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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is a new two/three shot , i hope you all like it , do comment and like , it means a lot. I would be updating when the reviews cross page 5.


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Kria's Pov

I walked into the ballroom with that beautiful gown. Everyone had their eyes on me . I walked with confidence and elegance. He turned , and was awe struck to see me. I felt my heart beats grow faster as he advanced towards me.

He forwarded his hand , and I took it blushing. We danced beautifully. With each step , the envious looks of all the girls present there to me ,just started increasing. But I did not care , all I cared was to drown in those brown orbs and never save myself from them.

My eyes closed , and our lips were just some inches apart. When the clock struck 12. And I moved back in shock.

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I woke up due to the alarm. Damn this , couldn't it wait for that kiss to end. I blushed thinking about the dream , with the guy who had captivated my dreams , since the day I had seen him.

He was perfect in all senses .The killer looks , the amazing talent in dance , the charm , that million dollar smile , he had them all. And to top that his rich class status , not that I fell for that.

And me? An imperfect person. No , I do not hate myself , I love myself for what I am , I love being imperfect , but it's just that when I see the perfection he has in all fields , I feel like a looser. I am not conscious around people , I just be who I am , but when he is around , I grow so conscious , that I think twice to even open my mouth.

Initially I had loathed him . For me , he was rich spoilt jerk. But all my views changed on that day , the day when he had saved me from his sick friends who were in all mood to rag me.

I could have protected myself , I was going to. Kria ghai does not take any shit against herself , but he came before I could say anything.

Well no we didn't become friends , neither did we speak to each other. Shrugging my thoughts , I get up and went to freshen up.

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Rey's Pov


I walked inside the college , and as usual , every girl had their eyes on me. Why won't they I was the most popular guy in college. I was perfect in all senses , and I was proud of that! Why shouldn't I be? I have the looks , the charm , the money everything.

I was a jerk , and I didn't mind that. Because I loved being one. The only time I had been nice to someone was when my friends had given me a dare to help someone. And to my luck , my great friends were ragging a girl. Oh! How much I wanted to rag her as well.

But all for the sake of that stupid dare , I had to help her. Later I got to know that she was some Kria Ghai. We never spoke to each other not that I wanted to speak to her.

I was walking past the rehearsal hall , when I saw a girl dancing. Boy! She looked hot , her steps were so perfect . I walked inside , and pulled her to myself. She had her eyes blindfolded , but she didn't stop her dance. I danced with her . I thought I had seen her somewhere , but I don't think St.Louis had such an amazing girl dancer.

I looked at her face , her small nose , her luscious lips , her slim body , the intoxicating flavor of her hair , she seemed perfect. But who was she? We stopped as the song came to end. She touched my face , her touch felt so fragile.

"Who is this?"

I didn't reply , and took her in a kiss , the girl was shocked it definitely seemed so. But she soon melted , who wouldn't except if he is a guy! I broke the kiss.

"The dream of every girl."

And saying this I walked away.

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Hope you all liked it.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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😉 😉
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Awesome start dream
How much badly she want to kiss him hahahahaha
He is perfect and she is imperfect combi nyc if dono perfect honge tho kaise chalega
Both of them pov amazing
He want to rag her but unfortunaly he had to help her poor rey
I know she is kriya and wht rey done kissed her wow agar usko pata chala tho she will die sure
Awesome
Fab
Amazing
Waiting for the next update
Edited by pradeep_maurya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing concept
kria faltu me hi rey ko acha samaj ne lagi jabki rey ko dare mili thi
n rey
boy hands off to u
u dance with a blindfold girl n than kiss her
n uperse bola dream of every girl
cant belive it
love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the concept ...!
Amazingly written ...!
Can't wait to read more of your work..!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the concept was amazing...

kriya is dreaming.. that also of rey...

wow'...this is superb...

loved it..

pls update it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomee start👏
rey helped kria coz of d dare😲
and d gal n d rehearsal s kriya isn't t😳
continue soon😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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again new works... well the pov of both are great and amazing well start...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
luv it👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome
Kria ko laga rey ne uski help ki par woh apni dare puri kar raha tha
Cnt sn
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Nice concept.. Great start! Continue soon :)

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