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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor kriya!!! 😭 😭 😭
Bt wen sm1 who u think u cn turn upto doesnt even bother to look at u or care for u...it pains really v hard!!!!
Zyada philosophical ho gaya na?! Koi nahi!!
It was grt!!!
For d 1st tym dis 1 didnt have looong povs from both d sides!!!
She is already broken by her father n here rey is making it ol d more difficult for her!!!
Well he did bring d kiss in btwn cz may b she will let it out!!!
Bt dat frustrated her more!!
Thnx for updating wen ur exams r taking a toll over u!!!
N plz read well!!! N do ur best!!!
Will wait for d update bt dnt put ur book down get to ur gadgets to update ur story! Got it?!!!
Gud nw bbye i m gonna go to my reading!!! Cz even i have exams around dis week!!! Bbye for nw!!! N happy preparations!!! Go n give ur best!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part ..
Loved it ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
rey is so dament to kno kriya fther
witing fr nxt
cont oon
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Posted: 11 years ago

i really loved the chapter ishana.
amazing idea of adding father's day. ❤️
loved the plot.
thanks for the PM

PS. short comment EXAMS!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
jst all the parts yaar...it was jst awesome...ireally liked it alot...too good...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update..
kr getting close day by day..
loved their moment..
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazinggg part👏
waiting for d nxt part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 11

Kria was extremely mysterious. She was like a puzzle, which I was ever ready to solve. I had been a bit guilty for asking her about her dad. I know how it feels when you're parents somewhat abandon you , that is the main reason I am this jerk. Anyways I will know what secret kria is hiding, I will definitely come to know.
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The gang including kria , and me were in the rehearsal hall. Sharon and swayam had just finished their practice. It was mine and kria's turn. We both were dancing , when sharon's dad entered.

"Hello everyone."

Sharon's dad was just like a buddy to us. We all smiled , I felt kria stiffen. I gave her a confusing look , she rolled her eyes.

"Dad , meet kria."

Gautam uncle seemed a bit shocked to see kria , who I am sure gave a fake smile to him. He smiled back.

"She is our new friend. She is the girl I was talking about."

"Oh! Nice to meet you kria."

"Same here UNCLE."

Kria's tone was sarcastic , and I think even swaron noticed the stress on uncle. I was hell confused , another mystery added to Kria. Gosh! I swear if I solve her mystery , I will feel like Sherlock Holmes. My thoughts were interrupted by gautam uncle's voice.

"You all continue your practice. I just came to speak to sharon. This reminds me , after your dance competition , I am throwing a part m you all are invited."

Gautam uncle had a weird habit of throwing random parties , this was another one of them . So party means that I will get time to put my plan in action. He spoke to sharon , I noticed kria being highly fidgety.

"Kria ,you fine?"

"I need to leave."

She went away.

"Strange."

Sharon said. Gautam uncle looked at me.

"She insulted you right?"

"Yeah."

Why is he asking this? And why did he have that strange look on his face.

"As much as I know you rey , you won't be friend her so easily. Any hidden motive?"

"Uh , no uncle. I am actually very guilty about what I did."

I am dead sure , he understood I was lying. I gulped.

"I really hope you mean it."

Man! I wish I meant it. But no i didn't mean it. Because no matter how caring I get towards her , pr for that matter start loving her , I won't leave my plan stranded , cause my revenge is my first priority.

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Sorry for the short update! BUT EXAMS! I WILL NOT update till 20th. Please please share this work with your friends , I would really appreciate to get some more comments. And guys you will get an update after 20th so please don't spam my work by saying update soon , not that I mind , it's just cause of the forum rules. J

Hope you liked this update.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmmm
kria n sharons dad was behaving quite oddly
i think kria was his daughter or something or may be they knew each other n nit in good relation
but rey to kuch jyada hi intrest le raha he kria ki life me
Nice update
Edited by kriapatel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
I hope soon rey will solve d mystery ..
I think kria n Sharon's dad know each other n maybe in kria's past he is involved ..
waiting for d next update...
will be waiting..
giv a long update after ur examz plzz... !!!

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