima spoke to her and about her while she helplessly was sobbing wondering if she was really unlucky.

And then your dashing Romeo ASR..wah wah what an entry you wrote for him in his 3 piece giving Garima such looks that if looks could kill she would be dead.

I liked how your described everything ...

I liked how he could not bear to hear anything more about Khushi, who he secretly had liked and loved how he marries her not caring for anything than her self respect.

Loved how no one dares to question him and his authority and loves his she is unsure of her future ...I am so glad that man she was to marry did not turn up...I love the whole sindoor and mangalsutra part and how he says no one can speak ill of his wide,...reminded me of that scene from the show when he stopped Bua ji from hitting her...

I liked that his family was happy as they like Khushi and thought she is Perfect for him...but missed the rituals...now I am waiting to see how they adjust to their new relationship ...and how they adapt to each other ...

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Second page😭😡
I HATE U!
Res!

Edited!

Aalu meri jaan, first congratulations on posting your first ever work 😃
Now to the prologue and part one..

I loved how you've started with the story. Introducing the characters not only by your writing but also their pics be it their eyes or lips 😉 Arnav likes her, she also gets dhak-dhak when he's near. Then why yeh dooriyan?

Part 1

What's wrong with khushi? Why were people taunting her sooo much? I was so glad when arnav came as a savior to save her from all the humiliation. Of course it came as a shock for both families, but I did see that they somewhere in their heart they were happy for this couple!

Khushi didn't say anything because according to her, she'd done enough to humiliate her family and so she accepted what arnav did silently, for the time being. But how will she react later on? When they will be left alone?

Am off to read next now!😛

Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago

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