ArShi SS: Dhak Dhak Go!! REMOVED - Page 5

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu

Hayyyeee!! YOU ARE LATE 😡

My Romeo isn't stupid Gal 😡

You will know it, very soon 😳

Thank you for liking it!! 🤗

I commented on the day itself in CC 😔
Did I say him stupid? But sometimes he does all that stuff to extract such adjectives from me. 😆
But now that he has married his Juliet, he isn't stupid anymore. 😉

Res
I'm blind, seriously🤢

I loved the flashback. Hayyeee so sweet!!! Khushi sat next to him with him almost touching her waist.. 😳 But almost changed into reality now with them getting married and him fulfilling the tradition and picking Khushi in his arms. ☺️ Uff the eyelocks and dhak-dhaks ❤️
I'm happy that Arnav didn't keep anything of her family and left the jewellery there itself. Lehenga looks nice so it was smart of him to keep that. Khushi looks lovely in this lehenga.
Manorama mami is for a change nice here to Khushi even if its for her selfish motive. 😆 I like her here.
Anjali is amazing. Finally her wishes are getting fulfilled. Khushi is her Bhabhi now. 😉
Now time for some more dhak-dhaks. It's ss..ssuu..suhagraat



And a romantic morning-after 😉😳

would like to read more...update soon.

congress for your debut ss aalu
awesome narration dear
wd special aalu touch
zoomed pic effect was also great
so on the whole
i loved it

prologue
so arnav regretting not meeting khushi earlier poor guy and now she is getting married to some other guy and he can't do anything
and arshi are attracted to eachother
character sketch
garima hates khushi to core hope you have proper explanation for it
and on reading name Armaan i thought it would be ksg bt no it was some other banda i don't like him
and not even care as long as our arshi are together
also may b it would b error or my mistake
bt why did u write arnav used to respect ladies
part 1
so Armand didn't turn up on marriage why????
i hate garima to the core how can she accuse khushi
hero in action married khushi
part 2

loved d flashback part
and typical aalu touch
and arnav made khushi return all jwellaries to broke d bonds between khushi and garima
aakash naughty devar
loved it

great going dear

unres!

i loved the update. no, its ok! i like your particular brand of story telling!
And now i get it, perhaps Garima did fake the drama. but what about Arnav's reaction? the way he decided to throw every piece of her jewellery of Khushi's back to garima, how are they gonna patch up???

Also i liked that Aakash's bold nature and his dialogues! i liked the rituals of Raizada's. kuch paasane ke bahane to milte hai!!!😳😳

Continue soon Aalu!!!

comment for chapter 2

Fantastic update

Res