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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much for all who liked ma work and commented
Hmmm...I still can see silent readers 😭 *sigh*
Lol...I can't believe Likes have increased 😆 Thank you Thank you!!
Dedicated specially to My Jaswa and My Kiranwa 🤗
One more clarification, I am not fluent in Hindi, so i have mistaken something which is Garima being Khushi's Chachi here not Maasi 😳 But let it be!! Everything is fair in Love and war!! 😆
Nishu Thanks for that 🤗
As to how Khushi and Anjali are friends, I will be putting up that too!! No worries!!

Chill and read!!
Hope you guys won't dislike it *fingers crossed* 😕




Chapter 3 - An Unexpected night




Unlike the other brides she had her Dupatta around her neck, hairs curled and she didn't have any of her jewelries on. She was sitting there on HIS bed with her legs folded up to her chest. She has been wandering freely in RM just as her own house since college times, except a room: that was Arnav's room. Anjali has always restricted her from entering his room and once when she questioned her as to why she shouldn't enter that specific room she use to say "It's my Chotte's room, he doesn't like people wandering in his room not even Nani." That is when the nick name she has given for himslipped off her tongue 'Laad Governor,'. From that day onwards, many a times she has tried going in to the room but always failed. But she wished to see her Laad Governor's' room at least from a near, just to see what's so special in it that makes him to forbid people enter his room.

But now when she is sitting in the very same Laad governor's' room, she didn't even dare to raise her eyes and look at the room which she was desperate to see. From the time she entered the room she was just staring at the floor or to be precisely 'Bed', it was only once she raised her eyes from the time she entered the room, that was when she wanted to talk to Anjali

~~~Flashback~~~

When she entered the room Anjali reminded her about her mischief

Anjali: Remember you always wished to have a look at Chotte's room?
She just nodded in the affirmative

Anjali: Now it is going to be your room forever, now you will be seeing it for a whole lifetime.

That came as a sudden blow to her; she doubted if she would be his wife for this whole time, because she believed Armaan would come back as she knew he loves her. Anjali seated Khushi on the bed with her lehenga skirt spread beautifully around her as it is done to any normal bride. But was she as any normal bride?? That was when she raised her eyes.

Khushi: What is the need to do this? I am not like the other usual brides

Unknowing to her, her tears started flowing. When Anjali noticed her tears she nodded negatively and wiped off her tears.

Anjali: No Khushi, it's enough of your crying now. From today...ah haa...Not from today, from this moment I only wanna see you smiling. Do you get that? I know that you and Chotte won't be like any other usual lovey dovey couple but at least you guys can give it a try, right?

She saw Anjali's eyes twinkling with hope and happiness, which made her think if she was really happy with the marriage. Just to confirm she asked her,

Khushi: Are you happy with this marriage?

Anjali: Of course yar, I and Nani always wished you to be Cho...

That was yet another blow to Khushi and she as usual widened her eye and Anjali realized what she told. She bit her tongue and she smiled meekily, which surely made Khushi laugh.



Anjali: Urrmmm... Khushi...I...mmm...I think Chotte is waiting for a long time...I...I will send him in.
The thought that Arnav would come in made her heart go DHAK DHAK and she forgot her laugh.

~~~Flashback Ends~~~

She saw him sitting close to her with some 3 inch gap. She was breathing hard and he started coming closer to her, she did not have an idea as to what she has to do. She didn't move an inch: she was looking down and suddenly she felt him trailing his nose on her tender neck and she reacted,

Khushi: No!!!!


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She saw no one near her, which meant that Arnav was still out of the room. And she realized that it was nothing much than her usual imagination, she let out a DEEP and a LONG SIGH. And the next moment she heard the door knock and he entered. She wondered that why did he knock, but she didn't dare to ask him; because she was still scared if something like her imagination would happen. But to her surprise something else happened,

Arnav: Urmm...I...I think I will sleep on the recliner (pointing towards the recliner)

He took some pillows and moved towards it not before saying"I am sorry." For the first time Arnav Singh Raizada apologized to someone and that was his own wife. And he is feeling uncomfortable talking to her. He was scared if she would question him as to why he married her for which he didn't have an answer as of now.

Khushi: A Sorry' cannot undo everything right?

And he was left shocked, he turned to see her and he saw the sight which he hated to the core of his heart, her tear soaked face. He left his pillow and ran towards her.

Arnav: No Khushi, please don't cry...whatever I did was for your good, please don't misunderstand me.
He explained trying to hold her, but got a grip before he did

Khushi: I am talking about something else.
She replied wiping her tears
He gave his trademark one-eyebrow-raised look, which she always tried to do but failed as always. She used this as an opportunity and asked him,

Khushi: How do you do that? She asked pointing towards his eyebrow

Arnav: You were crying for this? He asked pointing towards his raised eyebrow.

Khushi: Urmmm...No

Arnav: Then ???

Khushi: Actually I thought something wrong about you. (She started crying again) I...I...I...

Being the stupid Khushi that she is, she told him the thought that she had before he entered the room, he wanted to laugh at her thought but he suppressed it. She thought he would shout at her as Anjali always says, but she found him moving towards the recliner and leaned down while she was just looking at him, and when he turned: she saw him SMILING, she was left shocked:😲😲He saw her looking at him and he added fuel to the burning fire,

Arnav: What are you looking at? You want your thought to come true or what (he said chuckling)

She was left speechless, till now she has never seen this side of him. He is JOKING. Gosh Arnav Singh Raizada is joking and she broke into a smile alongside an eye-lock, which lasted for some minutes until Khushi lay down on the bed to have some rest after an exhausting crying-full day. She felt a little light hearted; she didn't know why, whether it was for escaping a handful of her Maasi's curses or if it was because of SOMEONE's smile. And she dozed off with only one picture flashing in front of her, HIS SMILING FACE. It was a peaceful night for Khushi while a LONG NIGHT for Arnav; not only today but from the day he had first seen her. All those sleepless nights were thinking about her as to how he will bear up seeing her with another man and today it was because he couldn't take off his eye from her. She looked even more beautiful when the moon light flashed on her face, he declared.



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Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

unres'd for chapter 2 on page 8 ---> here

comment for chapter 3
OMG... you dedicated it to me.. why?😕😕
but kuch bhi... thanks☺️
loved it.. such a sweet update
khushi is indeed a different and beautiful bride
😆😆 khushi was curious to know about Arnav's room na, and she got to live in it.. for forever
but the way you showed how she badly want to go there and see this 'mysterious' room of chote.. but isn't able to
hehe.. idiot Anjali was just about spill the beans😆😆 bt stopped herself at time
omg... khushi... where's your mind and especially Aalu ji.. where's your embarrassment now *raising an eyebrow*
lol.. raising an eyebrow se yaad aaya.. loved how khushi asked arnav how did he do that... and was shocked seeing joking and smiling at her, but she doesn't know what she is for him😉
aww, poor arnav, couldn't sleep all night... was busy admiring his newly bride😉
continue soon
aalu ji😡😡
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
aalu


Awww aalu u skiped our part 😆

U r crazy do u knw dat 😛

I loved how u described khushi feeling

Her awkardness her curiosity

Her feeling for first night

Aalu . I wish she realizes soon dat she loves arnav nt armaan

Who didnt show up on his own marriage 😡 Bloody cheepo

Waisa acha hua nai aya toh

High my asr how much self cntrl he ha e wid him

Nt to make her uncomfortable he slept on Dat sofa. 🤔

He was laughing raising eyebrow

Sab kuch ek hi updat mein U wil be d death of mine one day 😡

I swear aalu mjhe woh de jo tjhe acha nai lagta aftr all ek din tjhe v wohi krna hai jo aaj khushi ka saath hota 😈

So strt practising 😆

Lovely update Aalu ji ❤️ 🤗

P.S were is ur lolwa 😕
Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Hum bhi!! 😃

Edited:
Awww I loved how you have described Khushi sitting on the bed and thinking of their past... Something that had been forbidden for her in childhood was now her reality!! The flashback between Anjali and Khushi was cute... Anjali teaching her bhabhi about her Chotte's room... and incidentally blurts out how she and Nani had always wanted Arnav to marry Khushi... 😳

Khushi really is thinking wild... her imagination is totally rocking... I hope it comes true!! Is she really waiting for Armaan to come back?? It was so nice to see an understanding Arnav... his teasing and flirty behavior is fun to read... I am loving how this story is progressing AAlu... and sorry for the late unres!! I know you have already read for the next update... but I will directly comment now!! 😃
Edited by mints23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
mine

***unres***

Khushi is so sweet...beautiful...u've described her so beautifully...
loved the flashback Aalu...so she always wanted to see HIS room, but couldnt, now that very room became HER(their) room...
her naming him Laad Governor was nice and apt...
Anjali is really a sweet sister and great friend...I am loving her...
Khushi's imagination...OMG...Aaliya Singh Raizada, ab kaha hain aapki innocence??? U r not so innocent after-all...hain naa...
what i loved most is Khushi told him what she imagined...she is so innocent...
and Arnav...he is so gentle, understanding, supportive and caring to her...different than his usual behavior to others...love him for this...
fabulously written...waiting for the next part...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Awesome Story.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.
I hate Garima.😡😡😡
Why does she curse Khushi so much?😡😡😡
Arnav is nice to Khushi which is great.👏
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love ...waoo such an awesome story ! 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love the way you described Khushi sitting on the bed and thinking about her past. She had an eye on Laad governor's room before when she was in Shantivan 😉

Anjali is sweetheart, soothing Khushi's pain and assuring her that everything will be fine. Her slip-up on liking Khushi as Arnav's wife is cute 😊 The pic of Anjali is perfect for the scene 👏

Khushi has some wild imagination 😉 Her conversation with Arnav is cute 😳 Arnav asking her if she wants her imagination to come true was awesome 😃

And your 😲 😲 for Arnav made me 😆 thinking of typical Aalu 😉

Awesome Update Aalu ⭐️ and thankyou for the dedication 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you described khushi's feelings really well
so khushi was always curious so to see Arnav's room and her imagination (no comments ) loved d arnav a warm guy
and innocent khushi asking arnav how he managed to crock one eyebrow
so on the whole awesome work dear
Edited by arsneh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Two pages later...😭
Aalu, it is so so lovely ...what a lovely chapter. I guessed correct that nothing will happen tonight...
But loved how destiny has a way of making things happen in a way that no one ever expects it too...

And when one door is shut a window/door is opened for you...and in this case it's not just any window or door ...it's to Arnav's room which incidentally she always wanted to see and now she gets to live in and co own it. And incidentally now when she has the opportunity she is so preoccupied that she does not take that opportunity...

Loved the flash back of how she christens him LG.

I love how she remembers that and it's sweet of Anjali to help ease her and make her comfortable by reminding her of happier times...and the way she sits on the bed and like a bride but unlike a bride ...and under some difficult circumstance, and also preparing her for the future and the expectation ..also loved how Khushi gets surprised that Anjali wanted her as Chotey's bride.

Her thoughts of ASR entering the room and the way he comes to her and then she suddenly breaks out of her dreams and then when he actually enters like a gentleman he chooses to sleep on the recliner...so sweetly he was teasing her and she felt comforted by his smile and teasing.
And what naughty thoughts in her head...tell her to be patient ...soon that will happen too...

I love how he cannot stop staring at her and is so happy to get her in his life finally...

Overwhelmed by his support and his kindness she finally is able to rest peacefully after all the turbulence she experienced ...

One sec she thinks that Armaan will come back...? 😲

Oh and yes, Khushi was so sweet, naive and innocent to tell him her thoughts about him...ha ha 😳
Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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