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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dnt b upset...ders no bad in ur writings...i dont undrstand y dnt u get d reviews...u write soo very well...
comming to d update...it waz very well written...i think rey vl start falling soon for hr...todays scene showd dat...
donno how his revenge plan gonna turn out to b...
kriya is not gonna get hurt coz she knws d plan...buh i wish she shouldnt b devastated by hiz plan...hoping for d best...ty for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update :)
I loved reading Rey's POV
WOW Kriya's dad is rude
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nycc update...:)
But its vei short...: (
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one
Kriya has a secret. ...good
Rey and kriya both are attracted to each other but don't want to accept it. ...double good
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Posted: 11 years ago
d update was fab..
loved it..
rey's genuine feelings towards kriya😃...
n d way he was admiring her nose.. 😆
Kriya is definitely a strong girl...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the way story is going..
rey is becoming soft towards kria
n kria relized that rey is not that bad..
reyz n kriaz pov was well written..
kria is indeed a very strong girl..
amazing update..
loved it..

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update ishu
haha rey finding her nose cute
loved it
but ye kria ka dad kaisa hai
ishu baby there is no fault in ur writing u rite amazingly
my lyk button isn't working toh mera like count kar lena
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 8

I have never hated rehearsing so much as I did today. Why? Because of that devilish angel in disguise rehearsing with me. She was a bloody sin! How could someone be so sinfully beautiful? And how am I controlling my emotions? I don't know! I am blank.

She looked at me , with her big brown eyes , they had a sense of innocence , pain ,determination . Rey! Get a hold on yourself , why are you reading her eyes?

"Rey?"

"What!"

I said in annoyance. She narrowed her eyes. I shrugged.

"Practice over for today kria."

I went , without waiting for her reply.

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Kria's Pov


Bloody ass , he is so mean. Whenever I feel myself softening towards him , he does some shit! At least he could wait for me to reply. Whatever! Am going, this guy is nuts!

I was waiting for an auto to come. When a car stopped in front of me. Sharon came out of the car.(Batao batao kis kis ne socha rey hain?)

"Kria , come on I'll drop you. It's late."

"I'll go on my own Sharon."

"Oh come on! Am I not your friend?"

"Of course you are Sharon. Why do you think so?"

"You talk so normally with everyone . But your formal with just me!"

I sighed. Only if she knew.

"You think so , I don't."

"Then you will come inside the car."

These two best friends really have the same blackmailing ideas! I raised my hands in defeat , and we sat. The driver started the car.

"Rey likes you."

He is that good an actor? Or is Sharon a part of his plan? No! Sharon's not that kind of a girl, I know her. I gave her a "I don't care Look" look.

"One week doesn't decide whether he likes me or not. Neither do I care."

"Ooh , you know hatred first step of love."

"You're crazy Sharon! Where on earth did that Diva disappear?"

"I am no diva! I just use it as a shield you know."

"I guessed it."

Her phone rang. It was swayam. I told the driver the way , we reached my house. I said bye to Sharon and went.

I closed the door with a bang , and slid down. Tears fell down my eyes .

"Stop crying idiot! Stop it. You're no weakling Kria Ghai! You're not! So stop it.

"Kria?"

I looked up and went numb to see rey.

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Rey's Pov

I know it was wrong on my part to shout at her. So I decided to go and say sorry to her , you know it would help me somewhat in my plan.

I climbed her window , and she wasn't there. Her security desperately needs a change! She came in and slid down crying. Man! What the hell! Why was she crying so bad?

"Kria?"

And she looked up at me numb.

***

Hope you like it. Don't worry kria's character is not going to go weak. She just needs to put her strong guard off sometimes doesn't she? Next update seriously after page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago
res😆
unres
yipieee finally atleast 2nd position toh mili
ishu baby i love u for updating this 😃
thanks a lot
coming to update
it was superb
hahah bechara rey concentrate nahi kar paa raha
kria angry young lady
i loved the way she gets confused
kria ro kyun rahi thi yaar
aur uska uar sharon ka koi connection toh nahi
hayee rey sorry bolne aaya
ye achha hai pehle daant lo phir sorry bolne aao
but update was awesome
update next part soon
Edited by Aanchal_Kreya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love the way that you keep on leaving it a cliff hangers...!
can't wait for the net part...!
wondering what is going to happen.!
please update soon

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