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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

this concept of urs is super amazing...nd different too...

seriously ishu...superb...dream girl of evry guy...nd the one who took her nights away...great going...
note...: i hv noticed a drastic turn in ur writing skill


Aapne mere purane works padhe na? 😛 Yes , i have tried to improve it , and all thanks to so many amazing writers in this forum , and my English teacher. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Nice start :)
OMFG she was dying to kiss him :O well at least he did
Rey shouldn't have done that
I hope this doesn't break Kriya's heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! Superb!!

Kriya dreams of rey n her dancing together?!!

Kriya doesnt take any sh*t which is great!!

N rey is a jerk! Well dat myt nt help him wid kriya!!!
He saved kriya from being ragged! -good thing..
Ol bcz of a bet!! -unacceptable!!

Chalo rey knws dat sm kriya ghai exists!!
Rey n kriya danced! Wid kriya blindfolded!! Intersting!!

WHAT???!!!! Rey kissed her!!! Widout even knwing her!! He just kissed her bcz she danced so well!!

Well u r ryt! He is a jerk!!

Bt kriya let him?!! Wth!!! 😡

N wen she asked whos dat? He just answered as d dream of every gal!!! Seriously!!

N one doubt! Was kriya's face recognizable? Had c removed her blindfold n watched him go? If she reappears in front of him, will he recognize her? Atleast as d gal he kissed? Or atleast as d gal who made him kiss her wid her o-so-great dance moves?

Clear asap!! So update asap! Plz!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
awesome start...
hayee kria wanted to kiss him...
toh kya huva she is imperfect n rey is perfect love is not about being perfect...
rey doent feel anything for her...
he just helped her bcoz he was given dare...
sooo bad...
rey is fidaa on kria's dance n kissed her...
hope he will soon fall for her...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
page 6 😃
update plsss...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Ohkay so i have decided to turn it into a drabble series. I don't know how many parts it will compromise of.


Part 2

I had come a bit early to college. So I decided to rehearse for a while. I changed into my rehearsal clothes , and went to the rehearsal hall.

I put the blindfold on my eyes , and started dancing. As I was dancing , I suddenly felt someone pull me , and I banged into a muscular chest. I was about to push him away from me , when he started dancing with me.

The steps , they were same as my dream. Was it him by any chance? My thoughts came to an end when the song stopped. I touched his face .

"Who is this?"

And I was shocked , when I felt him kiss me. What the hell! How dare he do that. But I felt myself give in , why? I don't know. The kiss was magical , as if it was rey who was kissing me. I pulled back. And I heard him say.

"The dream of every girl."

He was reyaansh! I am definitely sure . How dare he kiss me so abruptly. Yes , I like him and I even replied to the kiss , but how can he kiss anyone like this. Bloody Casanova. I removed the blindfold , and stared at myself.

I ran away to the locker room. Tears were flowing down my eyes , and I don't know why. Maybe cause I was angry at myself to let him kiss me! What if that man would not have been reyaansh. I looked at myself. And wiped my tears , suddenly my anger was replaced by a blush. The thought of him kissing me came back in my mind .

Urgh! What on earth is wrong with me. Well mr.reyaansh ,by this kiss , I understood you are kind of a jerk , with a caring heart. And you need to give me an answer to your actions.

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I walked to the atrium and saw rey with his friends. I went to him with no idea about what I will speak in front of him. I cleared my throat. He turned.

"Oh! Miss. Kria ghai? What do you want? Or my gang ragged you again? Gosh! Guys , why didn't you call me? Iss baar toh koi bet thi hi nahi. "

"Huh?"

Was all that came out of my mouth at that time.

"You didn't get it still miss.ghai? Gosh! I am not a guy who will save anyone from ragging , I love ragging people , and I so wanted to rag you. But they had given me a dare to help you. So I had to. And if you think I am interested in you , then you are wrong."

I was hell angry! And no my heart didn't break , of course I knew this guy can never love any one , but it came as a shock to know that he wanted to rag me! Jeez , do hell with you reyaansh. And suddenly I knew what I should do.

I smirked at him. He looked at me confused. I took his collar and kissed him , I could hear gasps , and then I pushed him slapping him hard , I said.

"Tit for that , mr.oh so called dream of every girl."

And I turned and left from there , with my head held high , and a proud smile on my face. When I said , kria ghai does not take shit from anyone , I meant it!

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Last part , after page 10. Sorry for the small update , I am in no condition to type anything right now. Suffering from cold .

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

this is awesome

loved it

Edited by khusbooluvarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
nyc start...like it...jerk but perfect rey n imperfect kriya...nyc combo...rehersal hall main dance n dn sidha kiss...wow...wanna c hw it turns out to b...do write soon...n sry for late comment...waz away frm if...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Woah!!!
Didnt expect that but it was kinda cool
This kriya is completely awesome

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