ArShi SS: Dhak Dhak Go!! REMOVED - Page 3

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply amazing
loved it,

Originally posted by: jas0308

aaj mausam hai suhana

aalu ke first ss post karne ka hai bahana

la la la la

Originally posted by: suwin

amazing👏

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Thank you for the dedication...🤗

I loved it, poor Khushi's fate being cursed, my heart was breaking for her and and the way that Garima spoke to her and about her while she helplessly was sobbing wondering if she was really unlucky.

And then your dashing Romeo ASR..wah wah what an entry you wrote for him in his 3 piece giving Garima such looks that if looks could kill she would be dead.

I liked how your described everything ...

I liked how he could not bear to hear anything more about Khushi, who he secretly had liked and loved how he marries her not caring for anything than her self respect.

Loved how no one dares to question him and his authority and loves his she is unsure of her future ...I am so glad that man she was to marry did not turn up...I love the whole sindoor and mangalsutra part and how he says no one can speak ill of his wide,...reminded me of that scene from the show when he stopped Bua ji from hitting her...

I liked that his family was happy as they like Khushi and thought she is Perfect for him...but missed the rituals...now I am waiting to see how they adjust to their new relationship ...and how they adapt to each other ...

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

thats cool and simplle yet complicated

looking for ward fr next

Originally posted by: Sanz.

Super Amazing :)

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

That was really nice meri jaan! <3

Originally posted by: aquagal

Aalu 🤗
Finally you posted it here...
As I said before too it's lovely.
Be it their first meeting where both of them got lost in each other or later when Arnav felt so many emotions because she was being cursed by her own aunt.
Arnav is a stupid romeo - never met Khushi all these days when Anjali asked him to do so and then without consulting anyone just pulled her, filled her partition with sindoor and made her wear mangalsutra. 😆 Super-fast boy but I liked it. He couldn't hear anyone saying ill about his Khushi. 😳
I'm waiting for Khushi to react now. Would she be happy too with this marriage? Would Arnav tell Khushi why he married her?
Aalu.. well done.. maza aa gaya...
I loved the flow of the story.😛

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu

And that is going to be my favorite comment from ma favorite person!! 😳
I am glad that you liked it! 😃
Of course that three piece scene was ma favorite too!! 😆

I hope you will like the up coming parts too!! 😕

Thank you so so so much!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: celinawalter

Aalu 🤗
Congrats on your Debut ss!!!👏
it was good, and i can see some good promising concept ahead! i liked your syle Story Narration what with all zoomed in pics and the very beautiful facial description of the lead character. then i liked the start of the story too... well, there are some points i would liked to get clarified?

where was the marriage taking place? in some Village, and who are Raizada's to Gupta's?

Arnav-- our Romeo aka ASR- the business tycoon!! married to Khushi in such haste!!! God, is his mind work from his Knees? Can't he see the girl is already shocked, wouldn't it have had been better to announce to marry her, rather than just do it without any recitals of mantras???

Also, if it would have happened then what would have had been the role of ASR in Arnav? Right?

garima--- what's her problem? i can understand from where she is coming? but last line about her made me confused. She is happy to get rid of Khushi or had she planned all that shouting and had noticed Arnav's interest in Khushi from before, so now she did all this drama?

Need i demand for some clarification in next update Aalu or a note???

i am looking forward to the story to unfold...
its fast in pace and i like it thus too...
so waiting for the next update!!!😊