ArShi SS: Dhak Dhak Go!! REMOVED - Page 2

thats cool and simplle yet complicated

wow...love you dammit Aalu...oops, Aaliya Singh Raizada...

Aalu 🤗 Res 😃

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Aalu❤️ for writing and Lolwa🤗 for making Aalu write this story 😃

Khushi made Arnav's heart go dhak dhak just hearing her name😳 And what a description of her eyes, nose and her smile

He is feeling bad that he missed seeing her day and night 😉

Khushi was admiring Arnav and suddenly remembered that she is getting married to another guy 😆

Khushi's Groom didnot come to the mandap, she had to hear the curses of Garima and other. But Arnav came to the rescue and married her 😃 now dare anyone say anything to Mrs.ASR!

Loved it Aalu🤗

thanks for the PM 😃

That was really nice meri jaan! <3

Aalu 🤗
Finally you posted it here...
As I said before too it's lovely.
Be it their first meeting where both of them got lost in each other or later when Arnav felt so many emotions because she was being cursed by her own aunt.
Arnav is a stupid romeo - never met Khushi all these days when Anjali asked him to do so and then without consulting anyone just pulled her, filled her partition with sindoor and made her wear mangalsutra. 😆 Super-fast boy but I liked it. He couldn't hear anyone saying ill about his Khushi. 😳
I'm waiting for Khushi to react now. Would she be happy too with this marriage? Would Arnav tell Khushi why he married her?
Aalu.. well done.. maza aa gaya...
I loved the flow of the story.😛

Aalu 🤗
Congrats on your Debut ss!!!👏
it was good, and i can see some good promising concept ahead! i liked your syle Story Narration what with all zoomed in pics and the very beautiful facial description of the lead character. then i liked the start of the story too... well, there are some points i would liked to get clarified?

where was the marriage taking place? in some Village, and who are Raizada's to Gupta's?

Arnav-- our Romeo aka ASR- the business tycoon!! married to Khushi in such haste!!! God, is his mind work from his Knees? Can't he see the girl is already shocked, wouldn't it have had been better to announce to marry her, rather than just do it without any recitals of mantras???

Also, if it would have happened then what would have had been the role of ASR in Arnav? Right?

garima--- what's her problem? i can understand from where she is coming? but last line about her made me confused. She is happy to get rid of Khushi or had she planned all that shouting and had noticed Arnav's interest in Khushi from before, so now she did all this drama?

Need i demand for some clarification in next update Aalu or a note???

i am looking forward to the story to unfold...
its fast in pace and i like it thus too...
so waiting for the next update!!!😊