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Aaliya Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: rajiarshian
Nice

I think you are fulfilling ma request 😆
Btw, Thank you loads!! 😃
That means a lot!! 😳

P.S: Your DP is awesome 😉

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Aaliya Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Poushali2011
continue soon...
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I assume it as u liked it!! 😊
Thank you!! 😳
Will surely Continue soon!! 😃

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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Loved the start

Continue soon 😊

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Aaliya Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..
Loved the start
Continue soon 😊

THANK YOU!!
That's so sweet!! 😳

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Aaliya Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

I would Like to Thank Everyone who liked ma SS!!!

What else would a Debut writer like me would want!! 😳

THANK YOU!!!

Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 11 years ago

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Aaliya Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I apologize for the inconvenience but due to unforeseen reason there won't be any blog in the near future. If I ever decide to have the blog you will be informed.

With Love,
Aalu 😃

Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 9 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Who reses on 7 and 8 posts of the page...😲

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

I apologize for the inconvenience but due to unforeseen reason there won't be any blog in the near future. If I ever decide to have the blog you will be informed.

With Love,
Aalu 😃

Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 9 years ago

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

mine

*unres*

Prologue

Arnav is so head over heels fallen for Khushi...Love at first sight huh...and Khushi...God...she to was checking him out like anything... WOW...

Character Sketch

Arnav...A man who respects women...and I am in love with him NOW...
Khushi...why so many proposal got rejected...is it because people considered her unlucky...what the hell...how was her parents died...hows that possibly b her fault...
Anjali...she seems like a sweet elder sister...and I think she is gonna play vital role in ArShi love-life...kyun ki our Anjali Di hain sab se sheyaani
Armaan...good face choice...Aaliya JI, mujhe nahi pata kaise, lekin usse jaldi se nikaal de naa, okay...
Garima...she hates Khushi, okay fine, I hate her too...no matter what the reason may be...
Shashi...poor man...but he should have at least that much gut to support his orphan niece...
Lavanya...Kyun Aalu...kabab mein haddi kyun layi...lekin its okay...usse bhi hum handle kar lenge...

and Banda means husband??? tu ne banaya, ya phir saach mein...

Chapter 1

I so hate Garima here...how can a woman be this sensitive...that too to someone almost a daughter...its disgusting...
Poor Khushi...I felt so bad for her...she must be feeling too dejected...
Arnav...Man...he is AWESOME...the way he married Khushi...so dramatic...oye hoye...i wanna hug him plz...
lekin how will their relationship gonna go ahead from here...none of them no the other at all now...at least not enough to lead a life together...they both have a long way to go to start a proper life...

Chapter 2

the flashback...it was really nice, in spite her rishta was getting fixed with someone else...and Khushi, she is so affected by him...
and our angry young man is really fabulous...too sexy when he is angry...
and the family tradition...ufff...every family should have that tradition...
Khushi doesnt shies away from him, at all...that a real good sign...
and now what...suhagraat...well they cant have a proper one right now naa...may b some times later...hopefully...

by the way, Aalu, have a confusion...is Garima her massi, or chachi, or both...

if I know before u write so well, i would definitely married you...poor me...

chalo, u better continue soon darling...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

I loved it...will be back to comment...

Unres

Hayee...my favourite new author ...wah wah...loved the character sketch especially the part where he respects women...I love him already...

I loved their mutual dhak dhak...each time they came in close proximity to each other their hearts start talking to each other it seems ...in perfect symmetry ...both are attracted to each other but for obvious reasons cannot do anything about it.

I loved his possessive for her and how he is jealous of her ' Banda' and is cursing himself for not taking the opportunity to meet her before when he could have but then who can change destiny ? He is really too sexy...

I loved how he takes off all jewellery and wants nothing from her mayka...good movie...loved how he is hurting for her and is angry for the humiliation she has to face for no fault of hers and then he promises to keep her happy ...

Loved the graha pravesh and how everyone is waiting to welcome them having wanted her as his always...and I loved how his concern is for her feelings,,he is so sensitive to her feelings like that ritual might make her uncomfortable so he wants to avoid it,..so sweet yah. Then love how they feel for one another when he carries her and how he feels optimistic of what he thinks he can read in her eyes for him...lovely...my heart was melting...

Now waiting for a cute morning after,...but am sure nothing will happen in the SR ...as he will first give her the chance to adjust to what happened...and that she is his wife...for ever...

Oh and I love your comments in the brackets ...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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