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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Story

Woapsiee dis nihaal is sucha jerk

knew sharon whud be knowing the truth

Loving rey's concern for kria

Ahmazing job

last part ka last line

I am coming to tkae my jaan back from you...so loved it

but what next

eeepso cliff hanger

Update Soon please ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates :)
I really liked the ShaRey bit
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Posted: 11 years ago

Btw guys , I had a reason for choosing the stalker's name as Nihaal. Can anyone guess it? ;)

Part 25

I picked the call.

"Hello rey , police station aao. Abhi!"

It was gautam uncle. I gave Sharon a look of assurance and ran out. I drove there , and saw gautam uncle and the police man coming out.

"Kya hua uncle?"

"Nihaal ka call trace hogaya hain. Kria is in some abandon godown!"

I nod. The ride to the place seemed very long . I just wanted to kill that Nihaal , and take kria far away from him. I looked at gautam uncle.

"Sharon knows."

Gautam looked at me , and sighed.

"Rey , is she fine?"

"Yup , tensed about Kria."

He nods and looked away. I closed my eyes , and kria's crying face came in my mind. She must be so scared. I am coming sweetheart.

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Kria's Pov

He pulled me to him. I tried to free myself . Nihaal took hold of my hands. Come one untie it and get a good punch on your face. He released the rope , his grip on my wrist was tight , I tried to free myself but I couldn't! He tied it behind a pole.

I gulped. Nihaal slid his hand under my tee. I tried to kick him , but he was holding my legs. I sobbed. Rey , where are you? Please aajao.

He removed the cloth which he had tied on my mouth. He kissed all over my face. Yuck! Tears rolled down my cheek , as he was going to kiss me. I sobbed badly.

I closed my eyes. I heard the door open , and nihaal was pulled back. I looked around. Everything was blurred with my tears. The ropes were untied. And then I felt someone hug me.

"You fine princess?"

It was dad. I didn't want to reply , I was too exhausted. I closed my eyes. That's when I heard his voice , and my eyes shot open.

"How the hell did you dare to touch her!"

Rey stood there beating the shit out of nihaal , and the police trying to stop him.

"Rey?"

I said slowly. Rey turned to me. I smiled at them , and then drowsiness took over me , and I fainted.

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Rey's Pov

We reached the place . The police broke the door. I went numb , nihaal was on top of kria , who was crying. Anger shot in my blood. The police pulled him back and I just lost my anger.

I started hitting him , they tried to stop me , but I didn't. How dare he touch her! Nihal was bleeding , almost unconscious now , but I didn't stop , that's when I heard her whisper my name , and I turned.

She smiled at me and then fainted. I ran there.

"Kria?"

Gautam uncle pulled back , I pulled her close to me. Tears formed in my eyes seeing her state , and then I picked her up.

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We reached gautam uncle's house. I had held her close to me throughout the journey. He opened the door. Sharon saw us.

"Maine kria ka karma saaf karwa dia. Udhar lita do."

Sharon said. I smiled at her. She was tensed seeing kria unconscious. Gautam uncle spoke.

"Sharon , are you fine?"

"Of course dad! In fact I am very happy to know , that my sister is alive. I just want to know the truth."

I smiled , and then Sharon took me to kria's room. I placed her on the bed. I went outside and Sharon changed her clothes. The doctor came soon and checked her up. Giving the necessary medicines.

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The next morning. I woke up , in her room's couch. I looked around and saw Sharon sitting beside kria stroking her hair. Sharon smiled at me. That's when kria woke up in shock.

"DI!"

She screamed. I was going to go to her.

"Ssh , am here sweetie."

Sharon pulled her close and stroked her hair. I came to her. She looked so scared. Where was my strong kria? Kria looked at me.

"Baatcutter."

She hugged Sharon tighter and told her something which shook me to the core.

"Tell him to leave di. I don't want to see even his face!"

***

Hope you liked it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
res

unres...sory for d delay...

haash...finally dey found Kriya before dat jerk could do anything...

It was suprb wen Rey beat the hell out of Nihaal...

he deserved it...truly...

OMG...she fainted...

m glad shes fyn now...

soo Sharons not atall upset...dats cool...

she is taking care of her like old days...

now why did she say dat to Rey...

dont tell me its some memory loss...

did she went back to earlier days whr she hated Rey...

nooo mahn...aabhi aabhi toh unki kahani aage badi thi...

arrrggghhh...dat Nihaal...bloddy kabab main haddi...

kharab kar di humare KR ki story...

PS: I think u took it as Nihaal because of d Paanch character Nihaal...dat serial on V...dats what I felt wen u used his name...my prediction...do tell wen u give the next update...
Edited by reyaditi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
wonderful update
but y is she angry with rey
update soon pls
Edited by nature-beauty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres...
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Ab kya Hogaya? Kriya Rey ko kyun push kar rahi hai??

Is she thinking that he is Nihaal?

Jo bhi hai... Jaldi update kariyo!
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb
rey and her reach on time
loved it
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
what now..??

god ab kriya ne esa kyu bola..???

btw awsum update loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ...

Finally kriya mil hi gyi...

i knew it..

haye abhi sab thik ho rha tha toh kriya ko kya ho gya...

suspense...

amazing update..

loved it..

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...But i wonder what Kria meant...
Cant wait for the suspense to be reveled... continue soon :)

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