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Posted: 11 years ago
all ur updates have been simply superb
pls dont think that i was nly liking it without reading it.
i was hitting like for ur updates and was not able to comment coz i was busy for the past 4 to 5 weeks, thats the only reason.

but at the end ur drabble series are quiet interesting totally unpredictable yet romantic and aggressive.
will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahaan! i am catching up a little now!! pheww, exams, you know :/
anyways sorry for the late comment :P
now coming to the update,
this story is taking turns and i must say, i love em :P :D <3
so, will be waiting for the next update and the story to proceed further!
update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
ye page toh khatam kar hi deti hun :P
jaldi update please!
ek baar padhne ke baad wait nahi ho raha :P ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
tell me one thing, from where do you get such ideas n concepts? :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
woah what happend to the pms?
Read last 3 chapters!
Missed alot.
Great as usual, story is progressing ;)
Krisha sisters ^_^
I wanna read on!
hurry hurry 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 13


"Juhu beach? Rey seriously?"

"Kria ghai , I know even you're a rich spoilt brat , but kabhi kabhi na apna high class status chodkar chaupati par maze karo."

I looked at him. I wasn't spoilt , yeah but i hardly ate street food. I am actually shocked to know that rey loved having street food , it's so not him. He held my hand and dragged me to the pav bhaji stall , we ate almost everything there , I enjoyed it there.

I had never seen rey so excited , he dragged me everywhere and showed me everything like an excited 5 year old kid. I knew that rey wasn't doing this for his plan , and so I was actually enjoying it.

Finally our stomach were full and we were enjoying in the water. When my eyes fell on a "baraf ka gola" stall.

"Kria?"

"Mujhe voh khaana hain."

I said , I had never tasted it. But had heard a lot about it. So I wanted to have a taste of it. Rey smiled and we went there. We were eating , when I saw rey smiling at me.

"What?"

"Kria , you are such a kid."

He took out his napkin and wiped the kala khata juice that had spread on my mouth. I gulped , we were too close. He stared at me. Our eye lock was broken by a kid who had by mistakenly pushed me , my gola fell down.

"So-sorry didi."

"It's fine."

The kid ran , I stared at the gola sadly , when I saw one in front of me.

"You can share mine."

I smiled and we ate. I was very happy seeing this side of rey , care free , without any ego and any reputation to maintain , he was just himself. And I was actually glad that the canteen didn't have ice cream.

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Rey's POV

I had shared my craze for street food with any of my friend , but I still don't know why I shared it with kria. Those few hours spent with her were amazing , cause for the first time I hadn't thought about the revenge and just made her happy.

Because I wanted her to be happy. One thing I knew was that even if I couldn't let anyone hurt her , yet my brain would shout for the revenge.

We were in my car.

"So how did you find our date?"

"Our date?"

Kria looked at me confused.

"Yes , it was a date na!"

Kria smiled at me and then gave me a smile.

"It was awesome and I loved it rey. Thanks a lot."

"My pleasure."

We reached her home , and kria came out. I looked at her.

"Come out rey."

"Kya hua?"

"Aao na!"

I came out confused , she stood in front of me and kissed me. I was shocked for a second , but I pulled her close. She broke the kiss in few seconds.

"Dates don't end without a good bye kiss."

She winked at me and was going to go when I held her hand and pulled her to myself. I gave her a long kiss on her cheek. And hugged her. We both were in that position for few minutes , it was a passionate hug . She pulled back , we weren't at all awkward with that hug. I smiled at her.

"Bye."

"Bye rey."

She turned and left. I smiled. Maybe I had actually started liking kria , but curse my mind , even I have started hating it now . I turned and walked away.

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Kria's Pov

I don't know why I kissed him , but it felt so right. Our hug it was passionate and in his arms I actually forgot all the problems in my life. I didn't want to break the hug , but had to unwontedly. I smiled at him. I wished I could replay this day again.

"Bye."

"Bye rey."

I turned ,blushing I entered my house , I danced in joy. I knew he liked me as well , but that revenge won't make him understand it. Sigh! I hate his brain.

***

Hope you liked it. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I doute who kria knew rey so well kya wo pahlese ek dusre k jante he kya? like bachapan ke bichade dost plz clear my doute n love the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res wait I've missed out on much and then I'll unres this

Unres!!!

Ahh! Okay I don't know how many chapters I read but I loved all of them...

The juju beach segment was cute... Kind of.

And the kiss at the end... cherry on the top.

Update soon.

Desperately waiting.

And don't forget to PM me...
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates
I missed the last ones
loved the way its going on
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was fab...kriyaansh enjoying street food...without faking anything...loved it...kriya loves him so much na...nd she knew she is gonna get hurt...still this girl is so very strong...
kiss at the end...cherry on cake...continue soon

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